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    Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    Feeble Minded: Champ
    Tony Brown: Contendor
    Same rules as last week.
    Verses are due Saturday.

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    i say hola hovitooooo
    hmmm.....ummm.......ermmmm......uhhhh.........20-30.....werd

    oh yea oh yea, u rollin wit me, im rollin wit u, baby its w/e u wanna do
    damn throwback, sorry but yea, check

    g' luck, oh yea!

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    lol

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    the champ is back fuckas.

    this is the sonning u need, its like everyones been gunning for feebs
    chicks aren't eyeing you up,
    but getting checked out is what you shoulda done in the league
    friends with FL kids, but we should give the dude some respect
    I mean.. most people can't spend years unsure if they're a noob or a vet
    stomach this feed, how can I cause this much damage with quotes
    To be decent, u need Spit for wording & Penlord to manage your votes
    Saw your ex's pic on your myspace, and now I'm reviewing to hurl...
    I can write a couple of lines that make a better one than you & ya girl
    Lets start off assuming you'll get 5 votes, if I have my worst rhymes
    the conclusion? foregone... after the voters seeing your first line....
    you're fucking wack, I can't image one of my verses ya flow came near,
    *insert my standard punch about Tony STILL being a no-name here*
    Punch you till ya paraplegic. you're fucking scared & weak bitch
    Sometimes Tony came dope this year... you'll end up with zero, guarantee it
    you've been texting for ages n aren't good, I'm wrecking this waste yet...
    I don't know where to place the blame. but with tony second's a safe bet
    you should just leave this to prove that you cherish your fans...
    any lawyer will tell you, acquittal just save you the embarassment man
    and if you ain't dope, you get slaughtered down learning
    Tony's thirst for battling carries over into his watered down wordings

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    Lol, i didn't even think you were on. I was still writing. Since verses are due Saturday, just edit some more shit in tomorrow. We'll make this 20. I promise.



    so voters - no votes until both of us have 20 edited in
    and Tony, you might want to edit out the feed, just telling you out of courtesy, cuz otherwise you'll get a vote taken off or whatever.

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    Dude, you dropped weak last week, but I'll assist with heat, jack.
    I dunno if you're whack at being consistent, but you're consistently wack.
    This bitch still ain't a man, sry but i gotta let the beans spill
    Cuz feebs, ur life cycle, still consists of ribbons and training wheels
    You ain't good mayne u bit the part. Hot?..more like a glacial creature
    Feebs is still a kid at heart...mind, body, AND his facial features
    Dude ya runnin outta gas, ur straight ass, i can tell from ya last one
    U can either step down from the throne, or stay there to get sat on
    Nigga u half of me, couldnt remember why, but the voters think you're trash
    N now it's all comin back to me, and running away from your wack ass.
    Mayne ya comin up empty, u have NO taste, might as well just go silent
    How u reppin Md, but remain in a mindstate...the size of Rhode Island
    Bitch u still a college geek, Tony be ridin high on spinnin wheels
    While Feeble still runnin the streets, cuz he cant afford an automobile
    Pussy was a punk in school, got beat up, bullied, the whole nine yards
    But it must be hard to stand up for yaself...after fallin off THAT hard
    PS, me n my girl are engaged, ur jealously is why i got this battled locked
    If Feebs ever had a relationship.....it sunk before it even left the docks
    I got money u bitch, every week Feebs, ya punches just hit worse
    Now i ain't sayin Sonny is shit, just sayin u lost to his shit verse!
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    Last edited by Tony Brown; January 6th, 2007 at 12:21 AM

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    this is the sonning u need, its like everyones been gunning for feebs
    chicks aren't eyeing you up,
    but getting checked out is what you shoulda done in the league
    slightly forced, but i like the concept
    friends with FL kids, but we should give the dude some respect
    I mean.. most people can't spend years unsure if they're a noob or a vet
    lol, still not that hard though.
    stomach this feed, how can I cause this much damage with quotes
    To be decent, u need Spit for wording & Penlord to manage your votes
    LMFAO!!!
    Saw your ex's pic on your myspace, and now I'm reviewing to hurl...
    I can write a couple of lines that make a better one than you & ya girl
    very witty
    Lets start off assuming you'll get 5 votes, if I have my worst rhymes
    the conclusion? foregone... after the voters seeing your first line....
    eh
    you're fucking wack, I can't image one of my verses ya flow came near,
    *insert my standard punch about Tony STILL being a no-name here*
    a filler, im guessing.
    Punch you till ya paraplegic. you're fucking scared & weak bitch
    Sometimes Tony came dope this year... you'll end up with zero, guarantee it
    extremely witty
    you've been texting for ages n aren't good, I'm wrecking this waste yet...
    I don't know where to place the blame. but with tony second's a safe bet
    eh, decent
    you should just leave this to prove that you cherish your fans...
    any lawyer will tell you, acquittal just save you the embarassment man
    nicely executed wordplay
    and if you ain't dope, you get slaughtered down learning
    Tony's thirst for battling carries over into his watered down wordings
    lol, very witty again.

    vs...

    Dude, you dropped weak last week, but I'll assist with heat, jack.
    I dunno if you're whack at being consistent, but you're consistently wack.
    eh, aight
    This bitch still ain't a man, sry but i gotta let the beans spill
    Cuz feebs, ur life cycle, still consists of ribbons and training wheels
    a lil forced
    You ain't good mayne u bit the part. Hot?..more like a glacial creature
    Feebs is still a kid at heart...mind, body, AND his facial features
    lol, this was kinda funny to me.
    Dude ya runnin outta gas, ur straight ass, i can tell from ya last one
    U can either step down from the throne, or stay there to get sat on
    niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice
    Nigga u half of me, couldnt remember why, but the voters think you're trash
    N now it's all comin back to me, and running away from your wack ass.
    lol, kinda coo'
    Mayne ya comin up empty, u have NO taste, might as well just go silent
    How u reppin Md, but remain in a mindstate...the size of Rhode Island
    eh, aight
    Bitch u still a college geek, Tony be ridin high on spinnin wheels
    While Feeble still runnin the streets, cuz he cant afford an automobile
    lol, nice
    Pussy was a punk in school, got beat up, bullied, the whole nine yards
    But it must be hard to stand up for yaself...after fallin off THAT hard
    eh, just aight
    PS, me n my girl are engaged, ur jealously is why i got this battled locked
    If Feebs ever had a relationship.....it sunk before it even left the docks
    looooooool
    I got money u bitch, every week Feebs, ya punches just hit worse
    Now i ain't sayin Sonny is shit, just sayin u lost to his shit verse!
    na. even with the link.

    this was alot closer than i thought it would be. tony had a few good punches, but that 'step down from the throne' one was just raw as fuck. feeble was very witty as well though. both of you had your fillers and not so-good punches, but i think feeble takes it cuz of that finisher.

    vote - feeble

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    this is the sonning u need, its like everyones been gunning for feebs
    chicks aren't eyeing you up,
    but getting checked out is what you shoulda done in the league
    haaa
    friends with FL kids, but we should give the dude some respect
    I mean.. most people can't spend years unsure if they're a noob or a vet
    eh
    stomach this feed, how can I cause this much damage with quotes
    To be decent, u need Spit for wording & Penlord to manage your votes
    hahahaaaaaaa
    Saw your ex's pic on your myspace, and now I'm reviewing to hurl...
    I can write a couple of lines that make a better one than you & ya girl
    ok
    Lets start off assuming you'll get 5 votes, if I have my worst rhymes
    the conclusion? foregone... after the voters seeing your first line....
    ok
    you're fucking wack, I can't image one of my verses ya flow came near,
    *insert my standard punch about Tony STILL being a no-name here*
    yea
    Punch you till ya paraplegic. you're fucking scared & weak bitch
    Sometimes Tony came dope this year... you'll end up with zero, guarantee it
    eh wording would have been better
    you've been texting for ages n aren't good, I'm wrecking this waste yet...
    I don't know where to place the blame. but with tony second's a safe bet
    ok i guess
    you should just leave this to prove that you cherish your fans...
    any lawyer will tell you, acquittal just save you the embarassment man
    played.
    and if you ain't dope, you get slaughtered down learning
    Tony's thirst for battling carries over into his watered down wordings
    ok yea


    next

    Dude, you dropped weak last week, but I'll assist with heat, jack.
    I dunno if you're whack at being consistent, but you're consistently wack.
    played as hell. punches like theese
    This bitch still ain't a man, sry but i gotta let the beans spill
    Cuz feebs, ur life cycle, still consists of ribbons and training wheels
    eh.. ok i guess corny tho
    You ain't good mayne u bit the part. Hot?..more like a glacial creature
    Feebs is still a kid at heart...mind, body, AND his facial features
    eh ... not to witty...plus hes never posted a pic
    Dude ya runnin outta gas, ur straight ass, i can tell from ya last one
    U can either step down from the throne, or stay there to get sat on
    ok
    Nigga u half of me, couldnt remember why, but the voters think you're trash
    N now it's all comin back to me, and running away from your wack ass.
    ehh seen before..
    Mayne ya comin up empty, u have NO taste, might as well just go silent
    How u reppin Md, but remain in a mindstate...the size of Rhode Island
    eh
    Bitch u still a college geek, Tony be ridin high on spinnin wheels
    While Feeble still runnin the streets, cuz he cant afford an automobile
    nah
    Pussy was a punk in school, got beat up, bullied, the whole nine yards
    But it must be hard to stand up for yaself...after fallin off THAT hard
    nah...played shit..
    PS, me n my girl are engaged, ur jealously is why i got this battled locked
    If Feebs ever had a relationship.....it sunk before it even left the docks
    played wordplay..... even DANE COOK used it
    I got money u bitch, every week Feebs, ya punches just hit worse
    Now i ain't sayin Sonny is shit, just sayin u lost to his shit verse
    naw.

    u came weak for chamo match.... but thas what i expected cuz ur wack honestly.

    vote - feebs...


    dont hate tony.... AGAIN... u never beat me... u never will, audio or text... faggot.

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    While Feeble still runnin the streets, cuz he cant afford an automobile

    dude wtf.. you just used this 2 weeks ago
    Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    this is the sonning u need, its like everyones been gunning for feebs
    chicks aren't eyeing you up,
    but getting checked out is what you shoulda done in the league
    YEH, OK
    friends with FL kids, but we should give the dude some respect
    I mean.. most people can't spend years unsure if they're a noob or a vet
    LOL, NOT THAT HARD BUT PUNCH FITS
    stomach this feed, how can I cause this much damage with quotes
    To be decent, u need Spit for wording & Penlord to manage your votes
    UMMM NOT REALLY
    Saw your ex's pic on your myspace, and now I'm reviewing to hurl...
    I can write a couple of lines that make a better one than you & ya girl
    AIIGHT
    Lets start off assuming you'll get 5 votes, if I have my worst rhymes
    the conclusion? foregone... after the voters seeing your first line....
    OK
    you're fucking wack, I can't image one of my verses ya flow came near,
    *insert my standard punch about Tony STILL being a no-name here*
    YEH, OK
    Punch you till ya paraplegic. you're fucking scared & weak bitch
    Sometimes Tony came dope this year... you'll end up with zero, guarantee it
    NOT FEELING
    you've been texting for ages n aren't good, I'm wrecking this waste yet...
    I don't know where to place the blame. but with tony second's a safe bet
    OK
    you should just leave this to prove that you cherish your fans...
    any lawyer will tell you, acquittal just save you the embarassment man
    LOL, THIS WAS MORE COMPLEX
    and if you ain't dope, you get slaughtered down learning
    Tony's thirst for battling carries over into his watered down wordings
    SEEN WATERED DOWN PUNCHES BEFORE BUT WAS FLIPPED DECENT

    vs

    Dude, you dropped weak last week, but I'll assist with heat, jack.
    I dunno if you're whack at being consistent, but you're consistently wack.
    NOT REALLY, KINDA SIMPLE
    This bitch still ain't a man, sry but i gotta let the beans spill
    Cuz feebs, ur life cycle, still consists of ribbons and training wheels
    BETTER
    You ain't good mayne u bit the part. Hot?..more like a glacial creature
    Feebs is still a kid at heart...mind, body, AND his facial features
    OK I GUESS
    Dude ya runnin outta gas, ur straight ass, i can tell from ya last one
    U can either step down from the throne, or stay there to get sat on
    GOOD, THIS WAS HARDER
    Nigga u half of me, couldnt remember why, but the voters think you're trash
    N now it's all comin back to me, and running away from your wack ass.
    OK ISH
    Mayne ya comin up empty, u have NO taste, might as well just go silent
    How u reppin Md, but remain in a mindstate...the size of Rhode Island
    MEH
    Bitch u still a college geek, Tony be ridin high on spinnin wheels
    While Feeble still runnin the streets, cuz he cant afford an automobile
    COOL
    Pussy was a punk in school, got beat up, bullied, the whole nine yards
    But it must be hard to stand up for yaself...after fallin off THAT hard
    KINDA PLAYED BUT OK
    PS, me n my girl are engaged, ur jealously is why i got this battled locked
    If Feebs ever had a relationship.....it sunk before it even left the docks
    ITS BEEN DONE, AND THIS WASNT TOO BAD THO
    I got money u bitch, every week Feebs, ya punches just hit worse
    Now i ain't sayin Sonny is shit, just sayin u lost to his shit verse!
    MEH


    Tony came alright to me, he had a couple decent punches and his verse on the whole was ok. Feeble well he had a few ok punches as well but also he had quite a few nice bars too, more so than tony hence the receiver of my vote will be...

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    this is the sonning u need, its like everyones been gunning for feebs
    chicks aren't eyeing you up,
    but getting checked out is what you shoulda done in the league
    iight
    friends with FL kids, but we should give the dude some respect
    I mean.. most people can't spend years unsure if they're a noob or a vet
    ehh, ok
    stomach this feed, how can I cause this much damage with quotes
    To be decent, u need Spit for wording & Penlord to manage your votes
    lol, funny punch
    Saw your ex's pic on your myspace, and now I'm reviewing to hurl...
    I can write a couple of lines that make a better one than you & ya girl
    ok, clever
    Lets start off assuming you'll get 5 votes, if I have my worst rhymes
    the conclusion? foregone... after the voters seeing your first line....
    ok, wordplay
    you're fucking wack, I can't image one of my verses ya flow came near,
    *insert my standard punch about Tony STILL being a no-name here*
    no
    Punch you till ya paraplegic. you're fucking scared & weak bitch
    Sometimes Tony came dope this year... you'll end up with zero, guarantee it
    ehh, nah
    you've been texting for ages n aren't good, I'm wrecking this waste yet...
    I don't know where to place the blame. but with tony second's a safe bet
    lol,ok
    you should just leave this to prove that you cherish your fans...
    any lawyer will tell you, acquittal just save you the embarassment man
    kinda forced..
    and if you ain't dope, you get slaughtered down learning
    Tony's thirst for battling carries over into his watered down wordings
    ok
    this was pretty cool this week, a decent flow, some cool multis, cool wordplay was used, the punches also had nice set-ups, a few could have been worded harsher, but you had the right incentive.

    vs

    Dude, you dropped weak last week, but I'll assist with heat, jack.
    I dunno if you're whack at being consistent, but you're consistently wack.
    not clever enough
    This bitch still ain't a man, sry but i gotta let the beans spill
    Cuz feebs, ur life cycle, still consists of ribbons and training wheels
    lol, ok
    You ain't good mayne u bit the part. Hot?..more like a glacial creature
    Feebs is still a kid at heart...mind, body, AND his facial features
    meh
    Dude ya runnin outta gas, ur straight ass, i can tell from ya last one
    U can either step down from the throne, or stay there to get sat on
    lmao, haha
    Nigga u half of me, couldnt remember why, but the voters think you're trash
    N now it's all comin back to me, and running away from your wack ass.
    ok
    Mayne ya comin up empty, u have NO taste, might as well just go silent
    How u reppin Md, but remain in a mindstate...the size of Rhode Island
    nah
    Bitch u still a college geek, Tony be ridin high on spinnin wheels
    While Feeble still runnin the streets, cuz he cant afford an automobile
    ok
    Pussy was a punk in school, got beat up, bullied, the whole nine yards
    But it must be hard to stand up for yaself...after fallin off THAT hard
    ok setup
    PS, me n my girl are engaged, ur jealously is why i got this battled locked
    If Feebs ever had a relationship.....it sunk before it even left the docks
    nah, played
    I got money u bitch, every week Feebs, ya punches just hit worse
    Now i ain't sayin Sonny is shit, just sayin u lost to his shit verse!
    nah
    you fell off at the end. some nice concepts in this shit, alot of potential to be dope. i seen the throne line as hitting the hardest in this battle, and i think you cuddve taken this in my eyes if you had just kept at that consistency a little bit more.

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    this is the sonning u need, its like everyones been gunning for feebs
    chicks aren't eyeing you up,
    but getting checked out is what you shoulda done in the league
    haha ok>>
    friends with FL kids, but we should give the dude some respect
    I mean.. most people can't spend years unsure if they're a noob or a vet
    lmao>>
    stomach this feed, how can I cause this much damage with quotes
    To be decent, u need Spit for wording & Penlord to manage your votes
    decent>>
    Saw your ex's pic on your myspace, and now I'm reviewing to hurl...
    I can write a couple of lines that make a better one than you & ya girl
    eh>>
    Lets start off assuming you'll get 5 votes, if I have my worst rhymes
    the conclusion? foregone... after the voters seeing your first line....
    decent>>
    you're fucking wack, I can't image one of my verses ya flow came near,
    *insert my standard punch about Tony STILL being a no-name here*
    decent>>
    Punch you till ya paraplegic. you're fucking scared & weak bitch
    Sometimes Tony came dope this year... you'll end up with zero, guarantee it
    nah>>
    you've been texting for ages n aren't good, I'm wrecking this waste yet...
    I don't know where to place the blame. but with tony second's a safe bet
    decent>>
    you should just leave this to prove that you cherish your fans...
    any lawyer will tell you, acquittal just save you the embarassment man
    a little stretched wordplay but decent>>
    and if you ain't dope, you get slaughtered down learning
    Tony's thirst for battling carries over into his watered down wordings
    nice

    overall pretty solid verse



    Dude, you dropped weak last week, but I'll assist with heat, jack.
    I dunno if you're whack at being consistent, but you're consistently wack.
    blah, too predictable and easy ot think of
    This bitch still ain't a man, sry but i gotta let the beans spill
    Cuz feebs, ur life cycle, still consists of ribbons and training wheels
    decent>>
    You ain't good mayne u bit the part. Hot?..more like a glacial creature
    Feebs is still a kid at heart...mind, body, AND his facial features
    haha ok>>
    Dude ya runnin outta gas, ur straight ass, i can tell from ya last one
    U can either step down from the throne, or stay there to get sat on
    blah>>
    Nigga u half of me, couldnt remember why, but the voters think you're trash
    N now it's all comin back to me, and running away from your wack ass.
    decent>>
    Mayne ya comin up empty, u have NO taste, might as well just go silent
    How u reppin Md, but remain in a mindstate...the size of Rhode Island
    nice>>
    Bitch u still a college geek, Tony be ridin high on spinnin wheels
    While Feeble still runnin the streets, cuz he cant afford an automobile
    BOOOO you already used this>>
    Pussy was a punk in school, got beat up, bullied, the whole nine yards
    But it must be hard to stand up for yaself...after fallin off THAT hard
    lmao ok>>
    PS, me n my girl are engaged, ur jealously is why i got this battled locked
    If Feebs ever had a relationship.....it sunk before it even left the docks
    ship punches are played>>
    I got money u bitch, every week Feebs, ya punches just hit worse
    Now i ain't sayin Sonny is shit, just sayin u lost to his shit verse!
    shouldve ended better>>

    overall much better than i expected, however you recycled that one line.. you lose points for that, that aside this battle was alot closer than it seems, however i had feeble edging it out b4 u recycled.. wouldve made it alot harder to decide but, due to slightly harder punches and a little more consistancy, vote -feebs
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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    Quote Originally Posted by Coconut Pete


    dont hate tony.... AGAIN... u never beat me... u never will, audio or text... faggot.
    this was a decent battle..can i still vote on this??even tho' I sign'd back in this week?

    shouldntve ask'd this here...w/e.

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    Re: Champ Match: Feeble Minded (7-1) vs. Tony Brown (6-2)

    this is the sonning u need, its like everyones been gunning for feebs
    chicks aren't eyeing you up,
    but getting checked out is what you shoulda done in the league
    lolry
    friends with FL kids, but we should give the dude some respect
    I mean.. most people can't spend years unsure if they're a noob or a vet
    iight
    stomach this feed, how can I cause this much damage with quotes
    To be decent, u need Spit for wording & Penlord to manage your votes
    *dead*
    Saw your ex's pic on your myspace, and now I'm reviewing to hurl...
    I can write a couple of lines that make a better one than you & ya girl
    iight
    Lets start off assuming you'll get 5 votes, if I have my worst rhymes
    the conclusion? foregone... after the voters seeing your first line....
    i get it.. iight
    you're fucking wack, I can't image one of my verses ya flow came near,
    *insert my standard punch about Tony STILL being a no-name here*
    meh
    Punch you till ya paraplegic. you're fucking scared & weak bitch
    Sometimes Tony came dope this year... you'll end up with zero, guarantee it
    aha
    you've been texting for ages n aren't good, I'm wrecking this waste yet...
    I don't know where to place the blame. but with tony second's a safe bet
    meh
    you should just leave this to prove that you cherish your fans...
    any lawyer will tell you, acquittal just save you the embarassment man
    coo
    and if you ain't dope, you get slaughtered down learning
    Tony's thirst for battling carries over into his watered down wordings
    ha


    vs


    Dude, you dropped weak last week, but I'll assist with heat, jack.
    I dunno if you're whack at being consistent, but you're consistently wack.
    meh
    This bitch still ain't a man, sry but i gotta let the beans spill
    Cuz feebs, ur life cycle, still consists of ribbons and training wheels
    lolry
    You ain't good mayne u bit the part. Hot?..more like a glacial creature
    Feebs is still a kid at heart...mind, body, AND his facial features
    iight..
    Dude ya runnin outta gas, ur straight ass, i can tell from ya last one
    U can either step down from the throne, or stay there to get sat on
    iight
    Nigga u half of me, couldnt remember why, but the voters think you're trash
    N now it's all comin back to me, and running away from your wack ass.
    lol
    Mayne ya comin up empty, u have NO taste, might as well just go silent
    How u reppin Md, but remain in a mindstate...the size of Rhode Island
    meh
    Bitch u still a college geek, Tony be ridin high on spinnin wheels
    While Feeble still runnin the streets, cuz he cant afford an automobile
    coo
    Pussy was a punk in school, got beat up, bullied, the whole nine yards
    But it must be hard to stand up for yaself...after fallin off THAT hard
    meh
    PS, me n my girl are engaged, ur jealously is why i got this battled locked
    If Feebs ever had a relationship.....it sunk before it even left the docks
    aha
    I got money u bitch, every week Feebs, ya punches just hit worse
    Now i ain't sayin Sonny is shit, just sayin u lost to his shit verse!
    meh

    hmmmm... not that much of a blowout... but i got feebs winnin here

    V/ el beef

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    this is the sonning u need, its like everyones been gunning for feebs
    chicks aren't eyeing you up,
    but getting checked out is what you shoulda done in the league
    lol, alright
    friends with FL kids, but we should give the dude some respect
    I mean.. most people can't spend years unsure if they're a noob or a vet
    ok
    stomach this feed, how can I cause this much damage with quotes
    To be decent, u need Spit for wording & Penlord to manage your votes
    hah, cool
    Saw your ex's pic on your myspace, and now I'm reviewing to hurl...
    I can write a couple of lines that make a better one than you & ya girl
    okay
    Lets start off assuming you'll get 5 votes, if I have my worst rhymes
    the conclusion? foregone... after the voters seeing your first line....
    mehh ..
    you're fucking wack, I can't image one of my verses ya flow came near,
    *insert my standard punch about Tony STILL being a no-name here*
    rofls
    Punch you till ya paraplegic. you're fucking scared & weak bitch
    Sometimes Tony came dope this year... you'll end up with zero, guarantee it
    rofls, nice
    you've been texting for ages n aren't good, I'm wrecking this waste yet...
    I don't know where to place the blame. but with tony second's a safe bet
    ehhh, nah
    you should just leave this to prove that you cherish your fans...
    any lawyer will tell you, acquittal just save you the embarassment man
    hah, k
    and if you ain't dope, you get slaughtered down learning
    Tony's thirst for battling carries over into his watered down wordings
    ok

    vs

    Dude, you dropped weak last week, but I'll assist with heat, jack.
    I dunno if you're whack at being consistent, but you're consistently wack.
    ehh ..nope
    This bitch still ain't a man, sry but i gotta let the beans spill
    Cuz feebs, ur life cycle, still consists of ribbons and training wheels
    alright
    You ain't good mayne u bit the part. Hot?..more like a glacial creature
    Feebs is still a kid at heart...mind, body, AND his facial features
    hah, ok
    Dude ya runnin outta gas, ur straight ass, i can tell from ya last one
    U can either step down from the throne, or stay there to get sat on
    ok, rofl
    Nigga u half of me, couldnt remember why, but the voters think you're trash
    N now it's all comin back to me, and running away from your wack ass.
    hah
    Mayne ya comin up empty, u have NO taste, might as well just go silent
    How u reppin Md, but remain in a mindstate...the size of Rhode Island
    bleh, nahhh ..
    Bitch u still a college geek, Tony be ridin high on spinnin wheels
    While Feeble still runnin the streets, cuz he cant afford an automobile
    you used this before didn't you? it's ok
    Pussy was a punk in school, got beat up, bullied, the whole nine yards
    But it must be hard to stand up for yaself...after fallin off THAT hard
    ehhh, he didn't fall off too hard to begin with so :\
    PS, me n my girl are engaged, ur jealously is why i got this battled locked
    If Feebs ever had a relationship.....it sunk before it even left the docks
    i used a punch like this last week, except i used championship
    I got money u bitch, every week Feebs, ya punches just hit worse
    Now i ain't sayin Sonny is shit, just sayin u lost to his shit verse!
    ehhh, nope


    alright look, feeble came VERY consistent. he didn't really have any super weak points. a couple punches that i thought to be a bit bland but other than that an almost flawless verse. while as Tony, you seem to be lost for concepts, and your just not hitting with your personals. you had a couple good ones, don't get me wrong, but today, i see feeble as the winner.


    v/ feeble minded

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