"Reasonable Doubt."

[Resistance]

My Verse Against iTopic.


Reasonable Doubt.



As vivid dreams stroll soft, and faded flashbacks, Flashes..
And dreams and hopes are high..and then quickly burns to ashes..
He is the reasonable doubt, or the man counted out..
..One who's self asteems is broken..and emotions fall out.
..Self confidence is everything..Its your only token..
..Because self asteem rises..And quickly Broken..
Then regain, And spirits are rosen, High Elevation..
..Because waiting brings you places..Only if your patient
Fallen dreams, brought back up, and its him against the everyone
Because he's proven everyone wrong..and the best is yet to come..

"He yet keeps proving everyone wrong , and he came from living on nothing, and now to one of the most popular artist in the WORLD"


He becomes more known, his face more shown, Creating a throne..
..Because people saying he's the best of our time..But in reality he's making his own..
His name displayed all around..Can't escape Words Of Wisdom..
They don't know his background..barely know where he's coming from..
..Yet he writes his emotions, and about his Dredful Past...
..saying "you haven't seen nothing yet"..The best is yet too Last..
..Kid state his quotes, and scripture them in their Arogant Minds..
They feel if they follow the path of his words..there own path they'll find..


.."A father of two, and one of the today's most popular artist, was found dead in his House, 3 a.m. this morning, and people question his death, of maybe that he traded his life for another..We've yet to come to the truth"...


..Hanging himself for another soul, has brought many tears, and fears..
..Because tragedy has reflected..
..And Then shows up, how it effected the nation in the mirror.
..A loved man, who was conchoring day by day, word by word..
The softest melody..and Tranquility, the world has every heard..
..A final song written for those who doubted him, and bloody quil, drips on paper..
..Because a fatal death was directly Written In his Faver..
..Little Kids savor, then clinched fists In anger, Spillingly..
..Just to write a song, that he died...Willingly..

[Resistance]

Links Are Here..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...bt-330190.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ds-330840.html

[Resistance]

Come On Ppl, I think this is one of my best..Emotionally, i liked this..So UPPING. leave links, and i'll rtf.

[jookz.]

truthfully i dont know to much about OMs and how ppl leave feed but ima go with what i felt.....i like it....to me it had good imagery and emotion in it......it was vivid and had some nice vocab in there....i seen some metasphores in there that were pretty good....and i liked the 1st couple bars the most because at 1st the person is loosing himself and then starts to regain everything.......

like i said..some of u mite think my feed was wack cuz i dont do OMs or know much about them..but its what i got from what i read.....its not a bad piece....and i think with more practice ull get better......good job homie......

[HighEngineChief]

I liked that it had a dope battle OM kinda of thing ive never seen done like that. I mean ive seen people post battle verses on OM but never really IN OM fashion ya feel me. This is probably one of the most unique and effective diss threads ive seen on RB, new way of attaching, you opted to attach his reputation and his character, which is best thing to dig into in my opinion, it hurts the deepest and leaves the biggest scar. Well done Theory

One

(Oh my bad i thought this was a fuckin diss. lol. Must have been a topical battle. Need to stop drinking so early)

[iTopic]

^^^ what is that dude talking about? HAHA! anyways...

Dope shit Theory, i really felt the sixth sense of this. It had mad imagery, and creative flow. It wasnt choppy at all, its just got its own pace. The information given were pretty much even from bar to bar, thats key too. Cause you dont wanna spit out all this know and tell in 6 bars, then have 4 bars just backing up that subject, you gotta keep the storyline movement equal, so good shit. I really enjoyed the read...keep it up, Ill be lookin for more.

[Nigger_Man]

Oh shit, that did had mad imagery, really deep, I like this alot, I caught myself questioning my own existant while looking over this, and reading it, so you knokw you did a Reasonable job with this one, though Jay-Z Reasonable Doubt was better. (Nah, i'm just kiddin`.(Not really)) Keep elevating, you're gonna` be great, someday.

[Resistance]

Thnx Everyone..
Leave links and i'll hit.
Bump

[split...]

yo this was a dope piece i liked the emotion and imagery you put into this one
and i also liked the wordplay flow and the structure i can see you have a lot of potential just keep puttin it to good use and keep writin dopey pieces like this cause it was real nice...stay up baby boi

[Resistance]

Thnx.

Bump.

[Resistance]

Bump.