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    Writers Block

    havent posted on RB in a long ass time. got bored and decided to drop a little something something in my old stomping grounds. so heres a little free verse jump off. inspired by the subject. much respect to all that read. enjoy.


    writers block

    what is there to say
    when nothing is left to be said
    creativity robbed for all its worth
    a growing field of imagination
    set ablaze by flooded attempts at uniqueness
    the infinite supply of ideas
    now overwhelmed by demand
    an epidemic dry spell engulfs the writer
    the ink is full yet the pen remains motionless
    the quill has seemed to float away
    leaving the page abandoned
    however still ignorantly awaiting
    to become a work of art
    the canvas has been blank
    only painted with dust and solitude
    the artist baron of ambition
    free will became what the writer feared
    a stereotypical human resource
    ultimately exhausted and depleted
    words of beauty have been replaced
    by scripted diction stripped of substance
    and the scribe is left to belief
    his time arrived and was embraced
    only to slip through his fingers
    like grains of sand when time has ran out
    a second coming is in order
    an unstoppable and undeniable offensive
    mounted against all that is not Unique
    those burnt fields cultivated once again
    set to flourish without restraint or limit
    the writer will once again imagine
    and through such a powerful concept
    the universe can be undone
    and carefully pieced back together
    only to be slightly more perfect...than before
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    Re: Writers Block

    Drop a link man, or it will be closed.

    On the other hand this was a decent piece, solid flow and good emotion. Your imagery was good aswell and your usage of words was nice, your imagination in the piece worked very well. You sure uyou've been away long ?...lol You had good vocabulary and a good amount of detail...your creativity wasnt that bad either. Overall good verse.

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    Re: Writers Block

    Well this whole drop was Solid as Thomas said,Decent in all aspects.Flow was there you never fell off at all emotion was there throughout the entire piece good job.Imagery was the best area throughout the whole drop you worded your words in a organized matter like you should have you was very creative well use of your imagination in this piece...Vocab was great you came with a good amount of vocab that was backed with great detail.......Overall Decent piece for your return,its seems as you wasn't gone for to long.........Big ups.

    Wordz.

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    Re: Writers Block

    i forgot you are required to give feed back on here. oops. lol. i gave some feed on "Once Upon A Blue Moon" and "Life Without A Beat"

    thanks for the feed thomas and wordz. always appreciated. nice to get some kudos on my first post back. much respect.

    peace
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    Re: Writers Block

    nothing else to say?
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    Re: Writers Block

    lil more feed?
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