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    Re: Daily Wrap Up

    flow and all was on point, no doubt. and that Ray J and Whitney Houston shit was mad funny. but, really, it didn't interest me much. probably cause, i hate hip-hop news, or any artist/actor/actress news. so, dont think im saying you, alright? it just reminds me of that "Madd Skillz" shit. and im not really a big fan of his, though, honestly. like i said, flow and all, on point. just the topic, or what you said, it didn't interest me.

    and actually,i checked out your audio before, the freestyle. or atleast, i think it was you. but if so, i left some good feed back. -one-

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    Quote Originally Posted by vocabz
    flow and all was on point, no doubt. and that Ray J and Whitney Houston shit was mad funny. but, really, it didn't interest me much. probably cause, i hate hip-hop news, or any artist/actor/actress news. so, dont think im saying you, alright? it just reminds me of that "Madd Skillz" shit. and im not really a big fan of his, though, honestly. like i said, flow and all, on point. just the topic, or what you said, it didn't interest me.

    and actually,i checked out your audio before, the freestyle. or atleast, i think it was you. but if so, i left some good feed back. -one-
    True & understandable....But did you click the verse? It'll make more sence trust me

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    Re: Daily Wrap Up

    Pretty cool. I definitely have to respect that this is very different from a lot of stuff in OM, although it sounds herbish at first, I can see how well you wrote the entire thing. Some more focus on your internal rhyme scheme would be nice, you can do it by changing some of your word choices and line structures to make the words flow better together. Content is pretty cool, I think you have a knack for what it is you're trying to do with this, but it still needs some technical work.

    Interesting read, all the same. IF you're gonna RTF, read the piece I collabed with Mariah on... It's in my signature. Piece dude.

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    You should be banned for this and your lame ass propaganda.
    Get real.
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    Thanks, bro. And damn, I wonder if Rays still hitting that Kim Kardashian, I would be. Lucky, motherfucker. I wouldn't even of waited for Whitney to leave me. I'da just left her, to be with the better looking broad, lol. No doubt, but I see what he was doing. Two just doubles the pleasure, werd up. I give props to Ray, if that rumors true. And yo, who the fuck is this Kim Kardashian? How come I never seen her before? She a actress? A porn star?

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    Re: Daily Wrap Up

    the idea is very coo and the way you put this to paper is also nice....the structure was a bit off but i felt like that didn't harm the piece much....the challenge here was to stick to the facts which u did...props for that....the flow was aight....multis were there but nothin special....prolly gone read ya next one too...

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    Quote Originally Posted by DC aka BeRLin
    the idea is very coo and the way you put this to paper is also nice....the structure was a bit off but i felt like that didn't harm the piece much....the challenge here was to stick to the facts which u did...props for that....the flow was aight....multis were there but nothin special....prolly gone read ya next one too...

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    preciate it peeps

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