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    Arrow Defining Illness™

    Defining Illness™:

    Emerged from the shallows or was birthed from the gravel?
    turn to dust from the gallows or the soul still travels?
    unravel the mystery that baffles through history
    unshackled and saddled to battle thoerys within me
    hardships harden hearts sparks depart from stars
    scars carved in carcasses all mauled and chard
    lifes priceless the wisest always try to extend it
    if I should die tonight will I arise in heaven?
    deep thoughts near unconscious in my hospital bed
    I wasted my life and now Ill probably be dead
    out there hustling for rent gun shot to the chest hexed
    this cant be the end, resurrect my flesh
    better to be behind bars living incarcerated
    reeper waiting hearts fading pray im reincarnated
    ladys deep in pregnancy yet to see my son breathe
    fuck death Ill return through the birth of my seed

    I'll return on a white horse with a storm of revolution.
    I'll be stronger and more diverse, a form of evolution.
    My restitution will be restored through a few street pioneers.
    I may be dead at the present moment but your reading me, I am here.
    I came from the souls of men but I was born on turn-tables though.
    The streets loved me until I was cashed-in and burned on the radio.
    Death by dishonor. It happened how it was s'posd to happen though.
    I was coerced to take away my essence to bring in more capitol.
    My return will not be televised. I'm purposely makin my moves quietly.
    But I will need your help. See I'm walkin the binary plank of piracy.
    Recently "The Ruler" has represented my reputation.
    Most will hear it but not listen. Pass it off as a dedication.
    He's giving you my education, through my golden years to the present.
    You can bring me back. It's evident through the message he is addresin.
    Some say it's too late. I've succumb to money so I should just kick rocks.
    I've been traded and killed...Hip-Hop In exchange for a slick watch and a slipknot


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328552
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328543
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    Re: Defining Illness™

    feedback plz
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    Re: Defining Illness™

    wow man this was a topical battle from two people... both verses are by different people

    http://www.hiphoppoetry.com/vB/archi...p/t-28938.html

    ^ theres the link


    its punchblade vs ezekial


    you biter...
    and i knew cuz i use to post on that site
    these are two of the illest ppl there
    Last edited by NuTsAcK; March 3rd, 2007 at 07:37 AM

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