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    Guilty Conscience..Celebrity Edition Pt.1 ft.Chief

    Good Conscience = HighEngineChief
    Bad Conscience = Berlin'S BesT


    The Date: June 13th
    The Year: 1994
    The Place: Los Angeles
    OJ Simpson, former football star for the Buffalo Bills and San Fransisco 49ers decides
    To get satisfaction for his tortured soul. He drives up to his ex-wifes house in Los Angeles hoping to catch Nicole and Ronald Goldman in the act. He’s fortunate, both are there. He slowly creeps up on em, ready to do his evil deed. OJ is just pulling his blade out of his jacket when suddenly his conscience comes into play….


    Good Conscience :
    It’s to rambunctious, neighbors will hear the blade getting shoved in
    And if the bitch screams your fucked kid, drop the knife and start running
    Stop buggin’ you’re her husband even if Ron Goldman nuts in her stomach
    Fuck it! She Fucks him, so what, plug him dump the body but ..
    …………………………...........just leave Nicole’s heart thumpin
    Think! You know forensics got DNA analysis just leave her in paralysis
    You aint planned the outcome Simp’s just leave her to her cowardice
    Hire a professional if need dont allow her this~*~*~*~*~*~*
    don’t give her the satisfaction of a victim cause u on a power trip
    Prosecution will devour this, eat you alive, fuck u, and mount you kid
    Just give me the knife now and split, trust me,
    u don’t wanna burn on account of this



    Bad Conscience:
    Oh shut the fuck up…I mean seriously how could you try to talk him out of this
    bitch’s been suckin’ Rons dick n then gave J a kiss shit she’s prolly even proud of it
    There’s no doubting it this been goin on for a while…dude look how honest’ her smile
    Shes grinnin’ like sinnin’ gave her a rush…I bet seein’ you won’t be makin her blush
    Hear her scream? Fuck!! Buddy it sounds like she’s not even faking that stuff
    Plz don’t tell me you just gone sit here and watch him put his mate in her butt
    Ain’t tryin’ to persuade but… Jeez is that a camera?? I think they even tapin’ that fuck
    That’s enough dude put on them leather gloves and start breaking them off
    Trust me there’s no shaking that off unless u pay em back…get some redemption
    Satisfy your soul teach her respect, need I fuckin’ mention what the fuck to do
    I mean she’s been fuckin’ fuckin’ this fucker in your fuckin own mansion
    do some fuckin charles manson on her n this fuckin’ dude…



    Good Conscience:
    Fine! fuck it cut her too, aint no duckin’ just raise the blade
    I’ll let you in on a little secret, you get away with it any way






    The month: November
    The year: 1997
    The Place: supposedly an R.Kelly residence
    Robert “Kells” Kelly or better known as R.Kelly is one of the greats of RnB music. He follows in the footsteps of people such as Marvin Gay yet still it is proven once again that even those that seem untouchable are often the most fragile individuals. Robert Kelly is about to get into sexual intercorse with an underaged girl when suddenly his conscience comes into play….


    Good Conscience:
    She 13 I don’t see what’s the fuss, she’s just a preteen, no doubt a slut
    Wine’s better with age Kells, why u wanna eat the peach without the fuzz
    Just beat it out and fuck don’t pee around her butt, face, titties, no video tapes
    No itty bitty hoe rape just leave it and go straight home, really, don’t wait
    No need, it’s a closed case. Close her legs and turn away from the lil minor
    Let your balls dwindle kinda, drive home and jack your dick like an injured tire
    Leave the sin behind ya

    Do I have to remind ya how much money your sittin on like recliners
    This bitch aint even a dime cuz, she a IOU, I told you don’t ride her
    Save it for the urinal or toilet, get your dick out of her cervical, don’t soil it
    You want to go in raw and not oil it, fucking freak, your dicks prolly poisonous



    Bad Conscience:
    Yadayadayada
    Kells I guess ur good half has turned away from being straight now
    Now I don’t wanna hate now but to me he sounds like a gay man
    And I know you wouldn’t listen to faggots so fuck that bitch amen
    Yea she 14 or so but no ones gonna find out about it anyway
    And even if you could fuck another teen and go platinum any day
    Let me say this and display how it really is
    She got a nice ass and I can see nearly tits
    Some lucious lips I think ur dick would clearly fit
    So what ur waiting for the fuck u think shes naked for
    Stop debating and beat the pussy and make it sore
    Take it or go home and cry bout being such a fuckin sissy
    the best of both worlds but can’t even fuck a teen missy?
    Look she’s begging: “kiss me” I know u got the cam set already
    Do what a man gotta do….fuck her damn cat while its sweating…

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    Re: Guilty Conscience..Celebrity Edition Pt.1 ft.C

    lmao @ the story....this was a good piece and i dont think o.j. did it...but anyways i liked the flow and structure also i liked the emotion and wordplay
    and this was kinda funny too especially cause it was bout o.j.
    but overall i give this a 7/10 cause it was funny and because of the flow and wordplay

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    Re: Guilty Conscience..Celebrity Edition Pt.1 ft.C

    OMGwtfuavnujrnujbrahgil;uaqernhgluaqebnrjklgneaqlj rg!!!!!!1111oneoneone

    Jesus Christ i was cracking the fuck up, the whole way through this. An awesome concept and delivered smooth as silk by both of you. Great multi's and hilarious imagery. A long piece but it didn't falter for a second. I dunno what else to say, topic, vocab, imagery, rhyme scheme and flow this had the lot.

    Keep posting.

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    Re: Guilty Conscience..Celebrity Edition Pt.1 ft.C

    hmm.. guilty concience- eminem ft. dr dre. ooooooooooooook. recycled.

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    Re: Guilty Conscience..Celebrity Edition Pt.1 ft.C

    wow you're missing the point ^
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    Re: Guilty Conscience..Celebrity Edition Pt.1 ft.C

    Quote Originally Posted by Chop Logic. View Post
    hmm.. guilty concience- eminem ft. dr dre. ooooooooooooook. recycled.
    neeeeeeeewb. its just a title dude

    anyways, this was halarious.

    it was ok like, writing and all.. but the concepts had me rolling, wtf @ r. kelly. lol i don't know all about the different cases because i would rather not bother keeping up with them, but yeah. its still funny. Nice writing from both, it wasnt the best i've seen from either of you, but you pulled this piece off as a relaxing read that you didn't force, just got it out for others to read.

    nice job and funny as hell. keep writing
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    Re: Guilty Conscience..Celebrity Edition Pt.1 ft.C

    yea this wasn't really a drop where either of us tried to lyrically set new standards since we played the good and bad conscience of a person...what matters here is how convincing one came across...that's what rather be judged...still thx for the feed guys
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    Re: Guilty Conscience..Celebrity Edition Pt.1 ft.C

    hit n run is the best collab crew out right now.. my brothers fits in with you cats perfectly. this peice is hallarious... it had me laughing at some points, and then in awe in others, due to the exellent flow.. both of you coenside very well together.. nice peice.

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    Re: Guilty Conscience..Celebrity Edition Pt.1 ft.C

    lol, nice put together berlin, yo metrosexual son of a bitch, lol
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    uppin

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    Shit this was hallarious, big props to both of y'all. really good flo on this by both and like Onus said you both coenside each other really well. Best peice i've read in the past couple of days.

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    Re: Guilty Conscience..Celebrity Edition Pt.1 ft.C

    Is it just me, or do these "good" and "bad" consciences both sound like they're giving evil advice. A real good conscience will deter you from all forms of wickedness. Just a thought.
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    Re: Guilty Conscience..Celebrity Edition Pt.1 ft.C

    ...yea

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    up up up and uppin

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    HoF Baby, Berlin were you at?!

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