LLL SEASON 6 PRESENTS..
THE L.L.L HEAVY WEIGHT TITLE MATCH
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Feeble Minded(C)
vs
Penlord
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Regular Rules
Verses due Saturday. 12EST
Voting Ends Monday
must vote on 5 battles(LEAVE LINKS)
should links not be left, it will be -1 Vote for each link
Last edited by Philly®; December 26th, 2006 at 08:28 AM
Hello, anywhere from 20-30 lines. ?
I'm thinkin' somewhere around 32-38.
check.
Last edited by Penlord; December 26th, 2006 at 03:29 PM
Nah... Check with this account, lmao..
I aint even worried about it though.
Still 32-38. Unless you wanna go more.
Nobodys gonna read 30+ lines of your shit man. Which I know, because I've seen your verse. Someone PM'ed it to me, but it's your own fault. Btw, this was the ONLY decent punch in your verse. I'll spare you the embarassment of posting the rest. *shakes head*
"Kid's are lookin' for last week's sequel, I'm evil, with all this drama non-stop
When I tell you to keep it real, Feeble. <- he does so without the comma & dot"
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Damn. I woulda thought PMing the voters was hurting your chance
But I'll give you a breakdown...
Shitty, shitty, shitty. as if that required seeing your verse in advance
I'm in awe of your tactics, therefore I'm not friendly with glares
I thought we left PMing to noobs.. but you didn't change anything there
I've got the heart to rip, this bitch till he's torn apart & shit
Throughout ya verse, is what you should've done before you started it
I'll knee throats, if it takes that for you to see you'll never be dope
If I'm trying to spot a faggot.. I'll have to give you some free votes
& don't support my ego. suffice to say I'm too godly to need it
it's funny you're talking about going more, like anybody will read it
You'll resent Mind after I destroy you for coming with your spent rhymes...
your lines won't even hold interest unless your verse contains percent signs
I'll play off this bastard's fear, cuz you're gonna get plastered queer
fuck rapping, use of the PM system is the only thing you've mastered here
Fucking loser, my lifestyle will leave you glowing with envy
I've seen Pen's raps... the only parties dope at is never going to any
Kids acting like you never heard of me, then you never heard of shit
Chances are we wont get it twizted, at least if you worded it
you should've posted first... ah well...
You shoulda just stfu while you could.
..I'm straight up smackin' this bitch fag, plus, Penlord's here to kick-ass,
& he'll be bearing the mark of a God.. just from getting the whiplash.
Lol @ you getting a grip on my punches, but you should look son, for help,
You saw my verse in Advance...... But really could use some yourself.
I don't give a fuck what you thought about me, you won't survive here,
And no I DON'T expect you to be happy, when you've been at it for 5 years.
I'll fuckin' kill this fool, he fronts, but this retard is a flaky whiner,
And it's funny you took one good bar out of a 36 line verse..
............... Then countered it with one good bar in an 18 liner.
In-fact, I'll completely match you, thought you would bring confusion,
'Cuz Feeble's vision to be the best text-head... is a lot more like an illusion.
I thought you would drop excitement, <- Yeah right, 'cuz I plot sick
But I admit you're Virtually Priceless!.... & off the net you're not shit.
I'm done with all of these raw-hits, plus I'm tired of reading his nonsense,
And I'd say you've decreased in thought,
................. But that would mean you've proceeded in progress.
I'm doubted to win, yeah, but there's no actin', this rookie's hardy,
Whilst Feeble's latest updates in what's dope... Just happen to be tardy.
His kind is rare, I'm pacin', *wish less retards were hoggin' the placement*,
Shit..... feeble not having an =, now seems more like a positive statement.
lol 18 pz.
-1 vote... feeding
-Philly
Last edited by Philly®; December 31st, 2006 at 01:17 PM
Damn. I woulda thought PMing the voters was hurting your chance
But I'll give you a breakdown...
Shitty, shitty, shitty. as if that required seeing your verse in advance
statement-ish
I'm in awe of your tactics, therefore I'm not friendly with glares
I thought we left PMing to noobs.. but you didn't change anything there
same as above, not too creative imo
I've got the heart to rip, this bitch till he's torn apart & shit
Throughout ya verse, is what you should've done before you started it
iight pretty good
I'll knee throats, if it takes that for you to see you'll never be dope
If I'm trying to spot a faggot.. I'll have to give you some free votes
never seen the concept before, not bad
& don't support my ego. suffice to say I'm too godly to need it
it's funny you're talking about going more, like anybody will read it
another statement.....
You'll resent Mind after I destroy you for coming with your spent rhymes...
your lines won't even hold interest unless your verse contains percent signs
played as fuck n u know it
I'll play off this bastard's fear, cuz you're gonna get plastered queer
fuck rapping, use of the PM system is the only thing you've mastered here
meh, the pm thing is gettin played
Fucking loser, my lifestyle will leave you glowing with envy
I've seen Pen's raps... the only parties dope at is never going to any
he's dope at not going to parties? doesnt even make sense lol
Kids acting like you never heard of me, then you never heard of shit
Chances are we wont get it twizted, at least if you worded it
lmao good closer
..I'm straight up smackin' this bitch fag, plus, Penlord's here to kick-ass,
& he'll be bearing the mark of a God.. just from getting the whiplash.
nothin amazing but an iight opener
Lol @ you getting a grip on my punches, but you should look son, for help,
You saw my verse in Advance...... But really could use some yourself.
sorta simple, think its played as well
I don't give a fuck what you thought about me, you won't survive here,
And no I DON'T expect you to be happy, when you've been at it for 5 years.
Lmaoooooo
I'll fuckin' kill this fool, he fronts, but this retard is a flaky whiner,
And it's funny you took one good bar out of a 36 line verse..
............... Then countered it with one good bar in an 18 liner.
meh
In-fact, I'll completely match you, thought you would bring confusion,
'Cuz Feeble's vision to be the best text-head... is a lot more like an illusion.
not really feelin it
I thought you would drop excitement, <- Yeah right, 'cuz I plot sick
But I admit you're Virtually Priceless!.... & off the net you're not shit.
ROFLOLMAO, damn bar of the battle here
I'm done with all of these raw-hits, plus I'm tired of reading his nonsense,
And I'd say you've decreased in thought,
................. But that would mean you've proceeded in progress.
confusing at first but i got it. not bad
I'm doubted to win, yeah, but there's no actin', this rookie's hardy,
Whilst Feeble's latest updates in what's dope... Just happen to be tardy.
Lol, ok
His kind is rare, I'm pacin', *wish less retards were hoggin' the placement*,
Shit..... feeble not having an =, now seems more like a positive statement.
i dont get it =/
wasnt really feelin much from feebs and the few bars i did like werent even all that great. just a good bar, nothin mind-blowing. doesnt really even seem like he tried. pen started off slow imo but then picked it up alot at the end. even though i didnt get his last bar, i think say he was more consistent and his punches just hit much harder
v/ penlord
Damn. I woulda thought PMing the voters was hurting your chance
But I'll give you a breakdown...
Shitty, shitty, shitty. as if that required seeing your verse in advance
iight
I'm in awe of your tactics, therefore I'm not friendly with glares
I thought we left PMing to noobs.. but you didn't change anything there
meh
I've got the heart to rip, this bitch till he's torn apart & shit
Throughout ya verse, is what you should've done before you started it
lol, ok
I'll knee throats, if it takes that for you to see you'll never be dope
If I'm trying to spot a faggot.. I'll have to give you some free votes
pretty good
& don't support my ego. suffice to say I'm too godly to need it
it's funny you're talking about going more, like anybody will read it
nah
You'll resent Mind after I destroy you for coming with your spent rhymes...
your lines won't even hold interest unless your verse contains percent signs
lol, nice
I'll play off this bastard's fear, cuz you're gonna get plastered queer
fuck rapping, use of the PM system is the only thing you've mastered here
ehhh, iight
Fucking loser, my lifestyle will leave you glowing with envy
I've seen Pen's raps... the only parties dope at is never going to any
nah
Kids acting like you never heard of me, then you never heard of shit
Chances are we wont get it twizted, at least if you worded it
mehh
not an extremely strong verse from you this week, the spot line was pretty decent i seen a few statements and some setups didnt connect well or wasnt clever.
vs
..I'm straight up smackin' this bitch fag, plus, Penlord's here to kick-ass,
& he'll be bearing the mark of a God.. just from getting the whiplash.
ehh, iight
Lol @ you getting a grip on my punches, but you should look son, for help,
You saw my verse in Advance...... But really could use some yourself.
mehh
I don't give a fuck what you thought about me, you won't survive here,
And no I DON'T expect you to be happy, when you've been at it for 5 years.
lol, ok
I'll fuckin' kill this fool, he fronts, but this retard is a flaky whiner,
And it's funny you took one good bar out of a 36 line verse..
............... Then countered it with one good bar in an 18 liner.
lmao... nice
In-fact, I'll completely match you, thought you would bring confusion,
'Cuz Feeble's vision to be the best text-head... is a lot more like an illusion.
nah
I thought you would drop excitement, <- Yeah right, 'cuz I plot sick
But I admit you're Virtually Priceless!.... & off the net you're not shit.
ok
I'm done with all of these raw-hits, plus I'm tired of reading his nonsense,
And I'd say you've decreased in thought,
................. But that would mean you've proceeded in progress.
lol, cold
I'm doubted to win, yeah, but there's no actin', this rookie's hardy,
Whilst Feeble's latest updates in what's dope... Just happen to be tardy.
lol, ok
His kind is rare, I'm pacin', *wish less retards were hoggin' the placement*,
Shit..... feeble not having an =, now seems more like a positive statement.
meh
pretty cool verse here, some nicely thought out concepts worded pretty harsh, i seen a few set ups that played off in this battle as a plus, i think we have a new champion
v/Penlord
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Damn. I woulda thought PMing the voters was hurting your chance
But I'll give you a breakdown...
Shitty, shitty, shitty. as if that required seeing your verse in advance
no
I'm in awe of your tactics, therefore I'm not friendly with glares
I thought we left PMing to noobs.. but you didn't change anything there
nah
I've got the heart to rip, this bitch till he's torn apart & shit
Throughout ya verse, is what you should've done before you started it
lol kinda played though
I'll knee throats, if it takes that for you to see you'll never be dope
If I'm trying to spot a faggot.. I'll have to give you some free votes
LOL, coo
& don't support my ego. suffice to say I'm too godly to need it
it's funny you're talking about going more, like anybody will read it
ok
You'll resent Mind after I destroy you for coming with your spent rhymes...
your lines won't even hold interest unless your verse contains percent signs
played
I'll play off this bastard's fear, cuz you're gonna get plastered queer
fuck rapping, use of the PM system is the only thing you've mastered here
blah
Fucking loser, my lifestyle will leave you glowing with envy
I've seen Pen's raps... the only parties dope at is never going to any
huh? u for get a word or somthin?
Kids acting like you never heard of me, then you never heard of shit
Chances are we wont get it twizted, at least if you worded it
LOL coo
V.S
..I'm straight up smackin' this bitch fag, plus, Penlord's here to kick-ass,
& he'll be bearing the mark of a God.. just from getting the whiplash.
ok
Lol @ you getting a grip on my punches, but you should look son, for help,
You saw my verse in Advance...... But really could use some yourself.
ight
I don't give a fuck what you thought about me, you won't survive here,
And no I DON'T expect you to be happy, when you've been at it for 5 years.
LOL, coo
I'll fuckin' kill this fool, he fronts, but this retard is a flaky whiner,
And it's funny you took one good bar out of a 36 line verse..
............... Then countered it with one good bar in an 18 liner.
forced
In-fact, I'll completely match you, thought you would bring confusion,
'Cuz Feeble's vision to be the best text-head... is a lot more like an illusion.
blah
I thought you would drop excitement, <- Yeah right, 'cuz I plot sick
But I admit you're Virtually Priceless!.... & off the net you're not shit.
LOL coo
I'm done with all of these raw-hits, plus I'm tired of reading his nonsense,
And I'd say you've decreased in thought,
................. But that would mean you've proceeded in progress.
ok
I'm doubted to win, yeah, but there's no actin', this rookie's hardy,
Whilst Feeble's latest updates in what's dope... Just happen to be tardy.
meh ok
His kind is rare, I'm pacin', *wish less retards were hoggin' the placement*,
Shit..... feeble not having an =, now seems more like a positive statement.
LMAO coo
dayum Pens gots this
V/ Pen.
SOTW Week 3
Rap Battles Site Quotes x1
Strike A Pose HW Champion x1
Damn. I woulda thought PMing the voters was hurting your chance
But I'll give you a breakdown...
Shitty, shitty, shitty. as if that required seeing your verse in advance
-meh your talking
I'm in awe of your tactics, therefore I'm not friendly with glares
I thought we left PMing to noobs.. but you didn't change anything there
-lol coo
I've got the heart to rip, this bitch till he's torn apart & shit
Throughout ya verse, is what you should've done before you started it
-meh ok
I'll knee throats, if it takes that for you to see you'll never be dope
If I'm trying to spot a faggot.. I'll have to give you some free votes
-nice
& don't support my ego. suffice to say I'm too godly to need it
it's funny you're talking about going more, like anybody will read it
-nah
You'll resent Mind after I destroy you for coming with your spent rhymes...
your lines won't even hold interest unless your verse contains percent signs
-i didnt like this
I'll play off this bastard's fear, cuz you're gonna get plastered queer
fuck rapping, use of the PM system is the only thing you've mastered here
-played now
Fucking loser, my lifestyle will leave you glowing with envy
I've seen Pen's raps... the only parties dope at is never going to any
-meh
Kids acting like you never heard of me, then you never heard of shit
Chances are we wont get it twizted, at least if you worded it
-lol coo
feeble your verse wasnt all that you had a couple a good ones in there i mean ive seen you drop wayyyy better then this homie just dont know what happened here i just wasnt feeling
vs
..I'm straight up smackin' this bitch fag, plus, Penlord's here to kick-ass,
& he'll be bearing the mark of a God.. just from getting the whiplash.
-umm ok
Lol @ you getting a grip on my punches, but you should look son, for help,
You saw my verse in Advance...... But really could use some yourself.
-meh
I don't give a fuck what you thought about me, you won't survive here,
And no I DON'T expect you to be happy, when you've been at it for 5 years.
-lol coo
I'll fuckin' kill this fool, he fronts, but this retard is a flaky whiner,
And it's funny you took one good bar out of a 36 line verse..
............... Then countered it with one good bar in an 18 liner.
-nah
In-fact, I'll completely match you, thought you would bring confusion,
'Cuz Feeble's vision to be the best text-head... is a lot more like an illusion.
-blah
I thought you would drop excitement, <- Yeah right, 'cuz I plot sick
But I admit you're Virtually Priceless!.... & off the net you're not shit.
-lol coo
I'm done with all of these raw-hits, plus I'm tired of reading his nonsense,
And I'd say you've decreased in thought,
................. But that would mean you've proceeded in progress.
-lol i liked this for some reason
I'm doubted to win, yeah, but there's no actin', this rookie's hardy,
Whilst Feeble's latest updates in what's dope... Just happen to be tardy.
-nah
His kind is rare, I'm pacin', *wish less retards were hoggin' the placement*,
Shit..... feeble not having an =, now seems more like a positive statement.
-im clueless
ok you had a couple a nice lines pen and you had some gd personlas it just basicly seemed like you wanted this more imo so with that said
v/Pen
Damn. I woulda thought PMing the voters was hurting your chance
But I'll give you a breakdown...
Shitty, shitty, shitty. as if that required seeing your verse in advance
ehhhh ..didn't like it
I'm in awe of your tactics, therefore I'm not friendly with glares
I thought we left PMing to noobs.. but you didn't change anything there
lol, ok
I've got the heart to rip, this bitch till he's torn apart & shit
Throughout ya verse, is what you should've done before you started it
nice, lol
I'll knee throats, if it takes that for you to see you'll never be dope
If I'm trying to spot a faggot.. I'll have to give you some free votes
rofl, good
& don't support my ego. suffice to say I'm too godly to need it
it's funny you're talking about going more, like anybody will read it
ehhh, lame
You'll resent Mind after I destroy you for coming with your spent rhymes...
your lines won't even hold interest unless your verse contains percent signs
ehhh ..alright
I'll play off this bastard's fear, cuz you're gonna get plastered queer
fuck rapping, use of the PM system is the only thing you've mastered here
ehhh ..it's lame again
Fucking loser, my lifestyle will leave you glowing with envy
I've seen Pen's raps... the only parties dope at is never going to any
ok ..wording was blehhh ..
Kids acting like you never heard of me, then you never heard of shit
Chances are we wont get it twizted, at least if you worded it
ROFL, that was tight
vs
..I'm straight up smackin' this bitch fag, plus, Penlord's here to kick-ass,
& he'll be bearing the mark of a God.. just from getting the whiplash.
lol, it's alright ..very anti-religious comment though :\
Lol @ you getting a grip on my punches, but you should look son, for help,
You saw my verse in Advance...... But really could use some yourself.
ehhhh ...nope
I don't give a fuck what you thought about me, you won't survive here,
And no I DON'T expect you to be happy, when you've been at it for 5 years.
lolz, this was tight
I'll fuckin' kill this fool, he fronts, but this retard is a flaky whiner,
And it's funny you took one good bar out of a 36 line verse..
............... Then countered it with one good bar in an 18 liner.
nope ..lame
In-fact, I'll completely match you, thought you would bring confusion,
'Cuz Feeble's vision to be the best text-head... is a lot more like an illusion.
.. seemed simple, i think it could've been harder.
I thought you would drop excitement, <- Yeah right, 'cuz I plot sick
But I admit you're Virtually Priceless!.... & off the net you're not shit.
alrighty ..s'ok
I'm done with all of these raw-hits, plus I'm tired of reading his nonsense,
And I'd say you've decreased in thought,
................. But that would mean you've proceeded in progress.
hah.. ok, weird but cool diss
I'm doubted to win, yeah, but there's no actin', this rookie's hardy,
Whilst Feeble's latest updates in what's dope... Just happen to be tardy.
ehh, didn't like it.
His kind is rare, I'm pacin', *wish less retards were hoggin' the placement*,
Shit..... feeble not having an =, now seems more like a positive statement
lol, nice
I'm in awe of your tactics, therefore I'm not friendly with glares
I thought we left PMing to noobs.. but you didn't change anything there
I've got the heart to rip, this bitch till he's torn apart & shit
Throughout ya verse, is what you should've done before you started it
I'll knee throats, if it takes that for you to see you'll never be dope
If I'm trying to spot a faggot.. I'll have to give you some free votes
Kids acting like you never heard of me, then you never heard of shit
Chances are we wont get it twizted, at least if you worded it
vs
..I'm straight up smackin' this bitch fag, plus, Penlord's here to kick-ass,
& he'll be bearing the mark of a God.. just from getting the whiplash.
I don't give a fuck what you thought about me, you won't survive here,
And no I DON'T expect you to be happy, when you've been at it for 5 years.
I'm done with all of these raw-hits, plus I'm tired of reading his nonsense,
And I'd say you've decreased in thought,
................. But that would mean you've proceeded in progress.
His kind is rare, I'm pacin', *wish less retards were hoggin' the placement*,
Shit..... feeble not having an =, now seems more like a positive statement
^what the fuck, i hate you both for doing this to me. you've torn me between a huge decision. both sides had some good punches, and some bad ones. i really felt like penlord had the most faults in his verse, even though your good punches matched up at 4 each. but i also felt like feeble worded some shit horribly ..dunno. call me a bad voter all you want, but BLEH! feebles quoteables were harder here to me ..i came into this battle expecting a toss-up which is exactly what i got. you both did great, but only one can win ..
v/ feeble, edged it in my eyes ..
4-1, until Philly takes off for your feeding, at least... btw I'm surprised at the number of votes already, usually it takes a few days to get 5 votes, let alone a few hours.
vote up
I fed just as much as you did, buddy.
thanks for placing the count.
I'm in awe of your tactics, therefore I'm not friendly with glares
I thought we left PMing to noobs.. but you didn't change anything there
I've got the heart to rip, this bitch till he's torn apart & shit
Throughout ya verse, is what you should've done before you started it
I'll knee throats, if it takes that for you to see you'll never be dope
If I'm trying to spot a faggot.. I'll have to give you some free votes
Kids acting like you never heard of me, then you never heard of shit
Chances are we wont get it twizted, at least if you worded it
vs.
..I'm straight up smackin' this bitch fag, plus, Penlord's here to kick-ass,
& he'll be bearing the mark of a God.. just from getting the whiplash.
I don't give a fuck what you thought about me, you won't survive here,
And no I DON'T expect you to be happy, when you've been at it for 5 years
His kind is rare, I'm pacin', *wish less retards were hoggin' the placement*,
Shit..... feeble not having an =, now seems more like a positive statement
this was close, i wasn't surprised a bit. Feeble came pretty nice, his closer was fucking dope, but he was kinda repetitive with his shit. pen had some decent shit, but his wording threw me off. really close, i got feeble edging this with more quotables.
Last edited by Heychoo.; December 31st, 2006 at 04:39 PM
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Originally Posted by Kid Inc.
I can't feed off of you when i posted first, nice try though.Originally Posted by Penlord.
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