Week 7 - Apex (6 - 1) Vs Mariah (3 - 2)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

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Verses - due Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Voting - ends Sunday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
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If you lose the battle=2 loses

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Good Luck to you both

[Flying Carcass]

18 will do.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326613
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326606
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326594
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326597
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326611

[Mariah]

damn 18...ok good luck Apex

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326605

[Flying Carcass]

Like seriously?

She’ll only have a chance if I die, winning is some’em she must doubt,
So before we begin here.. I guess I’ll prior legs open and pass the fuck out,
Bitch come at me crazy, I fucking dare you, go ahead and act hard,
Cuz when we’re at war.. my battlefield your head straight into the back wall,
You’re a dirty whore, maybe I’m lying & full of shit, lemme run this by ya,
This is bogus & bull.. who are 3 guys that caught HIV from this bitch Riah,
I hear you’re 14 and using makeup? Bad look, seems like a whore call,
But you’ll need a lot of makeup.. once eyeline my fist straight up to your jaw,
I have to admit, I didn’t feel like battling this week, & RB’s got some shit love,
But yeah Riah you got me.. cuz man Pex is something you could never get rid of,
You’ll never touch the belt, we wonder why on this site you seem to case men,
So let it all hang out Riah & put on a thong.. then title be an understatement,

Apex (6 - 1) Vs Mariah (3 - 2) IJL homie!

I called you a dyke, cunt, bitch, dip shit, slut, & smut and you just shushed me,
You can take the heat.. as well as fire since Nesse’s breath is always in your pussy,
I gotta give it up, you came iight against ab0ve, you hit’em & he found the floor,
& I’d be hot as shit too.. if the arid kick my ass every time I step out the door,
You’re THAT bitch, we all agree Riah, & you love sports, you are a ho-for-all,
You love black NBA stars.. but after Kobe you’ll never find another protocol,

[Mariah]

I've been through worse, I can walk the walk, so I won't regret this, hell
I'll just state the fact, that your verse is shit, so POO's represented well
Dude listen, I'm predicted to win...and that's not a joke bitch so cut it out
2 people picked you though, it's just a shame that your vote doesn't count
You won't be a mountain to shit, I've used the wording here on purpose
Because you're the first Apex, that's pushing hard to near the surface
I ain't known for hitting low, but this one's the truth, so let's all listen up
See he's the Lord of Pens < because no human would actually give a fuck
I 'm new to this league, it's true...but I blast through geeks you know?
Fat ass got us a new champ because the belt only fit him 2 weeks ago
Dude you're punches are missing, I'm not even caring about the eThreats
All you can do is Swing, Swing.....to find out your an All-American Reject
Your a battler that I can't copy, there's a reason I don't wanna touch that
Because I'd try my best to get to the Point...if that crew didn't suck ass
Dude is a fake vet, a loser see, thinking he's got room to breathe, wrong
Cause we know I'll just smother Apex like when I am putting my bra on
Ain't into comedians cause they aren't funny, so I don't care about it see
But if I put all jokes aside, then I wouldn't have to deal with Apex this week

[Mariah]

god dammmit Apex...drop your verse

[Flying Carcass]

I dropped.

Vote.

[Blackflags]

Alright....although the fact is, this was a close battle...Very close

[b]Apex[b]:

Good verse man...Punches were hitting hard......dind't like how you used Slut, Bitch, Whore every other line...that shit is disrespectful, plus it's annoying and doesn't hit hard...we know it's a girl, but that's how everyone hit's a girl in battle.....Wordplay was phenomenal.......Punches were gret...Good verse

Mariah: Very good verse....wordplay could have been and shoud have been better, especially coming against him...anyways, the JR belt line had me ROTFLMAO....haha.....still laughing.....anyways, if had of been a tad more consistent, and upped the wordplay a little, you could have easily took this battle!!


But anywas, V-Apex


Pz.

[Mariah.]

cool 0-1....good job Apex

[Tebo]

I've been through worse, I can walk the walk, so I won't regret this, hell
I'll just state the fact, that your verse is shit, so POO's represented well
ok
Dude listen, I'm predicted to win...and that's not a joke bitch so cut it out
2 people picked you though, it's just a shame that your vote doesn't count
lol
You won't be a mountain to shit, I've used the wording here on purpose
Because you're the first Apex, that's pushing hard to near the surface
ok
I ain't known for hitting low, but this one's the truth, so let's all listen up
See he's the Lord of Pens < because no human would actually give a fuck
ok
I 'm new to this league, it's true...but I blast through geeks you know?
Fat ass got us a new champ because the belt only fit him 2 weeks ago
lol
Dude you're punches are missing, I'm not even caring about the eThreats
All you can do is Swing, Swing.....to find out your an All-American Reject
no
Your a battler that I can't copy, there's a reason I don't wanna touch that
Because I'd try my best to get to the Point...if that crew didn't suck ass
ok
Dude is a fake vet, a loser see, thinking he's got room to breathe, wrong
Cause we know I'll just smother Apex like when I am putting my bra on
ok i guess lol?
Ain't into comedians cause they aren't funny, so I don't care about it see
But if I put all jokes aside, then I wouldn't have to deal with Apex this week
decent

Vssssssssssss

She’ll only have a chance if I die, winning is some’em she must doubt,
So before we begin here.. I guess I’ll prior legs open and pass the fuck out,
lol
Bitch come at me crazy, I fucking dare you, go ahead and act hard,
Cuz when we’re at war.. my battlefield your head straight into the back wall,
nah....
You’re a dirty whore, maybe I’m lying & full of shit, lemme run this by ya,
This is bogus & bull.. who are 3 guys that caught HIV from this bitch Riah,
ok
I hear you’re 14 and using makeup? Bad look, seems like a whore call,
But you’ll need a lot of makeup.. once eyeline my fist straight up to your jaw,
lol
I have to admit, I didn’t feel like battling this week, & RB’s got some shit love,
But yeah Riah you got me.. cuz man Pex is something you could never get rid of,
ok
You’ll never touch the belt, we wonder why on this site you seem to case men,
So let it all hang out Riah & put on a thong.. then title be an understatement,
ok
I called you a dyke, cunt, bitch, dip shit, slut, & smut and you just shushed me,
You can take the heat.. as well as fire since Nesse’s breath is always in your pussy,
set up was bad, nice punch though
I gotta give it up, you came iight against ab0ve, you hit’em & he found the floor,
& I’d be hot as shit too.. if the arid kick my ass every time I step out the door,
ok
You’re THAT bitch, we all agree Riah, & you love sports, you are a ho-for-all,
You love black NBA stars.. but after Kobe you’ll never find another protocol,
lol

This was 1 of Apex's weaker verses for sure, but his origionality & viciousness in this battle with on the mark wordplay landed him the win. Mariah did pretty good coulda used a few more personals or somthing along that to land a win.

V// Apex

[JDoe]

I've been through worse, I can walk the walk, so I won't regret this, hell
I'll just state the fact, that your verse is shit, so POO's represented well
haha
Dude listen, I'm predicted to win...and that's not a joke bitch so cut it out
2 people picked you though, it's just a shame that your vote doesn't count
lol
You won't be a mountain to shit, I've used the wording here on purpose
Because you're the first Apex, that's pushing hard to near the surface
meh
I ain't known for hitting low, but this one's the truth, so let's all listen up
See he's the Lord of Pens < because no human would actually give a fuck
lol.
I 'm new to this league, it's true...but I blast through geeks you know?
Fat ass got us a new champ because the belt only fit him 2 weeks ago
ok
Dude you're punches are missing, I'm not even caring about the eThreats
All you can do is Swing, Swing.....to find out your an All-American Reject
meh
Your a battler that I can't copy, there's a reason I don't wanna touch that
Because I'd try my best to get to the Point...if that crew didn't suck ass
decent
Dude is a fake vet, a loser see, thinking he's got room to breathe, wrong
Cause we know I'll just smother Apex like when I am putting my bra on
decent concept
Ain't into comedians cause they aren't funny, so I don't care about it see
But if I put all jokes aside, then I wouldn't have to deal with Apex this week
lol nice finisher

vs.

Apex.
She’ll only have a chance if I die, winning is some’em she must doubt,
So before we begin here.. I guess I’ll prior legs open and pass the fuck out,
lol
Bitch come at me crazy, I fucking dare you, go ahead and act hard,
Cuz when we’re at war.. my battlefield your head straight into the back wall,
meh
You’re a dirty whore, maybe I’m lying & full of shit, lemme run this by ya,
This is bogus & bull.. who are 3 guys that caught HIV from this bitch Riah,
meh
I hear you’re 14 and using makeup? Bad look, seems like a whore call,
But you’ll need a lot of makeup.. once eyeline my fist straight up to your jaw,
ok concept
I have to admit, I didn’t feel like battling this week, & RB’s got some shit love,
But yeah Riah you got me.. cuz man Pex is something you could never get rid of,
nah
You’ll never touch the belt, we wonder why on this site you seem to case men,
So let it all hang out Riah & put on a thong.. then title be an understatement,
lol

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.Nesse
Apex (6 - 1) Vs Mariah (3 - 2) IJL homie!


I called you a dyke, cunt, bitch, dip shit, slut, & smut and you just shushed me,
You can take the heat.. as well as fire since Nesse’s breath is always in your pussy,
LOL
I gotta give it up, you came iight against ab0ve, you hit’em & he found the floor,
& I’d be hot as shit too.. if the arid kick my ass every time I step out the door,
ok
You’re THAT bitch, we all agree Riah, & you love sports, you are a ho-for-all,
You love black NBA stars.. but after Kobe you’ll never find another protocol,
ok finisher

*I fell Mariah's came harder but this battle was hilarious...so props to both emcees no hate...gdluck

V/Mariah

[Rule.]

[b]Apex[b]:

Good verse man...Punches were hitting hard......dind't like how you used Slut, Bitch, Whore every other line...that shit is disrespectful

wtf @ disrespectful.. we're supposed to be nice, right? lol

anyways.


mariah-

You won't be a mountain to shit, I've used the wording here on purpose
Because you're the first Apex, that's pushing hard to near the surface
- cool
I ain't known for hitting low, but this one's the truth, so let's all listen up
See he's the Lord of Pens < because no human would actually give a fuck
- good creativity, punch is iight
I 'm new to this league, it's true...but I blast through geeks you know?
Fat ass got us a new champ because the belt only fit him 2 weeks ago
- seen alot of belt references, this was good though.

vs

apex-

She’ll only have a chance if I die, winning is some’em she must doubt,
So before we begin here.. I guess I’ll prior legs open and pass the fuck out,
- nice.
You’ll never touch the belt, we wonder why on this site you seem to case men,
So let it all hang out Riah & put on a thong.. then title be an understatement,
-cool. better wording maybe ?
You’re THAT bitch, we all agree Riah, & you love sports, you are a ho-for-all,
You love black NBA stars.. but after Kobe you’ll never find another protocol,
- liked it. wordplay was perfect.


good battle. suprised that it was this close.. overall the harder verse has to go to apex though. i felt mariah had a lot of good stuff.. but sometimes being overly creative can come across forced and take away from the punch. you came well, but apex came better. good read by both.

now if i can just figure out who ghosted for mariah... jk.

v/ apex

[Flying Carcass]

3-1

But LMAO @ peeps saying Meh and Nah because they don't get the battlefield wordplay. Also the bogus and bull one.

Good verse Riah.

[Mariah.]

Not swaying, but the battlefiled wordplay was ok, but then you said centerfield...so field twice might of been why

[Brasilz Finezt]

Apex
She’ll only have a chance if I die, winning is some’em she must doubt,
So before we begin here.. I guess I’ll prior legs open and pass the fuck out,
lol nice wordplay

Bitch come at me crazy, I fucking dare you, go ahead and act hard,
Cuz when we’re at war.. my battlefield your head straight into the back wall,
meh

You’re a dirty whore, maybe I’m lying & full of shit, lemme run this by ya,
This is bogus & bull.. who are 3 guys that caught HIV from this bitch Riah,
nah...not feelin this much

I hear you’re 14 and using makeup? Bad look, seems like a whore call,
But you’ll need a lot of makeup.. once eyeline my fist straight up to your jaw,
another good wordplay bar...good set-up as well

I have to admit, I didn’t feel like battling this week, & RB’s got some shit love,
But yeah Riah you got me.. cuz man Pex is something you could never get rid of,
statement

You’ll never touch the belt, we wonder why on this site you seem to case men,
So let it all hang out Riah & put on a thong.. then title be an understatement,
umm...ok

I called you a dyke, cunt, bitch, dip shit, slut, & smut and you just shushed me,
You can take the heat.. as well as fire since Nesse’s breath is always in your pussy,
ok personal, not all that great since "genital" punches are normally played concepts

I gotta give it up, you came iight against ab0ve, you hit’em & he found the floor,
& I’d be hot as shit too.. if the arid kick my ass every time I step out the door,
not bad

You’re THAT bitch, we all agree Riah, & you love sports, you are a ho-for-all,
You love black NBA stars.. but after Kobe you’ll never find another protocol,
nice ender, cool wordplay again...

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Mariah

I've been through worse, I can walk the walk, so I won't regret this, hell
I'll just state the fact, that your verse is shit, so POO's represented well
meh

Dude listen, I'm predicted to win...and that's not a joke bitch so cut it out
2 people picked you though, it's just a shame that your vote doesn't count
ok personal

You won't be a mountain to shit, I've used the wording here on purpose
Because you're the first Apex, that's pushing hard to near the surface
ok

I ain't known for hitting low, but this one's the truth, so let's all listen up
See he's the Lord of Pens < because no human would actually give a fuck
nah not feelin much

I 'm new to this league, it's true...but I blast through geeks you know?
Fat ass got us a new champ because the belt only fit him 2 weeks ago
lol nice

Dude you're punches are missing, I'm not even caring about the eThreats
All you can do is Swing, Swing.....to find out your an All-American Reject
not bad - creative i might say

Your a battler that I can't copy, there's a reason I don't wanna touch that
Because I'd try my best to get to the Point...if that crew didn't suck ass
ok

Dude is a fake vet, a loser see, thinking he's got room to breathe, wrong
Cause we know I'll just smother Apex like when I am putting my bra on
lol wow really? weird punch but ok

Ain't into comedians cause they aren't funny, so I don't care about it see
But if I put all jokes aside, then I wouldn't have to deal with Apex this week
cool ender
.
.
nice battle guys
apex - u had great wordplay, nice set-ups and creative punches and a cool personal use...what really threw me off with ur verse, is that u battled her like u would talk 2 a hoe on the street instead of an emcee....that was ur weakness, cuz that 2 me is a noobish concept used against a female emcee....and based on ur other bars, ur not a noob
mariah - u had sum personals thru out ur verse, sum nice lines, creative as well...however u started off wit a weak opener but u kept with the consistency afterwards...i didn't really see anything bad but humor and personals keep the interest in a verse
based on what i read, it was hard 2 decide but i'd go wit.....
v/ Mariah
reasons above....