~RandoM * ThoughtS~

[Nahlidge]

They tell me beauty's in tha eye of tha beholder
If it's like that, She's so beautiful Im afraid 2 hold her
Self esteem 2 low 2 cry on her shoulder
My friends told me never judge a book by it's cover, I had 2 unfold her
Read thru tha pages, And as I got older
I learned that, She was livin' her life trapped behind a boulder
Went 2 bed restless at night, And woke up 2 Folgers
Then she left me, Thought my world was cold, But it got colder.....

2 me this life is seen thru lines of rhyme
Others try 2 see mine, But it's apparent they blind
I take time to establish words that depict signs
When they finally get it, They left silenced like a mime

Each day brings a new lesson, Achievement's a blessin'
It's un-interestin' seein' every1 do tha same shit 4 acceptance
I've tried impressin' tha world, That views are infested
They no longer see hip hop as a culture, They disrespectin' tha essence

>>>----> >o¿o< S***!!! F*** You!!! There U can stare in amazement
Thought he had a friend, But remember tha cat eat's tha mouse that it plays wit


These are juss sum ideas I had written down that I haven't put into verses yet.....Blah....Juss sum shit I thought of durin' tha last week or so.....Except tha last one.....I juss put tha first bar out of tha blue.....Peace

[AuQ WuRD]

Very Very Good Piece, I Liked The Rhyme Scheme,,,But The Way You Told The Story Was ILL.........Keep Postin The Tight Ish Fam, And god Bless!!!!



-OuT-

[Pø!$Øn]

nice. i was definently feelin' this peice. keep doing what you doing.

[D-Dizzle]

YHea this was good. I tend to do the same thing, on napkins and shit through out the day and keep them some where like a reference. I may use one of my lines later on down the road, so I feel you. Pretty good lines to. Good shit