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    Illuzionist
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    escape the game

    let me see the greatfulness that rests inside of this planet
    another gun shot through the night and all this shit inherits
    some more demerits, this trick has got me feeling it deep in my skin
    im tired of diminishing of it this is what keeps me tied from within
    another sinful day and blissful night what can you do
    scream and shout as im about to make it right for all of you
    what is it that demands regret for all that leeks out in a sec
    tired of seeing bodys hanging from there necks screaming for respect
    lashing out from the best till there aint nothing left in the nest
    aint a soul remaining another man straining to take the test
    every birth on earth brings training and racing to a new height
    as the curse grows girth you pleading the demon for yet another fight
    cuz the shits got worse its not getting better through the night
    what is there left to do this man aint ready to see the light
    got so much in him, the strength gets rougher without repent
    where its at the point where he’s at the brink of his life, its all spent
    out of focus, of out reality, just the loss of another man’s animosity
    strong hold of will aint no time left to kill, he’s at the blink of adversity
    the shrill and thrill of his life show the ups and downs of a fight
    as he’s about to get grilled from existence let his courage seek through the night


    expression is so fertile makes you an individual versatile
    ready on command to strike and state every fact of your life with a smile
    because your mind is all figured out not like a match that cant be lit
    trying so hard to find what’s right but cant break through the ice its so thick
    and this whole life is so rich, how do you live through it
    envy and thirst for greed, why does it have to be like this
    im tired of living my life as a fake taking hope desperately through the walls of this gate
    cuz im seeing double of mistakes and there’s no way to recreate
    something better for all of us to intake
    as I leek out on this page another dose of reality for you to shake
    stir it with some real shit to get you off of this mask that’s for long been extinct
    best to re think and try to re link the messages to your head
    swollen and no longer flowing through your blood, be better dead
    or laying hospitalized in a bed no longer feeling pain
    morphine kicking in to stop the horrid strains or blood stains
    getting punched back by the real of this world in a second or two
    its impossible to renew or reenact another tactic to live true to
    all the seconds tick of the clock and the urgency of life feels out of hand
    unlike the swollen glands your time on this earth is something you aint got to withstand


    to succumb to the hum of the world, got me rapped up in a curl
    dazed with a girl, caged and raged with the dealing of this twirl
    in my brain, been slained twice with the roll of the dice
    more pain, more injuries got me demanding for some ice
    one more decision to make whether or not I should take
    the opportunity that knocks at my door late in the night
    with the state of mind that’s got me ready to fight
    with any vengeance I repeat another beat without the fright
    without the sight of letting go of more chances straight through the door
    down to the floor my empty heart’s even more poor
    and getting sore from all this hurt cuz all this gore is going berserk
    in jolts of surge, this bolt of lighting has given surge
    to stay true and strong to every song and every curse that follows me
    another dash of energy to keep me clear of all disease
    and all inflicted pain that attracts to thee like dust to an allergy
    this seed keeps growing into its own unique personality
    versatile style is being rewarded through the biggest industry

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    Holy shit that's long... shorten it down and I guarantee you'll get more replies...

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    Damn Girl!

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    seriously, that's long... but from the first verse I can see you got a safe rhyme there... constant flow, some nice.. but short multies... over all I liked it..

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