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    Black History....On this day...

    Saturday night: Feburary 10, 1990
    Tommorrow's what I await yes my freedom to states
    Can't sleep I lie awake as the sun sets in it's place
    Thoughts flash of my past 27 years inside
    From flase acquisitions on my position or role in apartheid
    Locked inside this cell for years the nights and the days
    Life's pleasures I've been denied and deprived for decades
    Jail reinforced habbits were already entrenched
    Cold nights and hot mornings causing a bodily stinch
    The mind thumps as the mine dumps remind us
    Of this confined lust for the diamonds that they grind up
    All this time I've been lockdown I sit and think of my child
    And how I got charged serving a sentence in the Rivonia Trail


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    Sunday Morning: Feburary 11, 1990

    So it's ya big day Mandela! says the guard when he speaks
    As he slides a plate of porridge, fruit, milk and prepared sheep
    Yes it is, im anxious for a better society my feelings are churning
    Never wavering my devotion to democracy, equality and learning
    Upon Freedom's presence some prisoners wish to evade with him
    Despite terrible provocation, I never answered racism with racism
    Anxiety overwhelms this realm of our now private society
    Rioting at the helms compelled in our newly found soberiety
    Tiring yet well rested for my derailed investments
    My delegation suspended weapons from detailed questions
    First plans upon Earths lands a daughters demand
    The cursed man in hurts stance seeking a first chance
    In a life that symbolises the triumph of the human spirit over mans inhumanity to man..


    On this day in history Nelson Mandela was released from prsion....and continued to liberate his country....


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    Re: Black History....On this day...

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    Re: Black History....On this day...

    Yeah I read about this in the newspaper, that's pretty interesting.

    Also last year, Cheney shot his hunting partner, damn it felt like a month ago he did that.

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    Re: Black History....On this day...

    damm im feeling dis piece for sure yo dis was hotttttt keep dropping fire ma nig
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    Re: Black History....On this day...

    Okay i liked your approach to the topic, but as for the writen piece itself i found it quite bland and not very much origionality as far as concepts and imagery... it's like you were concertrating more on the flow, yet the scentances didn't match up at times in terms of meaning, the whole thing was a slight contradiction... not sure if you ment it to sound like that, but as the topic goes i doubt it. There were some up points to this piece though i guess... You showed alot of potential when it comes to story telling, but i just thought the way you went about it just didn't really appeal to me personally. But hey, nice job anyway man.
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