DJ... vs Riga Mortis

[Tragedian.]

10 Lines.
Blind spit.
Check soon.
Due in 1 hour.

[Tragedian.]

check.

[Tragedian.]

Fuck Riga Mortis, no one likes you, just lay down n die
Ya verse is just like ya sex…leaving people left to sigh
I wonder why, is this kid being such a hoe, ya best show
Losses & a bad record don’t matter…as you already know
Update ya sig, da mafia and Intense It E are just plain dead
I’ve seen ya topical’s …and better text coming from K-Fed
And this piece of shit is what you call a little no show verse
Bad thing is, any regular drop of Riga’s…comes out worse
Kid you’re boring
Hope you enjoyed this whoring.

[Intense It E]

Fuck that shit I don't need a check in......

Yo style is trash so I think you better change/
And hearin that Khalid song is the only time a bitch said his name/
You catchin another "L" oh well tough luck/
It's like ya mom got impregnated on a plane......
..........you a fuck up/
You better stretch before you fuck wit my weight you get hurt/
I'm not a doctor but I can tell when kid needs work(kidneys)/
You a light shower and I'ma thunderstorm/
I pitch fast balls...........
.........and you throw underarm//

[<Supreme>]

Fuck Riga Mortis, no one likes you, just lay down n die
Ya verse is just like ya sex…leaving people left to sigh

Update ya sig, da mafia and Intense It E are just plain dead
I’ve seen ya topical’s …and better text coming from K-Fed


vs

I pitch fast balls...........
.........and you throw underarm//

riga mortis: i think you should spend more time working on your verses in future. Your flow was inconsistent, your visual structure was poor. Your attempts at punches were weak. You had no personals. The main feature of your verse was your rhyming. Work on disses, flow, and verses.
dj: you had a strong opener, but then only one good punch. You had consistent flow, and your rhyming was good. Your visual structure was also good, and overall you had a better verse

[Authentic.]

Dj... for more and better punches, and his structure was better
Better luck next time kid.

Best n funny bar
And this piece of shit is what you call a little no show verse
Bad thing is, any regular drop of Riga’s…comes out worse

[Relli_Mak]

[I]Not a tough battle, but Dj took this one would a few more better bars..Riga, u made an honest attempt at the win, but some of your bars were a bit 'meh'...no hate though, I think u got potential to be raw as hell...v/ Dj

[Tragedian.]

upp 1. all links will be hit.

[Tragedian.]

word. upp.

[Tragedian.]

upp

[Quest.]

Fuck Riga Mortis, no one likes you, just lay down n die
Ya verse is just like ya sex…leaving people left to sigh

vs

nothin

dj didn't even try all he needed was that one bar and he could have just fuckin made dots to get the win.......Rig need to step it up and elevate

v/Dj...

ps hit up my battle against Franklyn-

[Tragedian.]

upp 4. leave links.

[Aycaspaydz]

Riga did his thing. Dj...'s rhymes were Blasé. His K-Fed line was his best and it was aight. Riga's best line was tha doctor kidney line...shows he has some knowledge in metaphors.

[~Mansin~]

[B]http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=316329

^^ hit the link, both of you

dj
Fuck Riga Mortis, no one likes you, just lay down n die
Ya verse is just like ya sex…leaving people left to sigh
simple but lol
I wonder why, is this kid being such a hoe, ya best show
Losses & a bad record don’t matter…as you already know
ehh
Update ya sig, da mafia and Intense It E are just plain dead
I’ve seen ya topical’s …and better text coming from K-Fed
ehh wp
And this piece of shit is what you call a little no show verse
Bad thing is, any regular drop of Riga’s…comes out worse
ehh
Kid you’re boring
Hope you enjoyed this whoring.
must be confident?

mortis
Yo style is trash so I think you better change/
And hearin that Khalid song is the only time a bitch said his name/
naw
You catchin another "L" oh well tough luck/
It's like ya mom got impregnated on a plane......
..........you a fuck up/
ehh
You better stretch before you fuck wit my weight you get hurt/
I'm not a doctor but I can tell when kid needs work(kidneys)/
um did you just diss yaself
You a light shower and I'ma thunderstorm/
I pitch fast balls...........
.........and you throw underarm//
naaaaw

mortis ya lines are not direct or harsh enuff, the
humour and wit are also lacking, i think you need
put more depth in your ideas , some aint bad just
not explored enuff, dj i thought you were just
playing, specially the last bar, though you had the
only bar with creativity wit, the fip on the name
and humour, your opener...

V/dj