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Thread: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

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    HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    check. 30?
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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    fuck no, 8. just playing. 16 is fine with me, unless you post first. if you post first then go what you want.

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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    Bitch.. I'm gonna beat you so bad you can't refute this bruising
    I can't tell if "Keyed" is your username or your excuse for losing
    do the math, half of your predictions were just what I said to be nice
    and you had to predict yourself just to be predicted instead of me twice,
    I'll fuck you up faggot. I'll destroy you once I assemble this hunch
    so TAKE THAT... which I know you'll only do if it resembles a punch
    the whole league can see you're elevating, im just speaking it sooner..
    you just haven't realized your full potential... is being decent in junior
    next week I expect your vote Keyed.. its only right exalting feeble
    when you reword lines, Asians have a new reason flip insults their people
    girls will only tie the knot if it's around your neck. dont be gay & lie dude
    Liking your punches is like an engagement, you'll never catch me saying I do
    you're from the burbs so stop thinking you're hard. i wont even front ya spits..
    acting sheltered... yet you only remind me of awning with a Y in front of it
    Damn. you thinking you nice lately, got an over-bloated head to carry...
    I've seen your ego developing.. and I guess down syndrome is hereditary

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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    want the truth? I really can't compare to this fake
    he comes with the dopest openers that never works on legs
    Quote Originally Posted by Feeble MInded
    how did u not know rb had a bad rep? a couple years ago u couldn't get signed into some other leagues if they knew u were from rb. they would ignore u and clown u
    damn I feel your pain, thats lame, I really feel sorry
    'cuz I bet you got clowned and never made a league..
    ..'n that it had NOTHIN' to do with RB
    M~M was my mentor back when I was down right whack
    'n he always said "you'll be the next feeble"
    ..dunno why he put me down like that
    'n I heard ya high school had a jew on the b-ball team..thats sad
    'n yeah you're in AI...to make up for the game you'll never have
    everyone knows 'Feebs' now? hes gon' soft ya see
    'n you can tell hes gone bitch, when theres no El in Feebs
    its gon' feel like I'm tacklin' when I get on you cuh
    'n you're a good sport, they just don't make helmet yamacas
    homo, you know though, at least you don't have to defend the nation
    but naw, Feeb's text is straight...the rest of him is under investigation
    think feebs would have a girl? nope..noones lovin' you man?
    'n dudes sexlife is JUST like clock work...nothin' but hands

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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    M~M was my mentor back when I was down right whack
    'n he always said "you'll be the next feeble"
    ..dunno why he put me down like that
    ^lol.a lil corny but funny
    homo, you know though, at least you don't have to defend the nation
    but naw, Feeb's text is straight...the rest of him is under investigation
    ^Lol.
    think feebs would have a girl? nope..noones lovin' you man?
    'n dudes sexlife is JUST like clock work...nothin' but hands
    ^Barely...


    vs.


    do the math, half of your predictions were just what I said to be nice
    and you had to predict yourself just to be predicted instead of me twice,
    ^ha.k
    I'll fuck you up faggot. I'll destroy you once I assemble this hunch
    so TAKE THAT... which I know you'll only do if it resembles a punch
    ^ha.
    the whole league can see you're elevating, im just speaking it sooner..
    you just haven't realized your full potential... is being decent in junior
    ^RofLMao!!!!!!Nice!
    you're from the burbs so stop thinking you're hard. i wont even front ya spits..
    acting sheltered... yet you only remind me of awning with a Y in front of it
    ^pretty good.
    Damn. you thinking you nice lately, got an over-bloated head to carry...
    I've seen your ego developing.. and I guess down syndrome is hereditary
    ^Barely.I liked it tho'...


    Overall/-Pretty good battle,decent punches thrown by both...I felt key'd sorta slack'd on sum of his wording,while feebs had that opener which I didnt care for.. being that key'd nameplays have been done to death,IMO.. but That Jr line was pretty much Nice and funny.. a lil harsh too.. but key'd had that "Next feeble" line which i liked(bit corny,yea) an the investigation line was nice too.. an the clock line was a bit funny but lacked a lil in the wording.. not bad nor decent but pretty good... but feebs just had the edge a bit more the 1st line I quoted wasnt really worth it... so take that off an still feeble just out punched Key'd here..IMO.. Nothing to do with RB line was ugh,just to bland...IMo.
    decent read

    v/-Feeble.

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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    Bitch.. I'm gonna beat you so bad you can't refute this bruising
    I can't tell if "Keyed" is your username or your excuse for losing
    ^^haha havent seen anyone word this so nicely
    do the math, half of your predictions were just what I said to be nice
    and you had to predict yourself just to be predicted instead of me twice,
    ^^meh
    I'll fuck you up faggot. I'll destroy you once I assemble this hunch
    so TAKE THAT... which I know you'll only do if it resembles a punch
    ^^mm, didnt like the wording
    the whole league can see you're elevating, im just speaking it sooner..
    you just haven't realized your full potential... is being decent in junior
    ^^lmao, schweet
    next week I expect your vote Keyed.. its only right exalting feeble
    when you reword lines, Asians have a new reason flip insults their people
    ^^hahaha
    girls will only tie the knot if it's around your neck. dont be gay & lie dude
    Liking your punches is like an engagement, you'll never catch me saying I do
    ^^reaching...
    you're from the burbs so stop thinking you're hard. i wont even front ya spits..
    acting sheltered... yet you only remind me of awning with a Y in front of it
    ^^not too bad
    Damn. you thinking you nice lately, got an over-bloated head to carry...
    I've seen your ego developing.. and I guess down syndrome is hereditary
    ^^aight


    want the truth? I really can't compare to this fake
    he comes with the dopest openers that never works on legs
    ^^eh
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Feeble MInded
    how did u not know rb had a bad rep? a couple years ago u couldn't get signed into some other leagues if they knew u were from rb. they would ignore u and clown u

    damn I feel your pain, thats lame, I really feel sorry
    'cuz I bet you got clowned and never made a league..
    ..'n that it had NOTHIN' to do with RB
    ^^meh, poor wording
    M~M was my mentor back when I was down right whack
    'n he always said "you'll be the next feeble"
    ..dunno why he put me down like that
    ^^heh not bad, just didnt word it harsh enough
    'n I heard ya high school had a jew on the b-ball team..thats sad
    'n yeah you're in AI...to make up for the game you'll never have
    ^^not too bad
    everyone knows 'Feebs' now? hes gon' soft ya see
    'n you can tell hes gone bitch, when theres no El in Feebs
    ^^aight
    its gon' feel like I'm tacklin' when I get on you cuh
    'n you're a good sport, they just don't make helmet yamacas
    ^^wtf's a yamaca?
    homo, you know though, at least you don't have to defend the nation
    but naw, Feeb's text is straight...the rest of him is under investigation
    ^^aight
    think feebs would have a girl? nope..noones lovin' you man?
    'n dudes sexlife is JUST like clock work...nothin' but hands
    ^^kinda forced the association there


    I dunno, Keyed had the concepts, but his wording is bland, needs to make it crisper and harder hitting. Feebs had a few nice crisp hits

    v/feeble

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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    Wow. A yamaca is the shit that jew wear.

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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    I dont follow jewish dressing traditions

    doesnt change the evaluation of that line cos you worded it all wrong, sorry mate

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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    vaskez thanks for the idea for that realizing your potential punch. u were talking about someone realizing something in chat and thats where i got the idea from. word

    nice verse keyed

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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    Bitch.. I'm gonna beat you so bad you can't refute this bruising
    I can't tell if "Keyed" is your username or your excuse for losing
    YOU FLIPPED THIS NICE BUT ITS STILL PLAYED
    do the math, half of your predictions were just what I said to be nice
    and you had to predict yourself just to be predicted instead of me twice,
    OK
    I'll fuck you up faggot. I'll destroy you once I assemble this hunch
    so TAKE THAT... which I know you'll only do if it resembles a punch
    MEH
    the whole league can see you're elevating, im just speaking it sooner..
    you just haven't realized your full potential... is being decent in junior
    GOOD, I USED A JUNIOR PUNCH THIS WEEK, SO IF U USING IT TAKES AWAY FROM MINE I`LL BE ANGRY...BUT YEH GOOD
    next week I expect your vote Keyed.. its only right exalting feeble
    when you reword lines, Asians have a new reason flip insults their people
    LOL
    girls will only tie the knot if it's around your neck. dont be gay & lie dude
    Liking your punches is like an engagement, you'll never catch me saying I do
    OK
    you're from the burbs so stop thinking you're hard. i wont even front ya spits..
    acting sheltered... yet you only remind me of awning with a Y in front of it
    VERY COMPLEX BUT WEAK PUNCH REALLY
    Damn. you thinking you nice lately, got an over-bloated head to carry...
    I've seen your ego developing.. and I guess down syndrome is hereditary
    OK
    vs

    want the truth? I really can't compare to this fake
    he comes with the dopest openers that never works on legs
    WORDED VERY SIMPLE BUT OK IDEA
    damn I feel your pain, thats lame, I really feel sorry
    'cuz I bet you got clowned and never made a league..
    ..'n that it had NOTHIN' to do with RB
    MEH
    M~M was my mentor back when I was down right whack
    'n he always said "you'll be the next feeble"
    ..dunno why he put me down like that
    OK
    'n I heard ya high school had a jew on the b-ball team..thats sad
    'n yeah you're in AI...to make up for the game you'll never have
    NOT REALLY
    everyone knows 'Feebs' now? hes gon' soft ya see
    'n you can tell hes gone bitch, when theres no El in Feebs
    OK
    its gon' feel like I'm tacklin' when I get on you cuh
    'n you're a good sport, they just don't make helmet yamacas
    ERM NO
    homo, you know though, at least you don't have to defend the nation
    but naw, Feeb's text is straight...the rest of him is under investigation
    LOL
    think feebs would have a girl? nope..noones lovin' you man?
    'n dudes sexlife is JUST like clock work...nothin' but hands
    NEARLY DUDE, DOPE CONCEPT BUT WORDING COULDA BEEN BETTER


    ERM WELL FEEBLE JUST EDGED THIS DUE TO HIS VERSE BEEN MORE POLISHED. I ACTUALLY LIKED KEYEDS CONCEPTS BETTER AND IF HE COULDVE MATCHED FEEBZ WORDING HE`DVE WON. CLOSE ISH

    BUT VOTE

    FEEBLE
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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    Bitch.. I'm gonna beat you so bad you can't refute this bruising
    I can't tell if "Keyed" is your username or your excuse for losing
    ^^meh
    do the math, half of your predictions were just what I said to be nice
    and you had to predict yourself just to be predicted instead of me twice,
    ^^emh
    I'll fuck you up faggot. I'll destroy you once I assemble this hunch
    so TAKE THAT... which I know you'll only do if it resembles a punch
    ^^lol
    the whole league can see you're elevating, im just speaking it sooner..
    you just haven't realized your full potential... is being decent in junior
    ^^rofl
    next week I expect your vote Keyed.. its only right exalting feeble
    when you reword lines, Asians have a new reason flip insults their people
    ^^lmao
    girls will only tie the knot if it's around your neck. dont be gay & lie dude
    Liking your punches is like an engagement, you'll never catch me saying I do
    ^^meh
    you're from the burbs so stop thinking you're hard. i wont even front ya spits..
    acting sheltered... yet you only remind me of awning with a Y in front of it
    ^^meh
    Damn. you thinking you nice lately, got an over-bloated head to carry...
    I've seen your ego developing.. and I guess down syndrome is hereditary
    ^^lol


    want the truth? I really can't compare to this fake
    he comes with the dopest openers that never works on legs
    ^^meh
    damn I feel your pain, thats lame, I really feel sorry
    'cuz I bet you got clowned and never made a league..
    ..'n that it had NOTHIN' to do with RB
    ^^meh
    M~M was my mentor back when I was down right whack
    'n he always said "you'll be the next feeble"
    ..dunno why he put me down like that
    ^^lol.. wording
    'n I heard ya high school had a jew on the b-ball team..thats sad
    'n yeah you're in AI...to make up for the game you'll never have
    ^^coo
    everyone knows 'Feebs' now? hes gon' soft ya see
    'n you can tell hes gone bitch, when theres no El in Feebs
    ^^meh
    its gon' feel like I'm tacklin' when I get on you cuh
    'n you're a good sport, they just don't make helmet yamacas
    ^^i get it, meh
    homo, you know though, at least you don't have to defend the nation
    but naw, Feeb's text is straight...the rest of him is under investigation
    ^^iight
    think feebs would have a girl? nope..noones lovin' you man?
    'n dudes sexlife is JUST like clock work...nothin' but hands
    ^^iight




    V/feeble
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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    do the math, half of your predictions were just what I said to be nice
    and you had to predict yourself just to be predicted instead of me twice
    decent
    the whole league can see you're elevating, im just speaking it sooner..
    you just haven't realized your full potential... is being decent in junior
    lol
    girls will only tie the knot if it's around your neck. dont be gay & lie dude
    Liking your punches is like an engagement, you'll never catch me saying I do
    a lil stretched, but i like the concept

    vs...

    M~M was my mentor back when I was down right whack
    'n he always said "you'll be the next feeble"
    ..dunno why he put me down like that
    nice
    its gon' feel like I'm tacklin' when I get on you cuh
    'n you're a good sport, they just don't make helmet yamacas
    punch was weak cuz of wording, but this had 'roflmfao' potential
    'n I heard ya high school had a jew on the b-ball team..thats sad
    'n yeah you're in AI...to make up for the game you'll never have
    decent

    keyed had the concepts, but due to lack of execution they didnt hit no where near as hard as they could of. if you would have revised that verse, dropped some punches, you might of had this. feeble came mediocre for his standards, but still... he wins again.

    v - feeblie-flipped-foreskin

    ill see you next week.

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    Re: HW CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH: Feeble Minded (9-1) vs. Keyed (5-0)

    Bitch.. I'm gonna beat you so bad you can't refute this bruising
    I can't tell if "Keyed" is your username or your excuse for losing
    ehh, this is the best worded "keyed" nameplay i've seen on him, but man it's overused.
    do the math, half of your predictions were just what I said to be nice
    and you had to predict yourself just to be predicted instead of me twice,
    lol, ok
    I'll fuck you up faggot. I'll destroy you once I assemble this hunch
    so TAKE THAT... which I know you'll only do if it resembles a punch
    ehh, ok
    the whole league can see you're elevating, im just speaking it sooner..
    you just haven't realized your full potential... is being decent in junior
    i liked it really ..
    next week I expect your vote Keyed.. its only right exalting feeble
    when you reword lines, Asians have a new reason flip insults their people
    omfg, rofl
    girls will only tie the knot if it's around your neck. dont be gay & lie dude
    Liking your punches is like an engagement, you'll never catch me saying I do
    lol, alright
    you're from the burbs so stop thinking you're hard. i wont even front ya spits..
    acting sheltered... yet you only remind me of awning with a Y in front of it
    no ..didn't like it
    Damn. you thinking you nice lately, got an over-bloated head to carry...
    I've seen your ego developing.. and I guess down syndrome is hereditary
    lolz, cool


    vs


    want the truth? I really can't compare to this fake
    he comes with the dopest openers that never works on legs
    lolz, simple wording which kind've makes it bland but i like the concept, the only thing that bugs me is that you had to give him a good compliment to diss him.
    damn I feel your pain, thats lame, I really feel sorry
    'cuz I bet you got clowned and never made a league..
    ..'n that it had NOTHIN' to do with RB
    ehh, not really
    M~M was my mentor back when I was down right whack
    'n he always said "you'll be the next feeble"
    ..dunno why he put me down like that
    again, your wording got you stuck here but the concept was dope
    'n I heard ya high school had a jew on the b-ball team..thats sad
    'n yeah you're in AI...to make up for the game you'll never have
    rofl, good
    everyone knows 'Feebs' now? hes gon' soft ya see
    'n you can tell hes gone bitch, when theres no El in Feebs
    ehh, didn't like this one.. it has like 4 different meanings to it and it's too complicated as a diss.
    its gon' feel like I'm tacklin' when I get on you cuh
    'n you're a good sport, they just don't make helmet yamacas
    lol, ok
    homo, you know though, at least you don't have to defend the nation
    but naw, Feeb's text is straight...the rest of him is under investigation
    ok ..but gay concepts are mehh sort've.


    both of you had 4 or 5 solid lines here i think ..keyed with his wording issues and feeble i think just had a couple bleh punches this time around. but both of you came alright. to be real honest i think that feeble pulled this one out barely, and i say barely because if all of keyed's punches were worded properly and perfectly, he probably would've won this ..

    decent battle though, close one..

    v/ feeble

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