Superior Cyphers

[Karl Merks]

Superior Cyphers
09/25/05

Any quality cyphers that the moderators notice will be stickied here. You can use this as an added incentive to drop dope. The people who post in this forum are generally newer textcee’s, so the bar will not be raised extremely high. Still, I believe people putting forth a good effort should be recognized.

Go all out...

-KM

09/30/05

- I've opened this thread to all users. You may now suggest outstanding pieces.

[Karl Merks]

Diss The Bitch Above You!

It's fitting you suck..Here's your loser's purse to match your tacky lines
I flash brilliance..His rhymes are dressed like an Iraqi Wife
And accomplished text-cee..add it to your other boring skills
My rhymes translate off the screen..Your best suited for foreign films

09/26/05

i live crazy. this bitch above mathers as much as slim shady
grow up son. cause without your boy franky you're a big baby
i been lazy, but i still put out better than you ever will
real people move on man. on you're bad skills are forever, still
why would i take time to write on such a waste of air?
you cant afford my competition. you too poor to take it there

10/10/05

1-2 Punch

u faggots are attics, like you hoard crack in handles..
cuz i unno was worse
half the kids in this thread, or borns wack exmples

09/30/05

Think your schooling emcees? Your skills is hardly up to task..
You'll sing like Franky Limon..with a pint of Bacardi Up Your Ass!!!

10/02/05

I'm the best this season...God's gift Chin Checking heathens
If you get better with age, then th-C's regressed to teething..

10/10/05

Ran over route 1 and fed mouse to my deadly viper
Most people hide their mistakes..Yall post them in every cypher

10/10/05

Super couldn't last, his bitch told me his strokes was weak
300 Barz n Running was on...
He nutted and collapsed before the Shook Ones beat

10/10/05

Boozy'd rather dodge me, then settle this wit words of thought
See wit him it's always a running situation...like 3rd and short

10/12/05

Just observe... kids an herb... he should quit
Cause I'll drop word perfect
............................. without wording for shit

10/12/05

X the fun by 3, and yet that punch managed to bore me
I'd leave an asterisk after this bar
But unlike YOURS, my punches are self explanatory

10/16/05




Freestyle

You're SoHo, you could fart New York Sub Tokens
Thug's smoking blunts poking sluts, choking off Love Potion
Number 211, coercing their inner child to walk with Satan...
the Dark and hated hearts elated with my Bars of Pagan
Influence, congruence between the flow of mine
Is exploding mines closed in the throat of a choking mime..
The potent rhyme rituals summoning passed greats..
Slash fakes, who's freshness is way past date...

10/02/05

[_Mercenary_]

yo fuk this dudes n his bitch ass rhymes
i got sick ass lines that will fuk up his bitch ass mind
if u wanna step to imma be da best to be
have dis dude trippin like newbs on ectasy
make him lay down when i spray down, son i put da mak down
leave em smacked round,jacked, stabbed n clapped down

You prolly didn't even post that in a thread, you just came up wit that on the spot. Sorry, it's not up to par.

It's that lyrical precision, this kid lacks the physics..
Have 'em doin' back~flips like Acro~batic midgets..
Flow so exquisite/ Use it to get rid of you hoes..
Anoint RB like 'The Exorcism of Emilly Rose'..
As frequently told/... sorry son but your flows not that "Nise"..
Get ya ass off this site if you value your life, and..
I got that shit that backs what i said..
Style 'Cane, Flow Katrina/ Blow ya hats off ya head..

This was a diss right? You didn't diss your opponent enough, and that "~"<---gets annoying REEEAL quick. Most of that was just a self prop freestyle. Plus it didn't have any "wow" lines in it if you know what I mean.

Be honest wit yourselves. Don't just nominate a piece cuz it's yours, look at it truthfully and think seriously bout whether it really belongs in Superior Cyphers. Don't be afraid to nominate somebody else's piece, nobody's gonna say you're dickriding. The first step to writing a great piece is to recognize one, so if you can't pick out ONE superior piece than what makes you think you could write one? I'm tired of seeing wack nominations.

*Co-signed*
-Karl.

[Hennessy.]

ma bad for nominatin ma own shit. it really did suck so i apologize

Don't worry about it. You're allowed to nominate your own shit if you think you've dropped something really interesting or unique.
-KM.

[_Mercenary_]

^At least now you know what NOT to nominate, maybe everybody else will try and do the same.

#1Kid? You’re young as fuck and I’ll have you shook kin…
Look at your face, it’s got more blackheads then Brooklyn.

#2Run your mouth- it’ll getcha closer to death…
We ain’t seen shit from you, just smelt it on your breath

Either one of these two, but if you were to pick I'd pick the one bout shit on your breath. Haven't seen anything else, but I'll keep looking.

haha, I'm not stickying my own shit. I just wanted to set a postive example for some of these other kids here, and maybe silence some of the shit talkers.

EDIT

I dropped this one, I think it's one of my better ones, but go head and disagree I won't cry:

Your bars never rhyme, my punches are cash like payday
I'll tie ya loose ends up...
And leave ya locked up in Da Bassment tryina get Free like AJ

Nah, it wasn't a great concept and it's been done before. I added another one of yours the other day, I think you've elevated alot from the first time I seen you post. Maybe I'm just paying more attention now.

I'm Hot Carl ugly no doubt making his Sex life Trash
Action? Holes in toilet paper is the only time this kid touches ass

^Actually made me laugh lmao
lol, nah. I have no bias towards Serb, I just didn't like this one either.

[_Mercenary_]

^I say you sticky one of your two punches, cuz they were definitely up there in terms of quality. And wtf @ everybody not nominating anyone else's pieces? It gets annoying when I have to resort to nominating my own shit over and over since nobody else other than you and me are paying attention.

hate to disagree, no matter how much I dislike Serb, I found his punch quite funny and witty, either that or I'm easily impressed

EDIT
There should be enough good material today to pick from. I'm tired of nominating the same people's pieces over and over, so I'll let you peep for yourself

Oh yea, and you kinda fucked up one of the 1-2 Punches. It says 10/16/05 but I don't see any punch under that date, which one belongs there?

[_Mercenary_]

1-2 Punch

You stoppin me? Forgive me for doubtin B, when it comes to punching see...
You know I'm quick to drop a G...Like a Paris Hilton shoppin spree

This April Fool's sick in his head...but I May B Sicker..
couldn't beat the king...part timing as Elvis' Baby Sitter!!!

It was a Sin thinkin any part of that punch would shatter me
You too late...
I done beat the King already...and dropped outta Police Academy

Banking on your gift of gab? You won't be holding no C-notes..
Winning?...
You had a chance in hell...Then Satan Closed the Casinos!!

I got ya in scope, my style's 2 far ahead of you to be seen
Sin's verse couldn't blow up on track...
Even if he had suicidal terrorists on his trackteam

Like old Mafia flicks my style's Mobbing the scene
Ya style's bound to be seen...
But never paid attention to...like ads at the top of ya screen

This Toon trying to see me with the quotes?..
He'll hurl something sharp..AFter I shove a TV down his Throat!!!

Freestyle

Spark the instumental part general its the mental
Criminal heart of venom marked hollow in the middle
The minamal bar menace our feelins are real an dark
In it are scared prison bars... I meant it... far from finished
Get out the game I'm sick with it without the fame
With or without the same name I'm stickin with it
Spit it aim an hit a main vein I rein commited
I maintain the lyrics aint no thang but fear its self
Clear as bells callin it yells I hear it often tell
Me not to fail expell the nails in my coffen
Walk in hell... talk in tounges, hung myself
Caught the blood of a prophet in my lungs
Hard to tell a son of sam apart from what I am
From the start examined parts I've got it down
I've got the heart to spark war and crown a king
Bring my arrows to their mark

Only shit I seen worth nominating yesterday.


Edit: I just realized I posted a lotta my shit and Sin's

[Sinamatik]

Good looking, Merc...But if you keep posting my punches, they're going to think we're dating..LOL..J/K...Wonder what stays...

[_Mercenary_]

^I say punches 1,2,4,5,6 stay and the freestyle definitely gets put in. I haven't seen KM in here in a while tho


and lol @ the dating shit, I'll lighten up once everybody else starts nominatin punches so I won't have to

[Sinamatik]

LOL..No doubt...And Know I'm not paying this time..My wrists hurt from Cutting coupons for Medieval Times..

[2hot2handle]

Legally strapped with lyrics you never heard rapped
So impossible to control none yall can adapt
I control theological patterns spit closely together
Weight of mass destruction forces drop each letter
Bang the walls rhythmatically drastically hittin keys
Spit words at ease at a fast pace like a disease
Water sewers describe these losers spittin washed up words
Messin shit up slurred each mess up occured with these nerds
Depressed these emcees to empty tanks roll out in space
The shit secretly chase down like my lyrics do to embrace



^ This is mne from prop yourself

[Thump']

I don't want to keep postin' up random shit that i write.. I'm tryin' to only pull out what i think might actually be worthy of this wall. This is a verse from Diss the Bitch Above you..




I'm sick of fuckin' with this kid... Leave your 'Back Pack'ed' like '50's'..
My punches turn you 'Bobble Head'.. Your brain will bounce like titties..
My minds Journey, 'Trip's you... Make you fumble your demeanor..
I'll flip you... and leave slashes in your back like 'Xena'..
Murderin' this lyrical virgin... You talkin' shit, feelin' defiant..
I got more red on my dick... than dogs pissin', on newly painted hydrants..
My boys steady gainin' weight... We pack more force behind punches..
Like our mama's took their jelly and packed it all in our lunches..
We putin' 'Tracks' on the air... We makin' 'Tracks' when we leave..
So i know "Mis-Is" Train of thought is runnin on 'Tracks' through her weave..
Drop you to the 'Bass' of your grave... 'Cause we don't worry bout 'Treble'..
To help "GAMEFACE" break it down... On the Molecular level..

[Mic D]

lmao.... no superior haiku's?????

[May]

Weak as fuck, drop it, Im deep, you suck, stop it..
So Ill rob your fuckin ass..
.....................So I can have sum money 2 Pac it.

Add that, his sig was a 100$ bill with tupac on it.

Your killin everyone? Na son, youza geek, hoe
Told you to stop droppin 2 lines..
..Now stop with the freeposts.

And that.

[Ray Pissed]

you suck ^

my butt stinks like your blood's pink...how do ya think?
Busting my ass cumming running my ass you are a shrink