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I'm in
btw dont come so fuckin corny.
Last edited by Richard Parker; December 11th, 2006 at 08:21 PM
go 12 ..i'm tired.
Last edited by Cody Nash; December 15th, 2006 at 05:51 PM
you use to be stacked, but now i got what this pageant bum lacksOriginally Posted by $pit to Feeble in his "retirement" match
it's great you went out in style, and i'm glad you haven't come back
feebs.. i'm in the spirit, but PLEASE don't sing or gloat
coz we'd need a jingle bell, rock.. or ANY other object to your throat
i don't use noob tactics, but it's now you'll need to cross em'
so you can just barrow my username ..to help drought your problems
n' if help is what you make it, i'll give some you can take, nerd ..
so you just think of concepts ..and i'll go get the sandpaper
faggit, you know you suck these days, ya shit don't hurt, dude
but feeble's always rolled heads ..and now their body's turn too
the league was never yours, ya history.. n' it's a harsh curse
coz while feeble's looks are a mystery, he mods things FAR worse
12
Last edited by Cody Nash; December 15th, 2006 at 05:53 PM
your sig says 1x defense of the FL title. homie you should care...
really, you STILL have the FL title... of only being good there
my flows do this - they show kids how I own this hoe's music
Cry's known for posting averse so corny no wonder we're opposed to it
Now I'm ashamed of this league & its YOUR fault, you're nerdy & lame
Cuz you & your buddies turned LLL into FL with a slightly worthier name
only noobs like your verses, which gives me a good reason to key
Sadly the amount of LLL FL voters determines how good your season'll be
I see those techniques you've been using, and I'll be blunt with laughter
faggot, dots are only effective when there's good punches after
And I'm sick of facing morons, if you want to say a diss to me fine...
but the best thing about your verse was the played mystery line
Last edited by Richard Parker; December 15th, 2006 at 10:09 PM
you use to be stacked, but now i got what this pageant bum lacks
it's great you went out in style, and i'm glad you haven't come back
--woooot! Nice opener.
feebs.. i'm in the spirit, but PLEASE don't sing or gloat
coz we'd need a jingle bell, rock.. or ANY other object to your throat
--eh....dissing his singing? lol no
i don't use noob tactics, but it's now you'll need to cross em'
so you can just barrow my username ..to help drought your problems
--ok. *borrow*
n' if help is what you make it, i'll give some you can take, nerd ..
so you just think of concepts ..and i'll go get the sandpaper
--=/.
faggit, you know you suck these days, ya shit don't hurt, dude
but feeble's always rolled heads ..and now their body's turn too
--Lmfao. This shit was gold. lmfao. great. best punch so far.
the league was never yours, ya history.. n' it's a harsh curse
coz while feeble's looks are a mystery, he mods things FAR worse
--nah...
those 2 lines were illy t hough. good shit.
vs
your sig says 1x defense of the FL title. homie you should care...
really, you STILL have the FL title... of only being good there
--woot..tie so far. heh
my flows do this - they show kids how I own this hoe's music
Cry's known for posting averse so corny no wonder we're opposed to it
--coo wordplay. unlike wack shit i'vee seen this season.
Now I'm ashamed of this league & its YOUR fault, you're nerdy & lame
Cuz you & your buddies turned LLL into FL with a slightly worthier name
--lmfao. yes!
only noobs like your verses, which gives me a good reason to key
Sadly the amount of LLL FL voters determines how good your season'll be
--eh..stop with the FL shit hoe
I see those techniques you've been using, and I'll be blunt with laughter
faggot, dots are only effective when there's good punches after
--ok
And I'm sick of facing morons, if you want to say a diss to me fine...
but the best thing about your verse was the played mystery line
--gaaaaaaaaaay
damn son..
both ahd 2 that I really liked....the best being cry's "bodies turn too"
shit, shit was dope. Aside from that..Cry had one Ok line and feeb
had 2. Soooooooooooooooooooo.. my decision goes to
Cry.
Why? Cuz feeb kept on with the FL shit too long. & cuz of the
feedage.
Good shit though..coulda gone to either one.
vote-cry.
Listen to these:
Fat super crazy tight music
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you use to be stacked, but now i got what this pageant bum lacks
it's great you went out in style, and i'm glad you haven't come back
average attempt at a comeback punch>>>
feebs.. i'm in the spirit, but PLEASE don't sing or gloat
coz we'd need a jingle bell, rock.. or ANY other object to your throat
this is a stretch, decent>>>>
i don't use noob tactics, but it's now you'll need to cross em'
so you can just barrow my username ..to help drought your problems
filler>>>>>
n' if help is what you make it, i'll give some you can take, nerd ..
so you just think of concepts ..and i'll go get the sandpaper
terribly worded>>>
faggit, you know you suck these days, ya shit don't hurt, dude
but feeble's always rolled heads ..and now their body's turn too
decent>>>
the league was never yours, ya history.. n' it's a harsh curse
coz while feeble's looks are a mystery, he mods things FAR worse
nah>>>>
7/10
your sig says 1x defense of the FL title. homie you should care...
really, you STILL have the FL title... of only being good there
decent opener>>>
my flows do this - they show kids how I own this hoe's music
Cry's known for posting averse so corny no wonder we're opposed to it
ehh.. >>>
Now I'm ashamed of this league & its YOUR fault, you're nerdy & lame
Cuz you & your buddies turned LLL into FL with a slightly worthier name
not hard enough>>>
only noobs like your verses, which gives me a good reason to key
Sadly the amount of LLL FL voters determines how good your season'll be
average>>>>
I see those techniques you've been using, and I'll be blunt with laughter
faggot, dots are only effective when there's good punches after
lmao first dope line of the battle>>>
And I'm sick of facing morons, if you want to say a diss to me fine...
but the best thing about your verse was the played mystery line
not so good of a closer>>>
8/10
neither verse stood out to me, feeble had a better flow for one, take, nerd and sandpaper dont do it for me, both had a few borderline punches, feeble had the best line of the battle, since neither was real consistant i gotta go off that vote -feeble
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
great battle feeble ..better than our last i think, good luck man.
1-1
you use to be stacked, but now i got what this pageant bum lacks
it's great you went out in style, and i'm glad you haven't come back
nice
feebs.. i'm in the spirit, but PLEASE don't sing or gloat
coz we'd need a jingle bell, rock.. or ANY other object to your throat
lol
i don't use noob tactics, but it's now you'll need to cross em'
so you can just barrow my username ..to help drought your problems
na...
n' if help is what you make it, i'll give some you can take, nerd ..
so you just think of concepts ..and i'll go get the sandpaper
na...
faggit, you know you suck these days, ya shit don't hurt, dude
but feeble's always rolled heads ..and now their body's turn too
lol
the league was never yours, ya history.. n' it's a harsh curse
coz while feeble's looks are a mystery, he mods things FAR worse
played, but coo'
vs...
your sig says 1x defense of the FL title. homie you should care...
really, you STILL have the FL title... of only being good there
lol
my flows do this - they show kids how I own this hoe's music
Cry's known for posting averse so corny no wonder we're opposed to it
not worded right
Now I'm ashamed of this league & its YOUR fault, you're nerdy & lame
Cuz you & your buddies turned LLL into FL with a slightly worthier name
eh
only noobs like your verses, which gives me a good reason to key
Sadly the amount of LLL FL voters determines how good your season'll be
too much FL, but still aight
I see those techniques you've been using, and I'll be blunt with laughter
faggot, dots are only effective when there's good punches after
lol, not that great though
And I'm sick of facing morons, if you want to say a diss to me fine...
but the best thing about your verse was the played mystery line
feedin, but kinda coo'
vote - cry
Conclusion:
You started off nice....it seems like the further into you verse you seemed to grasp a bit for a hard punch...but for the most part you stayed consistent...a little bit personal...overall pretty good verse...
Conclusion:
Out of twelve lines counting setups and punches...half of your verse relied on FL disses....the first couple ok...but in such a short verse it hurt you...best line was 'averse' line....you started off strong...fell off in the middle...and ended weak
Vote - Cry
Reason:
Just for having more punches that I liked...I honestly expected both of you to come out blasting through the gates....overall a pretty good read from you both...
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you use to be stacked, but now i got what this pageant bum lacks
it's great you went out in style, and i'm glad you haven't come back
lol, k
feebs.. i'm in the spirit, but PLEASE don't sing or gloat
coz we'd need a jingle bell, rock.. or ANY other object to your throat
meh
i don't use noob tactics, but it's now you'll need to cross em'
so you can just barrow my username ..to help drought your problems
ok wordplay
n' if help is what you make it, i'll give some you can take, nerd ..
so you just think of concepts ..and i'll go get the sandpaper
nah
faggit, you know you suck these days, ya shit don't hurt, dude
but feeble's always rolled heads ..and now their body's turn too
lol, cool
the league was never yours, ya history.. n' it's a harsh curse
coz while feeble's looks are a mystery, he mods things FAR worse
meh
a few cool punches, you didnt come corny here lol. a few set-ups were a bit bland, but you had the concepts on the right track, just some wording and gettin the punch out hard.
vs
your sig says 1x defense of the FL title. homie you should care...
really, you STILL have the FL title... of only being good there
lol, k
my flows do this - they show kids how I own this hoe's music
Cry's known for posting averse so corny no wonder we're opposed to it
ok
Now I'm ashamed of this league & its YOUR fault, you're nerdy & lame
Cuz you & your buddies turned LLL into FL with a slightly worthier name
lmao
only noobs like your verses, which gives me a good reason to key
Sadly the amount of LLL FL voters determines how good your season'll be
ehh, ok, the fl-lll idea is startin to be a stretch
I see those techniques you've been using, and I'll be blunt with laughter
faggot, dots are only effective when there's good punches after
lol, ok
And I'm sick of facing morons, if you want to say a diss to me fine...
but the best thing about your verse was the played mystery line
nah, feedin
the endin feedin wasnt even a good flip lol, but i count that u had some better punchlines, in your wording and your set-ups, i just feel like the material showed here and i seen some more of a personal tip too
v/Feeble Minded
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you use to be stacked, but now i got what this pageant bum lacks
it's great you went out in style, and i'm glad you haven't come back
COULDA BEEN WORDED BETTER IMO
feebs.. i'm in the spirit, but PLEASE don't sing or gloat
coz we'd need a jingle bell, rock.. or ANY other object to your throat
MEH
i don't use noob tactics, but it's now you'll need to cross em'
so you can just barrow my username ..to help drought your problems
OK
n' if help is what you make it, i'll give some you can take, nerd ..
so you just think of concepts ..and i'll go get the sandpaper
COOL, FRESH
faggit, you know you suck these days, ya shit don't hurt, dude
but feeble's always rolled heads ..and now their body's turn too
NOT REALLY
the league was never yours, ya history.. n' it's a harsh curse
coz while feeble's looks are a mystery, he mods things FAR worse
TRUE, BUT BASIC PUNCH
VS
your sig says 1x defense of the FL title. homie you should care...
really, you STILL have the FL title... of only being good there
OK
my flows do this - they show kids how I own this hoe's music
Cry's known for posting averse so corny no wonder we're opposed to it
COULD BE BETTER
Now I'm ashamed of this league & its YOUR fault, you're nerdy & lame
Cuz you & your buddies turned LLL into FL with a slightly worthier name
OK
only noobs like your verses, which gives me a good reason to key
Sadly the amount of LLL FL voters determines how good your season'll be
TRUE. OK
I see those techniques you've been using, and I'll be blunt with laughter
faggot, dots are only effective when there's good punches after
OK ISH, PLAYED THO
And I'm sick of facing morons, if you want to say a diss to me fine...
but the best thing about your verse was the played mystery line
NO
UMM I DIDNT REALLY LIKE THIS BATTLE MUCH HONESTLY, IVE SEEN BOTH DROP WAY BETTER, CRY HAD SOME WORDPLAYS N ATTEMPTED FRESH STUFF, FEEBLE CAME PRETTY "STANDARD FORMAT" AND HAD A FEW PERSONALS. FEEBZ DID GO ON A BIT ABOUT FL/ LLL BUT OVERAL FEEBLES PERSONALS HIT HARDER THAN CRY CREATIVITY
VOTE FEEBLE MINDED
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3-3 ..more votes?
you use to be stacked, but now i got what this pageant bum lacks
it's great you went out in style, and i'm glad you haven't come back
faggit, you know you suck these days, ya shit don't hurt, dude
but feeble's always rolled heads ..and now their body's turn too
^dude and too dont rhyme though
vs
my flows do this - they show kids how I own this hoe's music
Cry's known for posting averse so corny no wonder we're opposed to it
I see those techniques you've been using, and I'll be blunt with laughter
faggot, dots are only effective when there's good punches after
ok battle...
vote - feebs
feeble -1 vote for feeding.
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