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Verses due Saturday. 11:59pm EST
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must vote on 5 battles
Swaying or feeding = -1 vote
Regular Rules
Verses due Saturday. 11:59pm EST
Voting Ends Monday
must vote on 5 battles
Swaying or feeding = -1 vote
finally.
20?
20 is fine.
(btw you better go 20)
(i was thinking about going 24 or 26, but either way it doesnt matter to me.)
listen bitch, your reign is over, so watch me leave this dumb fuck discarded
cuz u could give me a piece of your mind, but then i'd be somewhat retarded
im the up and comer... the new hot thing, so feebs can relax or he'll bleed
cuz he can handle da truth, he just loses to the other cats in his league
sucks, im the only contender... u've had it easy, but now your aimin south
every since i wrote nick on my cock, feebs wont keep my name out his mouth
see... u've came poor weeks in a row, you dont know how that grief fails us
so im gonna tell you to brush up ya skills, just to make your teeth jealous
tides have changed duke, as my skills blossom ur holdin on with a coward grip
feebs the admin, so ill tie his shoe laces together n' send 'em on a power trip
your old and now we got philly runnin' the league, so imma be blunt to you
... its not that you dont want to mod, s'more like no one WANTS YOU TO!
so you can go to another site, cuz i run shit now... your just testin the breed
he probably hates me... cuz $pit left and he STILL isnt the best in the league
your cocky as usual, which is cool... u'll have a problem duckin fire
but if your supporting true talk... i'd rather be a fucking liar
now he's got this attitude of slack, actin like this never meant much to him
when feebs follows his dreams... even though he'll NEVER catch up to them
im tryin to piss this geek off, but he's always happy, except when he's owned
so feeb'll put his foot down... followed by another as he steps from the throne
king me.
Last edited by Nick James.; January 24th, 2007 at 08:59 AM
I saw your verse last week, and you were on the brink of respectOriginally Posted by Nick James.
till you didn't bring out the big guns cuz you think I'm a threat
You're nothing chump, I lose interest way before your personals finish
Only way your text would be brilliant is if you did commercials for guinness
u beefed with heychoo cuz you're in champ match. Listen, im trying to speak
Personally, I try not to use arguments that will only apply for a week
I attack rhymes when fags fill entire verses with wack lines...
this battle will leave you wanting a W-2... but this isn't tax time
This'll be easy as hell judging by the fact this queer's lame
seriously, what kind of uncreative loser registers as their REAL NAME?
Come on Nick, post some pictures of your gun & display the trigger
Not sure if I'm beating Nick or James. but both sound white, quit saying nigga
still owning you, fag, even if you act like I'm brittle & weathered
you're one of my favorite heads. But I like the deer & bear a little bit better
Don't want to hear you rapping... so when you buckle what's norm...
is how I'll give you the right to remain silent... except its in uppercut form
Don't think ya nice, you're still wack even if you had advanced beginnings..
Tour ya lines, cuz I showed em around... they had no chance of winning
nicks too egotistical for his skill level, so this merking is his
nick being wack? out of character... thats the kind of person he is
listen bitch, your reign is over, so watch me leave this dumb fuck discarded
cuz u could give me a piece of your mind, but then i'd be somewhat retarded
played concept
im the up and comer... the new hot thing, so feebs can relax or he'll bleed
cuz he can handle da truth, he just loses to the other cats in his league
meh
sucks, im the only contender... u've had it easy, but now your aimin south
every since i wrote nick on my cock, feebs wont keep my name out his mouth
played again
see... u've came poor weeks in a row, you dont know how that grief fails us
so im gonna tell you to brush up ya skills, just to make your teeth jealous
meh
tides have changed duke, as my skills blossom ur holdin on with a coward grip
feebs the admin, so ill tie his shoe laces together n' send 'em on a power trip
lol, meh
your old and now we got philly runnin' the league, so imma be blunt to you
... its not that you dont want to mod, s'more like no one WANTS YOU TO!
iight
so you can go to another site, cuz i run shit now... your just testin the breed
he probably hates me... cuz $pit left and he STILL isnt the best in the league
meh
your cocky as usual, which is cool... u'll have a problem duckin fire
but if your supporting true talk... i'd rather be a fucking liar
iight
now he's got this attitude of slack, actin like this never meant much to him
when feebs follows his dreams... even though he'll NEVER catch up to them
lol, coo
im tryin to piss this geek off, but he's always happy, except when he's owned
so feeb'll put his foot down... followed by another as he steps from the throne
iight
Nick IMO this was one of ya worst verses.... witty yes, but played... i think if u read up n got caught up on what's played n what's not you'd be very nice
vs
I saw your verse last week, and you were on the brink of respect
till you didn't bring out the big guns cuz you think I'm a threat
lmao, cuz of the quote
You're nothing chump, I lose interest way before your personals finish
Only way your text would be brilliant is if you did commercials for guinness
meh
u beefed with heychoo cuz you're in champ match. Listen, im trying to speak
Personally, I try not to use arguments that will only apply for a week
lol i get it
I attack rhymes when fags fill entire verses with wack lines...
this battle will leave you wanting a W-2... but this isn't tax time
nah smoka used a w-2 punch against $pit
This'll be easy as hell judging by the fact this queer's lame
seriously, what kind of uncreative loser registers as their REAL NAME?
meh
Come on Nick, post some pictures of your gun & display the trigger
Not sure if I'm beating Nick or James. but both sound white, quit saying nigga
lol, meh
still owning you, fag, even if you act like I'm brittle & weathered
you're one of my favorite heads. But I like the deer & bear a little bit better
aha.. coo
Don't want to hear you rapping... so when you buckle what's norm...
is how I'll give you the right to remain silent... except its in uppercut form
lol
Don't think ya nice, you're still wack even if you had advanced beginnings..
Tour ya lines, cuz I showed em around... they had no chance of winning
nice one
nicks too egotistical for his skill level, so this merking is his
nick being wack? out of character... thats the kind of person he is
iight
V/feeble
you are on a higher level than me, feebs. the way you can word almost anything into a hard hitting punch is just amazing. it sucks that i pretty much have no idea of whats played, because i havent been textin very long. i mean those punches sound hard to me. it'll probably hold me back for a while. but good battle feeble.
nick you've been texting for a year and a half.
btw
VOTE FEEBLE CUZ IT WAS GOODER AND HIT BIGGER
glycerine.
listen bitch, your reign is over, so watch me leave this dumb fuck discarded
cuz u could give me a piece of your mind, but then i'd be somewhat retarded
^^not a bad flip on a played concept
im the up and comer... the new hot thing, so feebs can relax or he'll bleed
cuz he can handle da truth, he just loses to the other cats in his league
^^lol
sucks, im the only contender... u've had it easy, but now your aimin south
every since i wrote nick on my cock, feebs wont keep my name out his mouth
^^meh
see... u've came poor weeks in a row, you dont know how that grief fails us
so im gonna tell you to brush up ya skills, just to make your teeth jealous
^^shoulda done it the other way around like brush yo teeth cos ya skills etc...
tides have changed duke, as my skills blossom ur holdin on with a coward grip
feebs the admin, so ill tie his shoe laces together n' send 'em on a power trip
^^meh
your old and now we got philly runnin' the league, so imma be blunt to you
... its not that you dont want to mod, s'more like no one WANTS YOU TO!
^^nah too simple and played
so you can go to another site, cuz i run shit now... your just testin the breed
he probably hates me... cuz $pit left and he STILL isnt the best in the league
^^again played
your cocky as usual, which is cool... u'll have a problem duckin fire
but if your supporting true talk... i'd rather be a fucking liar
^^ok but simple n not hard enough
now he's got this attitude of slack, actin like this never meant much to him
when feebs follows his dreams... even though he'll NEVER catch up to them
^^aight
im tryin to piss this geek off, but he's always happy, except when he's owned
so feeb'll put his foot down... followed by another as he steps from the throne
^^heh ok
not a bad verse
vs.
I saw your verse last week, and you were on the brink of respect
till you didn't bring out the big guns cuz you think I'm a threat
^^yeah good idea using the quote, but this wasnt exactly worded hard
You're nothing chump, I lose interest way before your personals finish
Only way your text would be brilliant is if you did commercials for guinness
^^eh
u beefed with heychoo cuz you're in champ match. Listen, im trying to speak
Personally, I try not to use arguments that will only apply for a week
^^hehe
I attack rhymes when fags fill entire verses with wack lines...
this battle will leave you wanting a W-2... but this isn't tax time
^^not hard at all
This'll be easy as hell judging by the fact this queer's lame
seriously, what kind of uncreative loser registers as their REAL NAME?
^^weak
Come on Nick, post some pictures of your gun & display the trigger
Not sure if I'm beating Nick or James. but both sound white, quit saying nigga
^^not harsh
still owning you, fag, even if you act like I'm brittle & weathered
you're one of my favorite heads. But I like the deer & bear a little bit better
^^lmao...took me a while to get it though, you coulda worded it nicer to be honest
Don't want to hear you rapping... so when you buckle what's norm...
is how I'll give you the right to remain silent... except its in uppercut form
^^nice
Don't think ya nice, you're still wack even if you had advanced beginnings..
Tour ya lines, cuz I showed em around... they had no chance of winning
^^not bad
nicks too egotistical for his skill level, so this merking is his
nick being wack? out of character... thats the kind of person he is
^^heh aight
feeble started pretty weak here, thought it was gonna be close, but had some nice hits at the end.
feeble, don't think ya too good to vote this week, drop some votes this time
v/feeble
Lol, i just sort of forgot to vote last week, i swear. and thanks Nick. although I fuck up on wording occasionally though, for example I think I did on the guinness concept. I think you'll eventually be one of the best heads if not the best head in this league. I feel repetitive saying this so much but reading a lot of battles really helps people not come played. you definitely have the creativity, and good concepts, you're held back sometimes because you're still relatively new and havent seen a lot of stuff. As you keep writing the wording gets easier also.
Pz
word. ill take this as a learning experience.
i look forward to battling you again in the future.
listen bitch, your reign is over, so watch me leave this dumb fuck discarded
cuz u could give me a piece of your mind, but then i'd be somewhat retarded
ok nice flip of old shit
im the up and comer... the new hot thing, so feebs can relax or he'll bleed
cuz he can handle da truth, he just loses to the other cats in his league
eh
sucks, im the only contender... u've had it easy, but now your aimin south
every since i wrote nick on my cock, feebs wont keep my name out his mouth
played type shit
see... u've came poor weeks in a row, you dont know how that grief fails us
so im gonna tell you to brush up ya skills, just to make your teeth jealous
played - brush up on nething...
tides have changed duke, as my skills blossom ur holdin on with a coward grip
feebs the admin, so ill tie his shoe laces together n' send 'em on a power trip
liked it
your old and now we got philly runnin' the league, so imma be blunt to you
... its not that you dont want to mod, s'more like no one WANTS YOU TO!
eh
so you can go to another site, cuz i run shit now... your just testin the breed
he probably hates me... cuz $pit left and he STILL isnt the best in the league
okkkkk
your cocky as usual, which is cool... u'll have a problem duckin fire
but if your supporting true talk... i'd rather be a fucking liar
too easy but Ok
now he's got this attitude of slack, actin like this never meant much to him
when feebs follows his dreams... even though he'll NEVER catch up to them
ehhh again^^^
im tryin to piss this geek off, but he's always happy, except when he's owned
so feeb'll put his foot down... followed by another as he steps from the throne
great close
ok for real...
next..
I saw your verse last week, and you were on the brink of respect
till you didn't bring out the big guns cuz you think I'm a threat
not really
You're nothing chump, I lose interest way before your personals finish
Only way your text would be brilliant is if you did commercials for guinness
ha thought of this b4 ......nice
u beefed with heychoo cuz you're in champ match. Listen, im trying to speak
Personally, I try not to use arguments that will only apply for a week
eh...
I attack rhymes when fags fill entire verses with wack lines...
this battle will leave you wanting a W-2... but this isn't tax time
eh... seen/heard it
This'll be easy as hell judging by the fact this queer's lame
seriously, what kind of uncreative loser registers as their REAL NAME?
stretch cuz it isnt...if not REALLY played troughout Years.....c'mon now!?! o?!?
Come on Nick, post some pictures of your gun & display the trigger
Not sure if I'm beating Nick or James. but both sound white, quit saying nigga
o
still owning you, fag, even if you act like I'm brittle & weathered
you're one of my favorite heads. But I like the deer & bear a little bit better
eh y u comin played?
Don't want to hear you rapping... so when you buckle what's norm...
is how I'll give you the right to remain silent... except its in uppercut form
eh .. played type again...just old easily thought up wtf?
Don't think ya nice, you're still wack even if you had advanced beginnings..
Tour ya lines, cuz I showed em around... they had no chance of winning
eh ok ...predictable.... easily complex?
nicks too egotistical for his skill level, so this merking is his
nick being wack? out of character... thats the kind of person he is
nah?
u had a couple good bars yo they were dope but wtf? at coming played concept type old on'em?? ... i unno just not as original as u've ever ca,e that for sure.....nicks closer edged it out IMO.... vote james.
If I was allowed to vote I'd have to give this to Nick..
I don't know Feebs, some of your concepts seem less polished than they used to, both in rhyme scheme and creativity.. it's almost like you're getting away from wit and leaning toward insults that have less impact.. I felt Nick had alot of wit, the name on the dick thing was rofl, Nick's opener sucked to me but he was more consistant
anyway just my opinion, you're both excellent writers, and of course Feeble you ARE better, but I think you lost this one.
pz
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