LW Title Match: Nightmare (4-1) vs Prosecuter (3-2) (VOTE NOW)

[Stephen Mayfield]

n I gather'd up n pack'd my shit n swept'd in case
but it seems we're both moving..
..Im movin from my apt..AN..ur movin to 2nd place.
lol
Ill cut n bleed this foo.Nites finna get merk'd,oh believe its true
n he could bring the pain,when this bouts over,he'll leave with it too
nah
fuckin faggot,imma beat you,hit u with a jawfull of wrath.
u think defeat'n me is ez as pie,no wonder ur awful with math
[/b]eh[/b]
ur nobody hoe,nothing worth own'n or even invest in to
n u wont be alone,cuz EVEN alone gains more intrest than u
lol
ur garden the title with ur life,but imma spoil ur chance
Im takin u the full 9 yards..
..n fertalize the lawns,while u soil ur pants
lol
I got that good dope,thatll leave u strung out n hook'd too
cuz ur an ugly crack addict,that'll make a bust'd roof look new
nah
Im the best,n i got the skill n wit 2 leave u feelin abused
its better being safe,than sorry..
..when its obvious u fill'd those shoes
nah


vs.


puss bitch im hot ur just warm and gay I'll make it rain when I storm my prey
no's he lost so he packs his shit now even though front lines is just a forum away
eh
ur wack kid stop textin all this mess and trash is not even fit for pigs
lmao sad, cuz everybodys pointin and laughin at your verse not your sig
heh
no girl gettin bitch talk shit to me though u get dick slapped
I mean if pussy ever came in a can.... he'd prolly buy it in a 6 pack
lmao
how many times am I gonna have to merk u should bow and beg
cuz last time I seen p come hard it was running down his leg
nah
never will beat me im coming for the King u just fight shit pawns
this is the only pro who's signature is worth less than wat he writes it on
nah
stop slackin on me bitch cuz. I stay sick like the flew came
its like everytime I verse this bitch he's gotta lose on a new name
lol
ur taking one for the team? just u get left with more scars
bitch has taken so many dives there holding up scoore cards
lmao, sick
Vlad cmon u kno ur shits coming to an end so dont deny ya threw quit
fuck the water next time u see a title wave ur gonna be saying goodbye to it
sick too

vt/ Nightmare, his better punches, were harder hitting than Pro's good punches...

[Night Mare]

ummm.... 2-5?

[D.Silver]

Bitch better get his crew,cuz I GOTTA serve the foo
Nite,ur gonna need a p.b....for the police after I murder u
Didn't hit for me, not being from the U.S hindered this punch. But thats my lost, not yours dude.
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.
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n I gather'd up n pack'd my shit n swept'd in case
but it seems we're both moving..
..Im movin from my apt..AN..ur movin to 2nd place.
yeah
Ill cut n bleed this foo.Nites finna get merk'd,oh believe its true
n he could bring the pain,when this bouts over,he'll leave with it too
yeah
fuckin faggot,imma beat you,hit u with a jawfull of wrath.
u think defeat'n me is ez as pie,no wonder ur awful with math
ha.
ur nobody hoe,nothing worth own'n or even invest in to
n u wont be alone,cuz EVEN alone gains more intrest than u
wow...this is old, as in 03 old....
ur garden the title with ur life,but imma spoil ur chance
Im takin u the full 9 yards..
..n fertalize the lawns,while u soil ur pants
naaah
I got that good dope,thatll leave u strung out n hook'd too
cuz ur an ugly crack addict,that'll make a bust'd roof look new
naaaaah....
Im the best,n i got the skill n wit 2 leave u feelin abused
its better being safe,than sorry..
..when its obvious u fill'd those shoes
ha...coulda flipped better

Vs

puss bitch im hot ur just warm and gay I'll make it rain when I storm my prey
no's he lost so he packs his shit now even though front lines is just a forum away
ha..forearm? yeah not bad, but forced
ur wack kid stop textin all this mess and trash is not even fit for pigs
lmao sad, cuz everybodys pointin and laughin at your verse not your sig
naaah
no girl gettin bitch talk shit to me though u get dick slapped
I mean if pussy ever came in a can.... he'd prolly buy it in a 6 pack
yeah heh
how many times am I gonna have to merk u should bow and beg
cuz last time I seen p come hard it was running down his leg
LMFAO!
never will beat me im coming for the King u just fight shit pawns
this is the only pro who's signature is worth less than wat he writes it on
yeah...
stop slackin on me bitch cuz. I stay sick like the flew came
its like everytime I verse this bitch he's gotta lose on a new name
lol
ur taking one for the team? just u get left with more scars
bitch has taken so many dives there holding up scoore cards
damn!
Vlad cmon u kno ur shits coming to an end so dont deny ya threw quit
fuck the water next time u see a title wave ur gonna be saying goodbye to it
naaah, played

V/ Night. Dude just more consistent & creative. Vlad did match him for the most part, but just lacked the bit more imo.

[Night Mare]

W000000000000t COME BACK 3-5 Up plz keeep the votes comin

[Crown]

Bitch better get his crew,cuz I GOTTA serve the foo
Nite,ur gonna need a p.b....for the police after I murder u
okay, nothing speacial
n I gather'd up n pack'd my shit n swept'd in case
but it seems we're both moving..
..Im movin from my apt..AN..ur movin to 2nd place.
no.
Ill cut n bleed this foo.Nites finna get merk'd,oh believe its true
n he could bring the pain,when this bouts over,he'll leave with it too
okay...needs better wording though..
fuckin faggot,imma beat you,hit u with a jawfull of wrath.
u think defeat'n me is ez as pie,no wonder ur awful with math
aight cool...awful wordplay is kinda played though..
ur nobody hoe,nothing worth own'n or even invest in to
n u wont be alone,cuz EVEN alone gains more intrest than u
cool
ur garden the title with ur life,but imma spoil ur chance
Im takin u the full 9 yards..
..n fertalize the lawns,while u soil ur pants
good
I got that good dope,thatll leave u strung out n hook'd too
cuz ur an ugly crack addict,that'll make a bust'd roof look new
naw
Im the best,n i got the skill n wit 2 leave u feelin abused
its better being safe,than sorry..
..when its obvious u fill'd those shoes
okay

vs

puss bitch im hot ur just warm and gay I'll make it rain when I storm my prey
no's he lost so he packs his shit now even though front lines is just a forum away
ur wack kid stop textin all this mess and trash is not even fit for pigs
lmao sad, cuz everybodys pointin and laughin at your verse not your sig
naw wording is terrible here
no girl gettin bitch talk shit to me though u get dick slapped
I mean if pussy ever came in a can.... he'd prolly buy it in a 6 pack
again wording here
how many times am I gonna have to merk u should bow and beg
cuz last time I seen p come hard it was running down his leg
lol cool
never will beat me im coming for the King u just fight shit pawns
this is the only pro who's signature is worth less than wat he writes it on
second sig line...and the first one was better
stop slackin on me bitch cuz. I stay sick like the flew came
its like everytime I verse this bitch he's gotta lose on a new name
good concept, bad wording
ur taking one for the team? just u get left with more scars
bitch has taken so many dives there holding up scoore cards
lol good
Vlad cmon u kno ur shits coming to an end so dont deny ya threw quit
fuck the water next time u see a title wave ur gonna be saying goodbye to it
lol nice closer

aight heres my breakdown. Vlad came very weak, with bad wording, and not so well thought out concepts. he had some cool lines and a lot of mehh lines. on the other hand Nightmare had a lot of let downs in wording. you guys need SOME wit to your lines. but even though he started off really weak, a strong ending counts a lot. so Nightmare got it here..

v. Nightmare

hit my battle up.

[Night Mare]

4-5 KEEP'eM COMIN

[chuck taylor.]

Ill cut n bleed this foo.Nites finna get merk'd,oh believe its true
n he could bring the pain,when this bouts over,he'll leave with it too

vs


no girl gettin bitch talk shit to me though u get dick slapped
I mean if pussy ever came in a can.... he'd prolly buy it in a 6 pack
^lmao
ur taking one for the team? just u get left with more scars
bitch has taken so many dives there holding up scoore cards
Vlad cmon u kno ur shits coming to an end so dont deny ya threw quit
fuck the water next time u see a title wave ur gonna be saying goodbye to it

vote - night

seriously how the fuck did vlad get any votes..

[Night Mare]

They Dick riding him just cuz I was braggin about the belt

Tie game Fuckers.

[Mr.Mal]

i got this battle 3-2 on nights side for the punches basicly heres wot i felt.

vlad started v.good but the last 2bars let him down while on the other hand night started ok and finished strong.

ur taking one for the team? just u get left with more scars
bitch has taken so many dives there holding up scoore cards
^^ lol good

how many times am I gonna have to merk u should bow and beg
cuz last time I seen p come hard it was running down his leg
^^ coo
Vlad cmon u kno ur shits coming to an end so dont deny ya threw quit
fuck the water next time u see a title wave ur gonna be saying goodbye to it
^^ this was nice

vs

Ill cut n bleed this foo.Nites finna get merk'd,oh believe its true
n he could bring the pain,when this bouts over,he'll leave with it too
^^ nice

ur garden the title with ur life,but imma spoil ur chance
Im takin u the full 9 yards..
..n fertalize the lawns,while u soil ur pants
^^ good

v/ night for the reasons above and consistancy

[Sergio Rivas]

Bitch better get his crew,cuz I GOTTA serve the foo
Nite,ur gonna need a p.b....for the police after I murder u
--This sucked. lol.
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.
.
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n I gather'd up n pack'd my shit n swept'd in case
but it seems we're both moving..
..Im movin from my apt..AN..ur movin to 2nd place.
--we shall see. but this was ehhhhhhhh.

Ill cut n bleed this foo.Nites finna get merk'd,oh believe its true
n he could bring the pain,when this bouts over,he'll leave with it too
--gay wordage. ok though I guess.

fuckin faggot,imma beat you,hit u with a jawfull of wrath.
u think defeat'n me is ez as pie,no wonder ur awful with math
--nope.

ur nobody hoe,nothing worth own'n or even invest in to
n u wont be alone,cuz EVEN alone gains more intrest than u
--bad rhyme. ok line.

ur garden the title with ur life,but imma spoil ur chance
Im takin u the full 9 yards..
..n fertalize the lawns,while u soil ur pants
--no

I got that good dope,thatll leave u strung out n hook'd too
cuz ur an ugly crack addict,that'll make a bust'd roof look new
--wack.

Im the best,n i got the skill n wit 2 leave u feelin abused
its better being safe,than sorry..
..when its obvious u fill'd those shoes
--bad.



weak wording. bad concepts and just weak verse i thought.



vs

puss bitch im hot ur just warm and gay I'll make it rain when I storm my prey
no's he lost so he packs his shit now even though front lines is just a forum away
--waaay too wordy.setup was terrible and had nothing to do with
the punch. plus the punch wasn't good.

ur wack kid stop textin all this mess and trash is not even fit for pigs
lmao sad, cuz everybodys pointin and laughin at your verse not your sig
--no. don't mention sigs anymore.

no girl gettin bitch talk shit to me though u get dick slapped
I mean if pussy ever came in a can.... he'd prolly buy it in a 6 pack
--this sucked.

how many times am I gonna have to merk u should bow and beg
cuz last time I seen p come hard it was running down his leg
--I hate when people use the first letter of somebody's name.
Shit is way to easy and wack.

never will beat me im coming for the King u just fight shit pawns
this is the only pro who's signature is worth less than wat he writes it on
--eh. ok.

stop slackin on me bitch cuz. I stay sick like the flew came
its like everytime I verse this bitch he's gotta lose on a new name
--k. bad set up again..and it's flu son.

ur taking one for the team? just u get left with more scars
bitch has taken so many dives there holding up scoore cards
--decent. coulda been better i think. but whatever.

Vlad cmon u kno ur shits coming to an end so dont deny ya threw quit
fuck the water next time u see a title wave ur gonna be saying goodbye to it
--remove the "fuck the water" part...why even have that?
Instead, you should mention some shit bout water in the set up line.
Also, the punch is weak. It's not like he WANTS to see an actual title
wave. I dunno..just thgout you messed it up.


Fix some things like...instead of there put they're. Instead of threw put through.
lol. Your set ups are like one big sentence that make no sense..and do better
on executing your punches. woot.





K. weak battle here. Pro had maybe one decent concept. Night had a couple...so ima go with that.


vote-Night.

both of you step it up.sons

[Axeshun]

Bitch better get his crew,cuz I GOTTA serve the foo
Nite,ur gonna need a p.b....for the police after I murder u
Lol cool
n I gather'd up n pack'd my shit n swept'd in case
but it seems we're both moving..
..Im movin from my apt..AN..ur movin to 2nd place.
NAh
Ill cut n bleed this foo.Nites finna get merk'd,oh believe its true
n he could bring the pain,when this bouts over,he'll leave with it too
Good
fuckin faggot,imma beat you,hit u with a jawfull of wrath.
u think defeat'n me is ez as pie,no wonder ur awful with math
Nice lol
ur nobody hoe,nothing worth own'n or even invest in to
n u wont be alone,cuz EVEN alone gains more intrest than u
Brutal
ur garden the title with ur life,but imma spoil ur chance
Im takin u the full 9 yards..
..n fertalize the lawns,while u soil ur pants
Nice
I got that good dope,thatll leave u strung out n hook'd too
cuz ur an ugly crack addict,that'll make a bust'd roof look new
Hahaha!
Im the best,n i got the skill n wit 2 leave u feelin abused
its better being safe,than sorry..
..when its obvious u fill'd those shoes
Okay

vs

puss bitch im hot ur just warm and gay I'll make it rain when I storm my prey
no's he lost so he packs his shit now even though front lines is just a forum away
ur wack kid stop textin all this mess and trash is not even fit for pigs
lmao sad, cuz everybodys pointin and laughin at your verse not your sig
Nah
no girl gettin bitch talk shit to me though u get dick slapped
I mean if pussy ever came in a can.... he'd prolly buy it in a 6 pack
Cool
how many times am I gonna have to merk u should bow and beg
cuz last time I seen p come hard it was running down his leg
Lol!
never will beat me im coming for the King u just fight shit pawns
this is the only pro who's signature is worth less than wat he writes it on
Nah stop with sig concepts
stop slackin on me bitch cuz. I stay sick like the flew came
its like everytime I verse this bitch he's gotta lose on a new name
Good and True
ur taking one for the team? just u get left with more scars
bitch has taken so many dives there holding up scoore cards
Nah weak
Vlad cmon u kno ur shits coming to an end so dont deny ya threw quit
fuck the water next time u see a title wave ur gonna be saying goodbye to it
Ha!

Close

V- Vlad

[Night Mare]

7 -6 me

[Alphabetized]

Bitch better get his crew,cuz I GOTTA serve the foo
Nite,ur gonna need a p.b....for the police after I murder u
(nice)
.
.
.
.
n I gather'd up n pack'd my shit n swept'd in case
but it seems we're both moving..
..Im movin from my apt..AN..ur movin to 2nd place.
(Meh)
Ill cut n bleed this foo.Nites finna get merk'd,oh believe its true
n he could bring the pain,when this bouts over,he'll leave with it too
(ite)
fuckin faggot,imma beat you,hit u with a jawfull of wrath.
u think defeat'n me is ez as pie,no wonder ur awful with math
(cool, havnt seen that before)
ur nobody hoe,nothing worth own'n or even invest in to
n u wont be alone,cuz EVEN alone gains more intrest than u
(couldve had better wording)
ur garden the title with ur life,but imma spoil ur chance
Im takin u the full 9 yards..
..n fertalize the lawns,while u soil ur pants
(Meh)
I got that good dope,thatll leave u strung out n hook'd too
cuz ur an ugly crack addict,that'll make a bust'd roof look new
(lol, ok)
Im the best,n i got the skill n wit 2 leave u feelin abused
its better being safe,than sorry..
..when its obvious u fill'd those shoes
(Meh, alright)

VS

puss bitch im hot ur just warm and gay I'll make it rain when I storm my prey
no's he lost so he packs his shit now even though front lines is just a forum away
(Eh alright)
ur wack kid stop textin all this mess and trash is not even fit for pigs
lmao sad, cuz everybodys pointin and laughin at your verse not your sig
(meh)
no girl gettin bitch talk shit to me though u get dick slapped
I mean if pussy ever came in a can.... he'd prolly buy it in a 6 pack
(Nah)
how many times am I gonna have to merk u should bow and beg
cuz last time I seen p come hard it was running down his leg
(ite)
never will beat me im coming for the King u just fight shit pawns
this is the only pro who's signature is worth less than wat he writes it on
(decent)
stop slackin on me bitch cuz. I stay sick like the flew came
its like everytime I verse this bitch he's gotta lose on a new name
(lol. true so hits nice)
ur taking one for the team? just u get left with more scars
bitch has taken so many dives there holding up scoore cards
(heh)
Vlad cmon u kno ur shits coming to an end so dont deny ya threw quit
fuck the water next time u see a title wave ur gonna be saying goodbye to it
(lol)

Both battles were kind of meh, but Vlad came consistent, however.. he wasnt coming
with dope concepts he was just NOT dropping bad ones
I think Nights last few bars are what won it for him, only part of either battles
that were actually fun for me to read except the pie one form Vlad.

Vote Night.

[Night Mare]

8- 6 me

Closed.