LLL Jr Championship - Emanate (5 - 1) Vs.Penlord (6 - 0)

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[Penlord.]

No less than 20.

[Piff Jones]

lets do 20 then.
have the past two weeks anyway.


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[Piff Jones]

That's what makes me unique.

And if anyone ever has the nerve to say "oohhhhh you bit that" blah blah blah when I make a song,

I can just be like.

lmfao.
from who? where? What?

Then when we're all clear on the fact I don't listen to ANY other rapper, everyone can shut the fuck up and we can all move on with the music.

don't listen to any rappers? yeah AND he makes his own beats
it's no wonder he mumbles on the mic with all that cocky eats
drugs don't actually make you dope, so quit pressing your luck
i don't care how much pot you smoke, weed still all think you suck
people say you made it here without effort, but this is what i think
if you were to ever let a Monster out, you'd just be sipping the drink
Penlord? bullshit. a keyboard is the writing tool you use to fill
you've ALWAYS been a netcee, & no one will ever claim pencil
nameplay ain't matter to you, cause i see you do graphics but check dude
sn is Emanate 008, hit me up and make me a sig after i wreck you
Ike Ill kids, make bitches Twizted, & sprinkle SinAmen with my hand
^ i would do all of the above but your stupid ass got them banned
you don't roll with good cats, in other word your crew really sucks
Bitch I'll Kill You..... without EVER joining those pitiful fucks
so your hungry for the belt? well then this week you ain't eatin'
i'd keep you in the Coop, but he's the only decent head you've beaten
Pen your slighty retarded, earning two wins in one battle is nothing
& being the victor of a handicapped match, really should tell you something
yeah you used to be dope, before you left LLL, now your shit
claim your not washed up? well sorry bitch i'm shore of it
past couple years you taught me text, and I look up to you but damn
if I followed in your footsteps, I'd end up where I already am!
you have no future career, & most of the shit you do now ain't cool
i just heard your audio.... WHY THE FUCK DID YOU DROP OUT OF SCHOOL?
e-love disguists me, so this little LLL Jr affair isn't worth boasting
cause you told everyone you had a girlfriend, till Mariah started posting
dare you to talk about my last win, cause it doesn't really measure
last week Alpha beat himself, your lonely ass just does it for pleasure
yeah you haven't lost yet, but I really don't think ya illy
this time when I win the champ match, you CAN'T blame the loss on Philly

[Penlord.]

*yawns and rubs eyes* Did you underestimate me or was that really your best?

Everyone wants you dead, aint you heard? Pen's movin' up & rippin' cats,
Plus me murderin' this bitch soon enough.. <- Well, Just isn't that.
I'm EVIL 'EM, AND I'm takin' the title, watch 'cuz I'm mean 'n son,
FUCK if you appear to be a bitch.... 'Cuz I'll make sure you leave like one.
I'll drop on you from all sides, it was never a pun that I'd beat you,
So Em'll let his guard down........... and everyone else in the league too.
I'm like a shark when I'm ripping, you NEVER wanted to fuck wit' me,
So I'll give you the in-side scoop.... & take a HUGE chunk outta ya kidney.
...Just suck my dick, i'll spit on you bitch, you're not one to hang, feel me?
& I know I may strike you as a fag...... But I'm sure you can change, really.
You always start out well, but you'll deflate, never escape, & drown in pain,
'Cuz Emanate's flow from the faucet.... then goes straight down the drain.
I'm rockin' slang fulla hooks, then indentin' his face with my hooves,
'Cuz things won't go hand in hand.. When I'm tossin' this bitch to the wolves.
Still, Everyone's in extreme wonder of how you're champ, and I fake tense,
But you're trully wonderful.... In a way that makes my set-up make sense.
I'll kill ya fam, grab ya kin and run, my chances of half assin' is mist,
But yeah Emanate's possible to win...... only 'cuz decimal mathmatics exist.
I keep my rhymin' coo with a punch that's so jive and true,
I'd say that ya work in progress but Progress doesn't even got time for you.
I come with full force & pistons, I'm sickened with wildin' spread,
Plus I'd tell you to keep your distance... it's just I'm already miles ahead.
I'll kick you out, this groupie knows I'm the best to ever run his mouth,
You've stooped so low, and all the doors closing around you...
............... As no one accepts you into their house.
Stay there, that was ya BEST? Dawg I'm wreckin' heads with handy grips,
And as soon as Emanate gets carried away,
... I'll take it a step ahead & include the ambulance.
I'll knock you the fuck out, & just face it dude, I'm sinfully gallant,
Thinkin' he's my challenge mentally... just proves he's mentally challenged.
I'm proud to disgrace surely, and you're bound to get traced, hurry.
While you'll get soft RIGHT off the bat,
.....I just might not wanna pull it outta your face early.

pzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

[Penlord.]

lmfao, I forgot to say this.. good luck emanate.

[kid sick']

don't listen to any rappers? yeah AND he makes his own beats
it's no wonder he mumbles on the mic with all that cocky eats
na
drugs don't actually make you dope, so quit pressing your luck
i don't care how much pot you smoke, weed still all think you suck
ok
people say you made it here without effort, but this is what i think
if you were to ever let a Monster out, you'd just be sipping the drink
meh
Penlord? bullshit. a keyboard is the writing tool you use to fill
you've ALWAYS been a netcee, & no one will ever claim pencil
na
nameplay ain't matter to you, cause i see you do graphics but check dude
sn is Emanate 008, hit me up and make me a sig after i wreck you
just a statement and self glory.
Ike Ill kids, make bitches Twizted, & sprinkle SinAmen with my hand
^ i would do all of the above but your stupid ass got them banned
meh
you don't roll with good cats, in other word your crew really sucks
Bitch I'll Kill You..... without EVER joining those pitiful fucks
meh
so your hungry for the belt? well then this week you ain't eatin'
i'd keep you in the Coop, but he's the only decent head you've beaten
ok
Pen your slighty retarded, earning two wins in one battle is nothing
& being the victor of a handicapped match, really should tell you something
na
yeah you used to be dope, before you left LLL, now your shit
claim your not washed up? well sorry bitch i'm shore of it
meh
past couple years you taught me text, and I look up to you but damn
if I followed in your footsteps, I'd end up where I already am!
meh, ok
you have no future career, & most of the shit you do now ain't cool
i just heard your audio.... WHY THE FUCK DID YOU DROP OUT OF SCHOOL?
nope
e-love disguists me, so this little LLL Jr affair isn't worth boasting
cause you told everyone you had a girlfriend, till Mariah started posting
str8
dare you to talk about my last win, cause it doesn't really measure
last week Alpha beat himself, your lonely ass just does it for pleasure
na
yeah you haven't lost yet, but I really don't think ya illy
this time when I win the champ match, you CAN'T blame the loss on Philly
no



vs




Everyone wants you dead, aint you heard? Pen's movin' up & rippin' cats,
Plus me murderin' this bitch soon enough.. <- Well, Just isn't that.
meh
I'm EVIL 'EM, AND I'm takin' the title, watch 'cuz I'm mean 'n son,
FUCK if you appear to be a bitch.... 'Cuz I'll make sure you leave like one.
ok
I'll drop on you from all sides, it was never a pun that I'd beat you,
So Em'll let his guard down........... and everyone else in the league too.
cool
I'm like a shark when I'm ripping, you NEVER wanted to fuck wit' me,
So I'll give you the in-side scoop.... & take a HUGE chunk outta ya kidney.
meh
...Just suck my dick, i'll spit on you bitch, you're not one to hang, feel me?
& I know I may strike you as a fag...... But I'm sure you can change, really.
Lol
You always start out well, but you'll deflate, never escape, & drown in pain,
'Cuz Emanate's flow from the faucet.... then goes straight down the drain.
meh
I'm rockin' slang fulla hooks, then indentin' his face with my hooves,
'Cuz things won't go hand in hand.. When I'm tossin' this bitch to the wolves.
meh
Still, Everyone's in extreme wonder of how you're champ, and I fake tense,
But you're trully wonderful.... In a way that makes my set-up make sense.
na
I'll kill ya fam, grab ya kin and run, my chances of half assin' is mist,
But yeah Emanate's possible to win...... only 'cuz decimal mathmatics exist.
ok
I keep my rhymin' coo with a punch that's so jive and true,
I'd say that ya work in progress but Progress doesn't even got time for you.
meh, ok
I come with full force & pistons, I'm sickened with wildin' spread,
Plus I'd tell you to keep your distance... it's just I'm already miles ahead.
ok
I'll kick you out, this groupie knows I'm the best to ever run his mouth,
You've stooped so low, and all the doors closing around you...
............... As no one accepts you into their house.
ok
Stay there, that was ya BEST? Dawg I'm wreckin' heads with handy grips,
And as soon as Emanate gets carried away,
... I'll take it a step ahead & include the ambulance.
meh
I'll knock you the fuck out, & just face it dude, I'm sinfully gallant,
Thinkin' he's my challenge mentally... just proves he's mentally challenged.
LOL
I'm proud to disgrace surely, and you're bound to get traced, hurry.
While you'll get soft RIGHT off the bat,
.....I just might not wanna pull it outta your face early.
ok



v/Penlord


He had some funny lines and much more decent lines. Emanate I espected better from you :/...

[Taz™]

Emante

you don't roll with good cats, in other word your crew really sucks
Bitch I'll Kill You..... without EVER joining those pitiful fucks
meh
^lol-ish

so your hungry for the belt? well then this week you ain't eatin'
i'd keep you in the Coop, but he's the only decent head you've beaten
^cool

Pen your slighty retarded, earning two wins in one battle is nothing
& being the victor of a handicapped match, really should tell you something
^this could have been worded better = dope.

yeah you haven't lost yet, but I really don't think ya illy
this time when I win the champ match, you CAN'T blame the loss on Philly
^nice ending

VS

PenLord

I'm like a shark when I'm ripping, you NEVER wanted to fuck wit' me,
So I'll give you the in-side scoop.... & take a HUGE chunk outta ya kidney.
^ok-ish

...Just suck my dick, i'll spit on you bitch, you're not one to hang, feel me?
& I know I may strike you as a fag...... But I'm sure you can change, really.
^lol. nice

I'll kill ya fam, grab ya kin and run, my chances of half assin' is mist,
But yeah Emanate's possible to win...... only 'cuz decimal mathmatics exist.
^nice

I'll kick you out, this groupie knows I'm the best to ever run his mouth,
You've stooped so low, and all the doors closing around you...
............... As no one accepts you into their house.
^first part of the punch could have been worded better. still cool

I'll knock you the fuck out, & just face it dude, I'm sinfully gallant,
Thinkin' he's my challenge mentally... just proves he's mentally challenged.
^ok

well, i thought Emante would step up ,

VOTE: Penlord - for coming w/ more fire power

[Penlord.]

what's that like 2-0.

word.

[Rule.]

Pen your slighty retarded, earning two wins in one battle is nothing
& being the victor of a handicapped match, really should tell you something
- lol

e-love disguists me, so this little LLL Jr affair isn't worth boasting
cause you told everyone you had a girlfriend, till Mariah started posting
- lmao!

you don't roll with good cats, in other word your crew really sucks
Bitch I'll Kill You..... without EVER joining those pitiful fucks
- pretty cool.

vs

...Just suck my dick, i'll spit on you bitch, you're not one to hang, feel me?
& I know I may strike you as a fag...... But I'm sure you can change, really.
- lmao

Still, Everyone's in extreme wonder of how you're champ, and I fake tense,
But you're trully wonderful.... In a way that makes my set-up make sense.
- simple, but i liked it.

I come with full force & pistons, I'm sickened with wildin' spread,
Plus I'd tell you to keep your distance... it's just I'm already miles ahead.
- cool


in all honesty, you each had 3 that really stood out to me, as far as quotables. this turned out to be a fun read. both had good personals.. thought both kinda started out meh'ish.. but really picked it up. hard decision, but I honestly think pen came just enough better to take this. overall, pen had, imo, more lines overall that hit than Em's. not to take away from ya Em, both were cool. pen just came a lil' better. thanks for the reads.

v/ pen

[Flying Carcass]

don't listen to any rappers? yeah AND he makes his own beats
it's no wonder he mumbles on the mic with all that cocky eats
^Okay.
drugs don't actually make you dope, so quit pressing your luck
i don't care how much pot you smoke, weed still all think you suck
^Nah. Bad wording.
people say you made it here without effort, but this is what i think
if you were to ever let a Monster out, you'd just be sipping the drink
^Meh.
Penlord? bullshit. a keyboard is the writing tool you use to fill
you've ALWAYS been a netcee, & no one will ever claim pencil
^Meh. Wording again.
nameplay ain't matter to you, cause i see you do graphics but check dude
sn is Emanate 008, hit me up and make me a sig after i wreck you
^Nah. Filler.
Ike Ill kids, make bitches Twizted, & sprinkle SinAmen with my hand
^ i would do all of the above but your stupid ass got them banned
^Meh.
you don't roll with good cats, in other word your crew really sucks
Bitch I'll Kill You..... without EVER joining those pitiful fucks
^Lol. K.
so your hungry for the belt? well then this week you ain't eatin'
i'd keep you in the Coop, but he's the only decent head you've beaten
^Nah.
Pen your slighty retarded, earning two wins in one battle is nothing
& being the victor of a handicapped match, really should tell you something
^Coulda been harsher but okay.
yeah you used to be dope, before you left LLL, now your shit
claim your not washed up? well sorry bitch i'm shore of it
^Meh.
past couple years you taught me text, and I look up to you but damn
if I followed in your footsteps, I'd end up where I already am!
^Nah.
you have no future career, & most of the shit you do now ain't cool
i just heard your audio.... WHY THE FUCK DID YOU DROP OUT OF SCHOOL?
^Okay.
e-love disguists me, so this little LLL Jr affair isn't worth boasting
cause you told everyone you had a girlfriend, till Mariah started posting
^Lol. K.
dare you to talk about my last win, cause it doesn't really measure
last week Alpha beat himself, your lonely ass just does it for pleasure
^Iight.
yeah you haven't lost yet, but I really don't think ya illy
this time when I win the champ match, you CAN'T blame the loss on Philly
^Meh.

vs.

Everyone wants you dead, aint you heard? Pen's movin' up & rippin' cats,
Plus me murderin' this bitch soon enough.. <- Well, Just isn't that.
^Okay.
I'm EVIL 'EM, AND I'm takin' the title, watch 'cuz I'm mean 'n son,
FUCK if you appear to be a bitch.... 'Cuz I'll make sure you leave like one.
^Meh.
I'll drop on you from all sides, it was never a pun that I'd beat you,
So Em'll let his guard down........... and everyone else in the league too.
^Meh.
I'm like a shark when I'm ripping, you NEVER wanted to fuck wit' me,
So I'll give you the in-side scoop.... & take a HUGE chunk outta ya kidney.
^Okay.
...Just suck my dick, i'll spit on you bitch, you're not one to hang, feel me?
& I know I may strike you as a fag...... But I'm sure you can change, really.
^Okay.
You always start out well, but you'll deflate, never escape, & drown in pain,
'Cuz Emanate's flow from the faucet.... then goes straight down the drain.
^Iight.
I'm rockin' slang fulla hooks, then indentin' his face with my hooves,
'Cuz things won't go hand in hand.. When I'm tossin' this bitch to the wolves.
^Okay.
Still, Everyone's in extreme wonder of how you're champ, and I fake tense,
But you're trully wonderful.... In a way that makes my set-up make sense.
^Meh.
I'll kill ya fam, grab ya kin and run, my chances of half assin' is mist,
But yeah Emanate's possible to win...... only 'cuz decimal mathmatics exist.
^Iight.
I keep my rhymin' coo with a punch that's so jive and true,
I'd say that ya work in progress but Progress doesn't even got time for you.
^Nah.
I come with full force & pistons, I'm sickened with wildin' spread,
Plus I'd tell you to keep your distance... it's just I'm already miles ahead.
^Meh.
I'll kick you out, this groupie knows I'm the best to ever run his mouth,
You've stooped so low, and all the doors closing around you...
............... As no one accepts you into their house.
^Lol. Iight.
Stay there, that was ya BEST? Dawg I'm wreckin' heads with handy grips,
And as soon as Emanate gets carried away,
... I'll take it a step ahead & include the ambulance.
^Iight.
I'll knock you the fuck out, & just face it dude, I'm sinfully gallant,
Thinkin' he's my challenge mentally... just proves he's mentally challenged.
^Nah.
I'm proud to disgrace surely, and you're bound to get traced, hurry.
While you'll get soft RIGHT off the bat,
.....I just might not wanna pull it outta your face early.
^Okay.

Emanate came out with one more quoteable then Pen but Pen stayed much more consistant. I didn't see as much fire I was expecting from this battle. Alot of the lines just seemed very mediocre to me. But neway..

\\//Pen

[Blackflags]

Alright Alright...GREAT battle I must say.....here we go:

Penlord
But yeah Emanate's possible to win...... only 'cuz decimal mathmatics exist.
^LMAO
So I'll give you the in-side scoop.... & take a HUGE chunk outta ya kidney.
That was pretty decent

Those were Really the only lines I liked!

Emanate
don't listen to any rappers? yeah AND he makes his own beats
it's no wonder he mumbles on the mic with all that cocky eats
Decent Line...good Opener
nameplay ain't matter to you, cause i see you do graphics but check dude
sn is Emanate 008, hit me up and make me a sig after i wreck you
Made me chuckle a tad...decent line no doubt
Bitch I'll Kill You..... without EVER joining those pitiful fucks
LOL......good personal, wasn't the hardest hitting but mad me laugh
e-love disguists me, so this little LLL Jr affair isn't worth boasting
cause you told everyone you had a girlfriend, till Mariah started posting
Ahhhh...LMFAO....NICE NICE NICE
yeah you haven't lost yet, but I really don't think ya illy
this time when I win the champ match, you CAN'T blame the loss on Philly
Nice Closer

All in all, I would DEF. say Emanate got this one!!!

So my vote goes to Emanate For having the better punches and being better consistent with them!


Pz.

[Tebo]

don't listen to any rappers? yeah AND he makes his own beats
it's no wonder he mumbles on the mic with all that cocky eats
ok
drugs don't actually make you dope, so quit pressing your luck
i don't care how much pot you smoke, weed still all think you suck
nice
people say you made it here without effort, but this is what i think
if you were to ever let a Monster out, you'd just be sipping the drink
nice
Penlord? bullshit. a keyboard is the writing tool you use to fill
you've ALWAYS been a netcee, & no one will ever claim pencil
good try, w/p used though
nameplay ain't matter to you, cause i see you do graphics but check dude
sn is Emanate 008, hit me up and make me a sig after i wreck you
wasn't feeling
Ike Ill kids, make bitches Twizted, & sprinkle SinAmen with my hand
^ i would do all of the above but your stupid ass got them banned
nice
you don't roll with good cats, in other word your crew really sucks
Bitch I'll Kill You..... without EVER joining those pitiful fucks
ok
so your hungry for the belt? well then this week you ain't eatin'
i'd keep you in the Coop, but he's the only decent head you've beaten
ok, this been used somewhere though
Pen your slighty retarded, earning two wins in one battle is nothing
& being the victor of a handicapped match, really should tell you something
nice
yeah you used to be dope, before you left LLL, now your shit
claim your not washed up? well sorry bitch i'm shore of it
nice
past couple years you taught me text, and I look up to you but damn
if I followed in your footsteps, I'd end up where I already am!
lmfao
you have no future career, & most of the shit you do now ain't cool
i just heard your audio.... WHY THE FUCK DID YOU DROP OUT OF SCHOOL?
ok
e-love disguists me, so this little LLL Jr affair isn't worth boasting
cause you told everyone you had a girlfriend, till Mariah started posting
ewww... no
dare you to talk about my last win, cause it doesn't really measure
last week Alpha beat himself, your lonely ass just does it for pleasure
ok
yeah you haven't lost yet, but I really don't think ya illy
this time when I win the champ match, you CAN'T blame the loss on Philly
weak attempt, good personal

Vsssssssssssssss

Everyone wants you dead, aint you heard? Pen's movin' up & rippin' cats,
Plus me murderin' this bitch soon enough.. <- Well, Just isn't that.
no
I'm EVIL 'EM, AND I'm takin' the title, watch 'cuz I'm mean 'n son,
FUCK if you appear to be a bitch.... 'Cuz I'll make sure you leave like one.
.....k
I'll drop on you from all sides, it was never a pun that I'd beat you,
So Em'll let his guard down........... and everyone else in the league too.
no
I'm like a shark when I'm ripping, you NEVER wanted to fuck wit' me,
So I'll give you the in-side scoop.... & take a HUGE chunk outta ya kidney.
overplayed
...Just suck my dick, i'll spit on you bitch, you're not one to hang, feel me?
& I know I may strike you as a fag...... But I'm sure you can change, really.
lol
You always start out well, but you'll deflate, never escape, & drown in pain,
'Cuz Emanate's flow from the faucet.... then goes straight down the drain.
nice
I'm rockin' slang fulla hooks, then indentin' his face with my hooves,
'Cuz things won't go hand in hand.. When I'm tossin' this bitch to the wolves.
ok..............
Still, Everyone's in extreme wonder of how you're champ, and I fake tense,
But you're trully wonderful.... In a way that makes my set-up make sense.
not feeling...
I'll kill ya fam, grab ya kin and run, my chances of half assin' is mist,
But yeah Emanate's possible to win...... only 'cuz decimal mathmatics exist.
nice
I keep my rhymin' coo with a punch that's so jive and true,
I'd say that ya work in progress but Progress doesn't even got time for you.
no man...
I come with full force & pistons, I'm sickened with wildin' spread,
Plus I'd tell you to keep your distance... it's just I'm already miles ahead.
ok
I'll kick you out, this groupie knows I'm the best to ever run his mouth,
You've stooped so low, and all the doors closing around you...
............... As no one accepts you into their house.
lol
Stay there, that was ya BEST? Dawg I'm wreckin' heads with handy grips,
And as soon as Emanate gets carried away,
... I'll take it a step ahead & include the ambulance.
ok
I'll knock you the fuck out, & just face it dude, I'm sinfully gallant,
Thinkin' he's my challenge mentally... just proves he's mentally challenged.
just so basic & obvious
I'm proud to disgrace surely, and you're bound to get traced, hurry.
While you'll get soft RIGHT off the bat,
.....I just might not wanna pull it outta your face early.
decent

Penlord I truely felt some of your shit was straight up "Iffy" basic & obvious. Stuff that been overplayed forever & you like went and re-vamped it. You had some nice punches though I give you that.

Emenate I think you came more fresh (some stuff played like Pencil name tho...), more personal & more consistant from my eyes.
My vote will be: Emanate

[Penlord.]

lmfao 4-2

[Piff Jones]

no surprise you beat me. as I said earlier this season, you won't lose.

good battle anyway.