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Checked In.
Word.
yo my bad i logged off and forgot about this...lol but yo imma drop in a few, and wtf@ 16lines im only gonna go 10...so yea drop when ever you can but if i see that you dont sign back on in 3days imma ask a mod to close this.
Ight imma set it off a lil diffrent this time...thought I'd try something new..
First off what the fuck kind of rap name is restricted
Change your name to nicotine, because nobodys addicted
If rap's your only income, then shit you must be evicted
And if there ever was a Newb sword,u prolly got inflicted
Saying ur name and skill..most likely I'd be contradicted
Ur raps are so bad that if I was a judge, u'd be convicted
If ur rhymes were paintbrushes, wackness would be depicted
You just made history..for the worst verse ever constricted
All u do is drop nursery rhymes,prolly be rated unrestricted
Call that kid a physic, cuz its gonna end like he predicted
Yo, you actually showed, well for sure let me drop real quick. Since you dropped 5 bars worth, I'ma do the same, but my bars are different than yours so don't freak out lol.
If this is a test?
I'm the greatest..son you the worst in this game
Who's going to win? Here's a hint..
Look for the correct answer circled in his name
Ya verse, lame..honestly I came to lecture lines
And it's not that I hate you..
But when I say wack, I mean Gest-ure rhymes
Ya stepped quick..but son ya about to get faded
And with a verse like that..
It's no coincedence that ya title is "most hated"
Ya get clowned by vets, & praised by newbs of sorts
And the dude he quoted is like a bra..
How he provided this boob with light-weight support.
Ya rhyme scheme, shit, let me put it in Lahmens terms
You can come hard..
But ya shit won't ever produce like Gay-mens sperm
Word.
Yup this was an aight battle. Gestures your punches were aight nothing really stood out much and i'm pretty sure constricted should have been constructed, tryin to go for a rhymescheme doesn't mean you fuck words up na mean.
Restricted i preffered yours, a lot of battlers may not due to it's different set up style but the creativity in some of them was propa dope and i reckon your verse did hit gestures quite a couple of times.
\/ Restricted for consistency and creativity.
Edit: Also, Gestures' most weak part came when he dissed a verse restricted had still not even posted up.
All in all a fair vote, if however, there are any problems i am willing to give a more clearer explanation.
Last edited by P. Mortuus; March 6th, 2007 at 03:02 PM
Kiss me through the camera lens.TNL
^You're not the type who complains about votes against him are you?
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Uppin for votes.
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Uppin again, where are the voters?
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Up.
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Uppin like mad.
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Restircted you gotta stop talkin in here or he can get you dq'ued But ill vote
Gestures
First off what the fuck kind of rap name is restricted
Change your name to nicotine, because nobodys addicted
Nicotine is highly addictive?
If rap's your only income, then shit you must be evicted
And if there ever was a Newb sword,u prolly got inflicted
Noob shits played
Saying ur name and skill..most likely I'd be contradicted
Ur raps are so bad that if I was a judge, u'd be convicted
Meh
If ur rhymes were paintbrushes, wackness would be depicted
You just made history..for the worst verse ever constricted
Wtf?No.
All u do is drop nursery rhymes,prolly be rated unrestricted
Call that kid a physic, cuz its gonna end like he predicted
He predicted hes gunnna kill you?
Overall-Weak ass verse gestures wtf happend you try ryhming the whole thing instead of punching.Wack on your part ive seen better outta you.
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Resticted
I'm the greatest..son you the worst in this game
Who's going to win? Here's a hint..
Look for the correct answer circled in his name
Ehh..self glory.
Ya verse, lame..honestly I came to lecture lines
And it's not that I hate you..
But when I say wack, I mean Gest-ure rhymes
Decent nameplay
Ya stepped quick..but son ya about to get faded
And with a verse like that..
It's no coincedence that ya title is "most hated"
No
Ya get clowned by vets, & praised by newbs of sorts
And the dude he quoted is like a bra..
How he provided this boob with light-weight support.
Weak
Ya rhyme scheme, shit, let me put it in Lahmens terms
You can come hard..
But ya shit won't ever produce like Gay-mens sperm
Ok
Overall-Your verse was kinda meh.I like the gay men line and the nameplay line you'll keep elevating though.Not a bad battle by you
Ill poll when i get 300
Appreciate the critisism and honest vote.
2-0 on this battle.
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