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  1. #1
    MC Illest
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    Rap Industry freestyle

    Cards is my game, I spit like a spades cutta
    Homie, you a lame, Look like fame is not ya future
    You poppin like you the ACE, Im runnin wit big gunz
    Slap a Joker in ya face, you aint eligable for #ONE
    Jones and Carter still fightin to be the King
    At this moment Im the King, Why you makin a BIG scene
    I hold the crown, see Im was the heir of the throne
    Of the true rap lyricists, Pac, BIG, and Nasir Jones
    Jay is not even mentioned cuz his game is just droppin
    Big album sales lyrically? NO! Niggaz was just coppin
    Up until BluePrint, I was really feelin ya flow
    Now you are DISGUSTIN, ya talent has left you long ago
    Niggaz, I don't hate, I just speak for myself
    Matter of fact, there's mad MC's out there who need lyrical help
    There's mad niggaz out there who young and rhyme wit a flow
    This niglet, Richie got in free, Romeo you gotta go
    You not an actor or a rapper you fake a** cracker
    Bow Wow will always be ya dad, forget that P rapper
    S-O-L-A-N-G-E, lookin fine in ya video gettin you publicity
    Even wit ya young shortys chasin you on the streets
    You'll never be a good MC or level up to me
    You in the game on TV, Our path is a college gagit
    We hustlin hard spittin like Nas in Illmatic
    We aint eligible for class, we stashin to support our fam
    MLK, rest in peace, MC's lets break these bars and STAND


    Rate, Don't HATE.



    Peace

  2. #2
    MOLOTV
    Guest
    not dat bad i guess,wordplay waznt all der,n alotta bars didnt really ryme w/ da rest,it flowed aiight,but show's it need help,all round i'd rate dis 5,u average so far,stay up,1

  3. #3
    MC Illest
    Guest
    thanx fo' da feedback

  4. #4
    keep spitting
    *My stainless love brains so who thinks their smart?*

    *I'm so sick i have to spit in a quarantined booth charged for the death of millions cause i let the Bubonic Plaque loose and that as just the prelude*

    *My appetites galactical consuming planets whole leaving trails of galaxies without a soul*

    *I beat death several times and took my life back last time he came knocking on my door he said he just wanted to chat*

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