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    just one man n hiz notes (FB pleeez((

    my brain has been shredded and stapled back to one piece
    remain obsessed with perfection until my lungs cease
    one beat left in me my heart no longer pulsates
    please explain how blood can still run through cold vains
    Im not a scientist but Ive studied the art a bit
    suffered more wounds than the prescence of my scars admit
    I'm more than strained
    despite the tension of nerves
    I keep my thoughts straight and hide the sick and disturbed
    a walking time bomb with no estimated detonation
    but the end is near so make your preperation for revelations
    my destination is elevation As my stamina grows
    I stand as the man who travels alone
    Castin magic planned and drafted as I battle my clone
    Scratched in my dome theres a code only half of you know
    Scattered in modes, backwards so not even algebra shows
    tryna salvage my hope i toak on this damagin smoak
    just one man an his notes..........
    Last edited by >>Yella<<; March 27th, 2007 at 06:02 PM
    ----Im a Part Of Rap, i look at it as an Art Infact,---
    ---verses paint pictures that cause Heart Attacks,--
    --i can train a rookie ta be iller than you in 3 day's---
    -------even if he has ta Start From Stratch---------

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    Re: just one man n hiz notes (FB pleeez((

    wtf it wont work
    Last edited by >>Yella<<; March 27th, 2007 at 06:08 PM
    ----Im a Part Of Rap, i look at it as an Art Infact,---
    ---verses paint pictures that cause Heart Attacks,--
    --i can train a rookie ta be iller than you in 3 day's---
    -------even if he has ta Start From Stratch---------

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    Re: just one man n hiz notes (FB pleeez((

    Open a new window in open mic.

    Right click on a thread you've replied to and click 'copy'

    and then paste it in your first post.

    And then do it again coz you need 2.
    Last edited by Johnny 6-feet; March 28th, 2007 at 04:39 PM

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    Re: just one man n hiz notes (FB pleeez((

    tbh i dont like this peice no flow or rythem to it and the topic isnt that great and talkin bowt toaks and shit wasnt good keep elevating and use a better ryme scheme keep up man

    and if u gewt the time will u vote on this

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ym-331511.html
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    Re: just one man n hiz notes (FB pleeez((

    keep uppin where yer all at ..damn
    ----Im a Part Of Rap, i look at it as an Art Infact,---
    ---verses paint pictures that cause Heart Attacks,--
    --i can train a rookie ta be iller than you in 3 day's---
    -------even if he has ta Start From Stratch---------

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    Re: just one man n hiz notes (FB pleeez((

    HEllooooooo thur peeeps
    ----Im a Part Of Rap, i look at it as an Art Infact,---
    ---verses paint pictures that cause Heart Attacks,--
    --i can train a rookie ta be iller than you in 3 day's---
    -------even if he has ta Start From Stratch---------

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