Keystyle at school

[Joel Venom]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=329466


i keep in mind-that this life of mine-is strife inclined
givin sight to blind-folkz with images quite devine
got the brightest lines-spewing acidic scriptures to people
lyrically lethal-gifted with rankings high as a regal
got an eye of an eagle-wits of a panther hunting it's prey
defying the evil-no man can test the thunder dismayed
u wunted to play-silly games and fiddle with riddles
why would i piddle when these conflicts rekindle for twiddles
the two headed dragon-accrued less-confusing distraction
those dudes cantpass e m-stuck wit minisque bootlegged fashion
crucial assasins with smarts to decapitate your carcusess
and cast away ya family from massive k's andu have to blame my carnage clips
u have to blame my part for this-u bastards are in thrall of gore
my sharpest swords-"Draw blood" and install to ya'll the "Art Of War"
no heart is pure when whencing from the location i wuz established
your mind body and soul would abolish thoughts that had bliss
so have this..scroll of a tyrants lyrics tackling haters
got the "Hottest Line On The Globe" just ask the "Equator"



Bell Rung..lol..leave feed..

[Boxin Mics]

not bad for a quick keystyle at school. only thing i can really say is.. try not to use as many multis... even though im a big fan of em but it kinda fucks the flow up when stuck so close together like that. overall everything was pretty much on point. flow stayed consistant. nice and smooth piece. pretty short. probably shouldve put this in the cyphering section. remember to drop two links of two pieces you replied to. or else the mod is gonna close this on you. keep writin, man.. thanks for the read.. peace..

[Joel Venom]

thanx man and i'll do dat lol i wuz bored as shit so i thought i should've jsut dropped sumthin but now since im at home it's time for sum topicals

[Joel Venom]

feed mah niggaz it's an ok keystyle i think...but i need yo opinions

[Johnny 6-feet]

and closed. Next time leave 2 links to pieces you've replied to before you up your piece.