Regular Rules
Verses due Saturday. 11:59pm EST
Voting Ends Monday
must vote on 5 battles
Swaying or feeding = -1 vote
Regular Rules
Verses due Saturday. 11:59pm EST
Voting Ends Monday
must vote on 5 battles
Swaying or feeding = -1 vote
your not going to be undefeated after this week.
10-20.
Hi. 10.
Cooler than the other side of the pillow
EDIT:
fuck this geek, i think we know he will lose, then return w/ a hatin vote
n' im aggresive, but i shouldnt have to beat Q to prove i can take a joke
and i seen you in WBL, ur the no showin queen... shit, you breed ducks
but this dude is setting standards, which explains why the league sucks
you dont want none, nick james will put you deep, past the ground
cuz you might play by the rules... but they dont want your ass around
cant you see? im the shit, n' im known to merk mean and clown
while this pervert has been at it for ages... thirteen and down
n' you got a nice rep, but watch as all your aliases get choked then hit
cuz i think oneduh is just a rude way of saying how many votes u'll get
i read ur verse against hens, it was so shady i was fightin boredom
cuz its like Q has enough rings to rival brady and michael jordan
your not funny, and i doubt ill 'lol' unless i somehow choose to chuckle parts
but you might be under the impression... after the bruise and knuckle marks
so face it, ur not cut out for text... shit, homie is dumb so i roast fighters
cuz i'd tell you to get real... if i didnt think he was one of ur ghost writers
your just below exceptional, nothin to me, cuz my shit be sounding deep
n' i cant get to bed, but since i found his verses i've quit counting sheep
n' i seen predictions, now i know you hate hearing the chatter from kids
but i'd be willing to step aside... maybe long enough to shatter your ribs
20.
Last edited by Nick James.; January 20th, 2007 at 08:12 PM
U spit a good line? Shit's probably bitten or flipped yoOriginally Posted by Nick James.
But u know Jace haven't battled in years..
n u still manage to use 1 of his quotes!
How pathetic, and ur streak is over, its gonna end in this match
Cuz there's a sign u're gonna stick to losin..it's already taped on ur back
Showin off your fake guns but noone's expected to die
Livin by ur gun? Then all this time u've been mockin havin a life
Some peeps doubtin me but I know it's easier for them to lie
& if James got ripped by Brown it'll seem like HE actually commited suicide
Stormin into multiple leagues, u wanna become a martyr?
Trynna to create a buzz, hope the lighting strikes u harder
Think ur flyer than me? How? This kid blows like a Cannon I swear
Ur punches aren't channelin, Nick..yall both been thrown off air
My past opponets dropped nothin, seems like its been a trend
Be cool? Then well its all in good knowin u aint gonna let ^that end
Ego? You aint fracturin shit plus I ain't Fracture and shit
Your cause from mistaken identity got u thinkin ur actually $pit
Ya mom's carboard box been ragged n rotten, & mom stayed hard for ages
Guess it was ya mom's time..for her & her home to finally trade places
Don't get ahead of urself young'n cuz my drops are lethal b
U ain't gonna be successful when ur droppin Feeble, Keys
Cooler than the other side of the pillow
fuck this geek, i think we know he will lose, then return w/ a hatin vote
n' im aggresive, but i shouldnt have to beat Q to prove i can take a joke
^^seen this, but not bad flip
and i seen you in WBL, ur the no showin queen... shit, you breed ducks
but this dude is setting standards, which explains why the league sucks
^^hah, pretty nice
you dont want none, nick james will put you deep, past the ground
cuz you might play by the rules... but they dont want your ass around
^^meh, reaching
cant you see? im the shit, n' im known to merk mean and clown
while this pervert has been at it for ages... thirteen and down
^^nice concept, coulda worded it better
n' you got a nice rep, but watch as all your aliases get choked then hit
cuz i think oneduh is just a rude way of saying how many votes u'll get
^^not bad, but I doubt he is oneduh
i read ur verse against hens, it was so shady i was fightin boredom
cuz its like Q has enough rings to rival brady and michael jordan
^^naaah, almost any kind of voting ring punch is gonna sound played
your not funny, and i doubt ill 'lol' unless i somehow choose to chuckle parts
but you might be under the impression... after the bruise and knuckle marks
^^mad played
so face it, ur not cut out for text... shit, homie is dumb so i roast fighters
cuz i'd tell you to get real... if i didnt think he was one of ur ghost writers
^^hehe
your just below exceptional, nothin to me, cuz my shit be sounding deep
n' i cant get to bed, but since i found his verses i've quit counting sheep
^^eh
n' i seen predictions, i know your hearing the chatter from kids
but i'd be to willing step aside... long enough to shatter your ribs
^^bad wording
vs.
U spit a good line? Shit's probably bitten or flipped yo
But u know Jace haven't battled in years..
n u still manage to use 1 of his quotes!
^^not really insulting
How pathetic, and ur streak is over, its gonna end in this match
Cuz there's a sign u're gonna stick to losin..it's already taped on ur back
^^wording was all wrong imo
Showin off your fake guns but noone's expected to die
Livin by ur gun? Then all this time u've been mockin havin a life
^^aight
Some peeps doubtin me but I know it's easier for them to lie
& if James got ripped by Brown it'll seem like HE actually commited suicide
^^meh
Stormin into multiple leagues, u wanna become a martyr?
Trynna to create a buzz, hope the lighting strikes u harder
^^nah
Think ur flyer than me? How? This kid blows like a Cannon I swear
Ur punches aren't channelin, Nick..yall both been thrown off air
^^aight
My past opponets dropped nothin, seems like its been a trend
Be cool? Then well its all in good knowin u aint gonna let ^that end
^^aight
Ego? You aint fracturin shit plus I ain't Fracture and shit
Your cause from mistaken identity got u thinkin ur actually $pit
Ya mom's carboard box been ragged n rotten, & mom stayed hard for ages
Guess it was ya mom's time..for her & her home to finally trade places
Don't get ahead of urself young'n cuz my drops are lethal b
U ain't gonna be successful when ur droppin Feeble, Keys
^^ I dunno man, seems you tried a load of interesting concepts but worded them all wierd/wrong/not harsh
v/Nick
both came ok... nicks opener was nice... really wasnt feelin much of Q's verse.... lot of missed shots u took man....seemed like u forced to much and nick was more consistent
v - james
Would be cool if this had more than just 2 votes
Cooler than the other side of the pillow
word.Originally Posted by Mr. Q`
fuck this geek, i think we know he will lose, then return w/ a hatin vote
n' im aggresive, but i shouldnt have to beat Q to prove i can take a joke
^^played
and i seen you in WBL, ur the no showin queen... shit, you breed ducks
but this dude is setting standards, which explains why the league sucks
^^already used this season
you dont want none, nick james will put you deep, past the ground
cuz you might play by the rules... but they dont want your ass around
^^meh
cant you see? im the shit, n' im known to merk mean and clown
while this pervert has been at it for ages... thirteen and down
^^lol
n' you got a nice rep, but watch as all your aliases get choked then hit
cuz i think oneduh is just a rude way of saying how many votes u'll get
^^meh
i read ur verse against hens, it was so shady i was fightin boredom
cuz its like Q has enough rings to rival brady and michael jordan
^^played
your not funny, and i doubt ill 'lol' unless i somehow choose to chuckle parts
but you might be under the impression... after the bruise and knuckle marks
^^played
so face it, ur not cut out for text... shit, homie is dumb so i roast fighters
cuz i'd tell you to get real... if i didnt think he was one of ur ghost writers
^^meh
your just below exceptional, nothin to me, cuz my shit be sounding deep
n' i cant get to bed, but since i found his verses i've quit counting sheep
^^meh
n' i seen predictions, i know your hearing the chatter from kids
but i'd be to willing step aside... long enough to shatter your ribs
^^played wordplay
vs.
U spit a good line? Shit's probably bitten or flipped yo
But u know Jace haven't battled in years..
n u still manage to use 1 of his quotes!
^^nah
How pathetic, and ur streak is over, its gonna end in this match
Cuz there's a sign u're gonna stick to losin..it's already taped on ur back
^^meh
Showin off your fake guns but noone's expected to die
Livin by ur gun? Then all this time u've been mockin havin a life
^^meh
Some peeps doubtin me but I know it's easier for them to lie
& if James got ripped by Brown it'll seem like HE actually commited suicide
^^aha, weak
Stormin into multiple leagues, u wanna become a martyr?
Trynna to create a buzz, hope the lighting strikes u harder
^^nah
Think ur flyer than me? How? This kid blows like a Cannon I swear
Ur punches aren't channelin, Nick..yall both been thrown off air
^^meh
My past opponets dropped nothin, seems like its been a trend
Be cool? Then well its all in good knowin u aint gonna let ^that end
^^meh
Ego? You aint fracturin shit plus I ain't Fracture and shit
Your cause from mistaken identity got u thinkin ur actually $pit
^^meh
Ya mom's carboard box been ragged n rotten, & mom stayed hard for ages
Guess it was ya mom's time..for her & her home to finally trade places
^^meh
Don't get ahead of urself young'n cuz my drops are lethal b
U ain't gonna be successful when ur droppin Feeble, Keys
^^nah
V/nick
fuck this geek, i think we know he will lose, then return w/ a hatin vote
n' im aggresive, but i shouldnt have to beat Q to prove i can take a joke
ok, original setup
and i seen you in WBL, ur the no showin queen... shit, you breed ducks
but this dude is setting standards, which explains why the league sucks
iight
you dont want none, nick james will put you deep, past the ground
cuz you might play by the rules... but they dont want your ass around
lol, ok
cant you see? im the shit, n' im known to merk mean and clown
while this pervert has been at it for ages... thirteen and down
lmao, oh man
n' you got a nice rep, but watch as all your aliases get choked then hit
cuz i think oneduh is just a rude way of saying how many votes u'll get
lol, ok
i read ur verse against hens, it was so shady i was fightin boredom
cuz its like Q has enough rings to rival brady and michael jordan
ok ring line
your not funny, and i doubt ill 'lol' unless i somehow choose to chuckle parts
but you might be under the impression... after the bruise and knuckle marks
nah, played concept
so face it, ur not cut out for text... shit, homie is dumb so i roast fighters
cuz i'd tell you to get real... if i didnt think he was one of ur ghost writers
lol, coo
your just below exceptional, nothin to me, cuz my shit be sounding deep
n' i cant get to bed, but since i found his verses i've quit counting sheep
lol
n' i seen predictions, now i know you hate hearing the chatter from kids
but i'd be willing to step aside... maybe long enough to shatter your ribs
ok
pretty good consistency, i was feelin this verse, the wording was done smooth in the flow, multis, decent structure. the punches came off harsh. i liked rules and ages line. when i seen those two play out one after the other i was just thinkin.. yea its over.
vs
U spit a good line? Shit's probably bitten or flipped yo
But u know Jace haven't battled in years..
n u still manage to use 1 of his quotes!
eh, not harsh
How pathetic, and ur streak is over, its gonna end in this match
Cuz there's a sign u're gonna stick to losin..it's already taped on ur back
ok
Showin off your fake guns but noone's expected to die
Livin by ur gun? Then all this time u've been mockin havin a life
nah
Some peeps doubtin me but I know it's easier for them to lie
& if James got ripped by Brown it'll seem like HE actually commited suicide
lol, creative, better
Stormin into multiple leagues, u wanna become a martyr?
Trynna to create a buzz, hope the lighting strikes u harder
iight
Think ur flyer than me? How? This kid blows like a Cannon I swear
Ur punches aren't channelin, Nick..yall both been thrown off air
ok nameplay
My past opponets dropped nothin, seems like its been a trend
Be cool? Then well its all in good knowin u aint gonna let ^that end
mehh, not harsh
Ego? You aint fracturin shit plus I ain't Fracture and shit
Your cause from mistaken identity got u thinkin ur actually $pit
ehh, nah
Ya mom's carboard box been ragged n rotten, & mom stayed hard for ages
Guess it was ya mom's time..for her & her home to finally trade places
nah...
Don't get ahead of urself young'n cuz my drops are lethal b
U ain't gonna be successful when ur droppin Feeble, Keys
mehh
your pretty good at metaphors, the flow was decent, so was the structure, the punches were mostly clever, but it wasnt taking a harsh effect or sting, i wasnt feelin some of the wording, but it seems you have ideas to run with, just word them harsh
v/Nick
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lmao....nick, regaurdless of how big of a faggot are, you've been droppin pretty nice lately...lotta shit was funny, lmao @ the 13 and down line...q, you had some nice concepts, but your wording let you down big time man...the only thing i really liked was the brown line...nick took this kinda easily..
glycerine.
Word.
Good luck in the champ match Nick
Cooler than the other side of the pillow
fuck this geek, i think we know he will lose, then return w/ a hatin vote
n' im aggresive, but i shouldnt have to beat Q to prove i can take a joke
yea...not really
and i seen you in WBL, ur the no showin queen... shit, you breed ducks
but this dude is setting standards, which explains why the league sucks
aight
you dont want none, nick james will put you deep, past the ground
cuz you might play by the rules... but they dont want your ass around
lol yeah
cant you see? im the shit, n' im known to merk mean and clown
while this pervert has been at it for ages... thirteen and down
aight
n' you got a nice rep, but watch as all your aliases get choked then hit
cuz i think oneduh is just a rude way of saying how many votes u'll get
aight
i read ur verse against hens, it was so shady i was fightin boredom
cuz its like Q has enough rings to rival brady and michael jordan
yeah, would of hit harder if it was against pen
your not funny, and i doubt ill 'lol' unless i somehow choose to chuckle parts
but you might be under the impression... after the bruise and knuckle marks
...aiiight
so face it, ur not cut out for text... shit, homie is dumb so i roast fighters
cuz i'd tell you to get real... if i didnt think he was one of ur ghost writers
naah...miss
your just below exceptional, nothin to me, cuz my shit be sounding deep
n' i cant get to bed, but since i found his verses i've quit counting sheep
played
n' i seen predictions, now i know you hate hearing the chatter from kids
but i'd be willing to step aside... maybe long enough to shatter your ribs
niiice
Vs
U spit a good line? Shit's probably bitten or flipped yo
But u know Jace haven't battled in years..
n u still manage to use 1 of his quotes!
eh...
How pathetic, and ur streak is over, its gonna end in this match
Cuz there's a sign u're gonna stick to losin..it's already taped on ur back
yeah...coulda been better
Showin off your fake guns but noone's expected to die
Livin by ur gun? Then all this time u've been mockin havin a life
nah...
Some peeps doubtin me but I know it's easier for them to lie
& if James got ripped by Brown it'll seem like HE actually commited suicide
....naah
Stormin into multiple leagues, u wanna become a martyr?
Trynna to create a buzz, hope the lighting strikes u harder
eh...weird punch
Think ur flyer than me? How? This kid blows like a Cannon I swear
Ur punches aren't channelin, Nick..yall both been thrown off air
nah
My past opponets dropped nothin, seems like its been a trend
Be cool? Then well its all in good knowin u aint gonna let ^that end
yeah, aight
Ego? You aint fracturin shit plus I ain't Fracture and shit
Your cause from mistaken identity got u thinkin ur actually $pit
eh?Giving Nick props?
Ya mom's carboard box been ragged n rotten, & mom stayed hard for ages
Guess it was ya mom's time..for her & her home to finally trade places
eh...wording was off
Don't get ahead of urself young'n cuz my drops are lethal b
U ain't gonna be successful when ur droppin Feeble, Keys
filler
V/Nick, consistent throughtout, wasn't much to really hate on, nice job. Mr Q, alot of badly worded punches that really didn't hit for me, they came off soft or fillerlike.