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    unifire
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    Student v.s teacher

    u hear a voice, its making alot of noise,
    u decide to listen to this shit , this is ur choice.
    just a homeless person out on the streets,
    with no pair of shoes, just his own bare feet,
    this guy looks creepy, he looks like a freak,
    but u realise his droppin his own beat.

    it sounds disguisting, its like noise pollution,
    this guys so bad there isnt a solution,
    he sais ' check my lines, what i got to spit'
    his rhymes are starting to stink, like my own shit
    'n' u cant take one more bit, of this shit,
    so u tell him to sit, 'n' listen up quick

    u drop ur lines, there as tight as a rope,
    they flow so smooth, u know, he knows,
    that ur shits dope, he looks up to u
    like he would just quit, become ur servant
    and smell ur own shit, even taste ur own spit,
    with more than a single lick, he'd go grab a straw
    and slurp up wats raw, ur authentic made
    ur A+ grade.

    u then become a teacher, this guys ur own preacher
    he wants to reach ya, this guy could never beat ya
    but u show him ur technique, of the rhymes that can leak,
    from the words that u speak,

    this guys so sure of himself, with out a doubt,
    he wants to battle, and win the bout,
    he steals ur rhmyes, with all the great lines,
    but then he finds..
    That u use ur master mind, and find the one line,
    that shattered his mound, and re-claim ur crown,
    u leave the man stunned, ur still number one,
    u show this chump, who is the boss,
    this guys record so far.. 0 wins 1 loss.

  2. #2
    unifire
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    i put abit more effort into this, just to see where im at
    give me some feedback, peace out....

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    ohhh! improving 100% everyday... love the ending.. keep rhymin

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