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Thread: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

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    Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    Topic: Left behind..

    20-30 lines

    due at midnight EST. tommorrow (Wenesday)

    House rules..

    Good luck

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    Check in.

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    Check..........

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    Was inspired, and am going to drop early...

    “Pour five!” exclaimed a girl, whom adores I.
    Before I, only knew her because of Lorelei
    What a sight for sore eyes, if my poor eyes had sight.
    It’s sad right, the waves of silk hair had my
    Senses focused in with the scriptures that might
    Begin with a sin which we would never last, I
    had smiles, glowing at me with astonishment
    The problem sent through mind, its harmless in
    The fun we had, was just an enlarged omit-
    tion of the diction we lift from her soul-stained abyss
    She crept, much like I. Under the night sky
    and she thought “Might I, meet the right guy”
    Inspite lies, you’ve heard. I never loved her.
    It’s why I left early, and stuffed pillows under covers
    She’d waken, from her sleep and pace in front of
    a shell of the man I once was, that’s where I come from
    From the, moment she saw it, I knew I’d run ‘cause
    That’s the coward that was of, me.. and much was
    The incapacity of my existence, givin verbal inquistitions
    To myself and I'd witness the fall of my independence
    The fitness of my persistence had me up against the fences
    Which incased the chamber of my 4 walled prison.
    She was my gift ‘n she ment it, when she kissed it.
    Thy lips were soaked in guilt, and I just want to rewind
    In due time, when our ticking hearts ring, chimes
    And the beating of those too, an in sync line.
    rewind... yes rewind...
    to where I left her, and in turn left myself behind.

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    Left Behind

    A new day arose from the ashes of my previous fate,
    began on a simple date, would last forever by design,
    smelling sweat saturated scars, It felt necessary to combine.
    Marriage was a sacred place among a world of anger,
    when we tied the knot, I was merely a stranger.
    As my past trickled down the forehead to the brow,
    wondering what she would allow, I started to bow,
    begging forgiveness before the words left my face,
    feeling disgrace and out of place, I began to chase
    the well known attributes of fear down a dark alley,
    the forefront of a rally, back and forth through the valley.

    Without warning, I released the worst of my timeline,
    and found a fine line to walk as our time would align,
    trapped in the past of ex’s and righteously wrong decisions,
    expected these actions to create incisions of tactical precisions.
    The reaction bewildered my senses, astonishment set in,
    I was prepared to regret sin, and once again hang the chin
    she concluded with saying I was forgiven before I’d begin.
    It was the future she was concerned with, nothing more
    be a good husband, through richer or poor, she’d implore .
    What a relief, a sensation of complete serenity invoked
    gasping on the truth, drops of reality left me sweat soaked.

    Equipped with forgiveness, she eased my soul to rest,
    she left behind my wretched past, now we would invest.
    Ending this scenario she spoke an important fast murmur,
    she’ll love me till the day I die, if she’s not on the back burner

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    now i gotta give that dude rewind his props because he killed those lines
    the first and only rapper on this website that i think can rap, i feel that in a battle between me and rewind that it'll be a nice fucking battle.
    hey what can i say i gotta give my fellow craftsman, props!

    Geah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    oh and
    BLAKK SAID DAT

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    Lmfao....bumpin For Votes....

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    up....

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    to the top.....

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    bump
    I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    Bump To The Top............................................... ..........
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    I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    Bumpin For Votes............................bring Them.............................................. ...........................
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    I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    up................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    Bumpin For Votes............................bring Them.............................................. ...........................
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    I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON

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    Re: Topical: CrosT Over vs. Rewind.

    Bumpin For Votes............................bring Them.............................................. ...........................
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    I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON

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