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  1. #1
    lastpoet703
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    whateva

    spit it spit it 20th road in the venue (Go head dwag)

    yo it was bound to come/19 and cumbersome/
    handsome lucky one bustin artillery/
    safe facilities pictured vivdly/
    sellin crack smack dingo mad cats played the background like drummers/
    mind smuggler doctor strange marvel comics pscychotic speak
    phonteic rhymes enter the psyche mad kinetic/
    dont foget it shit (only way to forget it)/
    convulsion like a epilite sufferin seizures/
    slugger from lousiville to the cranium leavin doctors a case of amnesia/
    yall niggas been pussy with this gun shit/
    flirtin while nigga givin it up like a 20th rd prostitue/
    easy to aim hard to shoot knockin on bitches doors who be rockin daisy dukes/
    cause poet gonna hit spittin game at females with the double dose beatufiul and intelligent/
    sayin u got hoes bullshit bitch ass reminders of AC green staying celibant/
    sedative what is required if the beef's outcome becomes gunfire/ liars retired back in 99 spineless reptilian/
    coppin rio de janerio brazilian sicilian investin half a million in the 4seasons pavillion/
    so niggas know im sucka free/
    advicin niggas on their rhymes for a fee/

  2. #2
    lastpoet703
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    what up this shit aint hot for a keystyle? come on fam

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    this isnt very nice...elevate on your flow and vocab...i like the content...keep workin at it man...it takes lots of time...
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    I read your piece, and I have to agree, that ya need to work on how the lyrics flow. I thought your vocab was nice. Ya don't have to blow me away with huge words (most of the time it wouldn't make good music... that is what is most important to me... 'Would it sound good if it was broght to life?') Keep workin' at it... Peace...

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    The_Assassin
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    yeahhh.. let this fool know.. he aint shit!!~

  6. #6
    lastpoet703
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    good lookin out.

  7. #7
    KeVLaR
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    i agree...floe needs to be worked on...

  8. #8
    •Cist•M•
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    i disagree with the majority, yall don't know flow for shit, lastpoet's flow is his flow and all of yall didn't flow this, vocab was over the edge a little, respect


    peace

  9. #9
    agree n disagree..nice ass vocab but dont force it either..I feel it culd flo better but also everyone has their own unique flow and that is whta makes up their style if everyone in the game had a "good" flow everyone would sound hte same,do ur thing.1
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