Enslaved Rebel

[Resistance]

Mr Write.- You had a nice vibe in your part, it got it started, and you pretty much kept it going throughout Your whole verse, there we're some flaws, w/ wording, But other then that, it was pretty much golden, and you had a pretty nice part in this collab, and you got the spark started, and you just kept it running..Good Job

Rival-Same for Mr Write, You did good, you kept the rhythym going, and i liked the wording, and the rhyme scheme, and the words we're ok, they could've been better..But you did pretty good, you keept it good like Write, So you did a good job 2, so keep it up..

ab0ve-Haven't seen any of your om's before BUT...Your style was diff. then write's and Rival's so that closed the piece up VERY WELL..I liked the unique style of wording, and the emotion, and imagery in your piece, i think you did a very nice job closing this up and bringing this to complete success


I'll Give It A 9.9/10

[Spoken]

thanks man appreciate it.

[Don Q]

Mr. Write- neat tecture. great lyrics, i could easily understood without thinking you were purposely putting words there to rhyme. good storyline and a mighty good ending.

Rival- same thing for you

Above- same thing for, only thing that separated from the two was that your flow was much different.

you could actually trick somebody and say one person did this whole piece cauze all ya basically had the same flow and the same feeling, like clones. ya was great but ya sound the same.

[Axeshun]

Thanks alot...

[A.J]

Wow.

1st off i want to say great job by you all. The thing that got me was that i can go from Write, to Rival, and to above, and still get every piece of this exactly as if i wrote it. You guys drag the readers into it which is very very good. Also, im lovin the fact that you all brought different tones into the piece. Serious, to heartfelt, and back to serious. Great job by you all..this is 10/10 imo. good wordplay and flow from each, nice vocabulary and concepts..good breakdowns, and nice how i understood every ounce of it. lol great job guys

[Spoken]

^^thanks for your point of view man....big ups to you