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  1. #1
    Mac Nino
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    I Hope You Notice Me-Short Poem

    I had this poem on another website.I hope you like this one even
    though it's not long.Here it goes



    You body is smooth like caramel,got my head spinning around like
    a carousel
    Your whole pressence on earth got me trapped inside of a jail cell,
    you are a angel that saves me from going to hell
    Your eyes are beautiful like a diamond,it makes a grown man cry when his eyes are blinded
    If I said that you was special to me you probally think i'm lying,but
    I don't want you to think I am criminal minded
    Your hair looks beautiful like a ribbon in the sky,your love just gets
    me high
    All the bullshit and drama in this world won't pass me by,I just want a girl like you to notice me,myself,and I

  2. #2
    Mac Nino
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    Uppin for repplies.

  3. #3
    Carlos
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    dats tight cuz..... much respect to the way you treat da females...

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    Mac Nino
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    Thanks carlos.I apprecite it.Uppin for more repplies.

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    im with carlos on this one homie...i write all types of ish and at this point in my life im writin more ish like this...this was alright

    check minez out if ya want..peace
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    Mac Nino
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    Thankz content.Uppin for more repplies.

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