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    Drive By Music.

    Blues console the tunes; the roots that few would know
    Pushing mid-40s on the smoothest roads, stuck on cruise control
    Summer bonds of youth and old, but a decoy for the better
    Humid weather brings feuds together. The war of the eras
    Where one argues its misusage; the other argues to prove it
    While some embrace the change, an inarguable movement
    A part of the music, is the art of influence,
    But if we spar with their heart's we're scarring congruence


    Take a left on 80s Rd.

    I ride with the pedal down. With set eyes on the ghetto
    The birth of Hip Hop - The Bronx comprised in its borough
    To liven this threshold we rounded so later,
    Our block parties were founded on flavor, the sounds of Jamaica
    Would be the grounds of behavior. Styles and breakbeats
    Remixes funk inspired with DJ's - Their techniques
    Would bless streets directly; Rare disses and thrashing
    Disco and soul samplings, constant mixing and scratching
    Innovation was happening; Unraveling growth, mold
    With techno in Detroit and the capital's Go-Go
    Miraculous flow, prose; MCs were a mere display
    Breakdancing, graffiti art... Hip Hop was here to stay.

    Expressway to 90s West

    I move with a shift and.. one of the moodiest pivots
    Into ludicrous critics mentioning lucrative lyrics
    Irreputable mentions misconstruing our spirit
    Disputable limits.. refusing so you can all hear it

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    Rapping meant closure... some were flabbergasted, exposure
    Illmatic wrapped up the East; The West was grasping the culture
    Grabbing, like vultures.. profanity, confrontational sounds
    Fuck the Police, Cop Killer - were foundational grounds
    Its display was profound. Never compromising, improvements
    Were never made - their long struggles were disguised in the music
    Supplied to their students; Constant belief in their words
    Estranged parents - grief was absurd, the beef on the curbs
    Violent streets were a blur - and its consistency showed
    Never pitied the blows; how gangsta rap has continuously grown
    Until tension - repeatedly shown.. startling for our sake
    And MCs as role models were apart of the heartaches
    Death at a sparked rate - a menacing rhythm
    That beat to the unsolved cases exposing the glitch in the system
    Envisioning wisdom in the future, but the vision was dead
    Becoming a victim of a commercialized prison instead
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    Millenium Road (Under Construction)

    Almost on empty. Windows fogged.. confusion, distraught
    A pool full of foolishness plots where it's cool to get shot
    Or over launching your dues while trying to stomach the feuds
    Plummeting sales, but it's 'Who has more money than who'
    The specifics have changed.. it's all big businesses, fame
    Productions limited to club critics and the lyrics? The same
    Uncontrollable slaving, yet we're scolding our models
    Dissing those who paved and molded the road that we follow
    Samplings now stolen or borrowed - Ignorance condone the disgrace
    Bamboozled.. we've now put the minstrel shows on display
    Where we clone the clever. Eventually never known or better
    Or they kind of make it - and sale more ringtones than records
    Got away from our rapping. Now, we're getting paid for our fashion
    Tighter shirts and Pop Rap are being portrayed to the masses
    Stagnant mishaps and habits.. too passive to serve us
    We're so wrapped in that big hit - a mere classic's unheard of
    Owners then actors, factor in idiots - there's laughter
    Rappers trying to sing and singers are rappers
    People are bored. We're in need of a legend
    I can't drive forward because this road is reaching a dead end



    Drive By Music


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    Re: Drive By Music.

    I would like to say this piece was unique...Why you ask? I can feel this unlike I feel other writes. I loved the wording throughout it and spotted quite a few multies, which makes me happy :P. Anyway, you presented this piece with a sense of history and also with a sense of art. Great job, keep at it my man.
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    I already pretty much said what I wanted to say about this in this weeks RHYME mag but yeah, this was probably the best written piece I can recall reading of yours. The wording was really smooth and the rhymes complimented it rather than overpowering it. That is the summarized version lol.

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    Re: Drive By Music.

    RB has an affinity for not reading the good pieces. I've read many pieces with the same concept, but you may have done it the best. As the pieces went on, it got better and better, which is not the norm - most pieces get weaker as they go. This was a really solid drop and probably the best I've read in a couple months. Nice job again, Nique. OMHOF, if that even still means anything to you. lol.
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    Re: Drive By Music.

    awesome job. i can tell a lot of concrete thought was put into this piece my friend. read it through and you kept up the pace from beginning to end. very strong. definitely hall of fame worthy. i could hear some good beats in my head while reading, nothing beats an educational piece eh. lol. well, not much to say but im impressed, good stuff, keep it up.

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    Re: Drive By Music.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...sh-337881.html
    first off, this is for you. please and thanks.


    and now ...



    ..wow nice, definitly enjoyed the read. i love how you show us how much rap music has changed. it's gone from meaning and making political movements and classic hits, to fashion shows and getting a number one hit. it's very true and a very original take on the "hip hop is dead" type topic. most original i've seen yet. but to correct your unhappy ending, the classic rappers ARE starting to come back now :\ lol. they may not fit the trend anymore, but they're coming back! nice read, most def HOF worthy.

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    great stuff
    well put together
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