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    Post "Tired of This"

    (Into)

    I'm just one person in this world...
    Playing the game of life, not knowing what's worth...
    So when you see me you should say a prayer...
    Cuz at any moment i could snap so be prepared...

    [Verse 1]

    Cause & effect has got me hangin on a daily basis
    I'm eagerly anxious to reverse these minimum wages
    Cuz i can't make a living on these pennies and unfamiliar faces
    My wishes of being rich are intercepted by these bitches
    Tearing me up witness a re-sow through lyrical stiches
    I'm sick of people tellin me what to do i wanna do what i want
    Live a life of my own, reboot, and discard my sinfull thoughts
    i've been dealt my cards but instincts tell me to fold
    This fucken dealer must be wack cuz i'm too young to carry this load
    Murder in mind infused with demented emotions
    Hoping, the shed of blood'll rejuvenate my ability to capture the moment
    Cuz the worlds a star-hog and won't pass though i'm constantly open
    Am i goin to heaven or the underworld, i still haven't decided
    Take the path of the Lord or the apprentice of enforcing violence?
    So i write these raps as defenses to shield the way through these moshes
    The world's missin the content: it it's less money more problems...

    (Chorus)

    The world's talkin it's shit
    Follow me adjust yur volume
    I'm tired of this
    Tired of dealing with these problems
    So it's time to reload
    Time to regain my focus
    So fuck all you haterz now you all now know this...
    (Repeat x1)

    (Verse 2)

    I'm pressing charges against the world for disturbing the peace
    Crack sellers & unjustified teens runnin the streets
    Cuz everytime we clean the world we always leave behind steaks
    I hope the Lord's gotta place in heaven for a lost soul
    Cuz my purpose in't recognizable though i'm runnin at full throttle
    The taste of success has rearely come but it's gone
    That's why i'm blazin these labels up and down with these rhymes drawn
    Every mans on a mission, mines to surpass predictions
    And live the life that others say is probably fiction
    Shut up & listen, cuz when my cd's finally start droppin
    You'll be the ones sittin in the back strategically plottin
    A way to stop me, but i swear to fucken god you ain't gonna top me
    So step back as i bring life into this hypocritical earth
    Give haterz what the deserve and lead people to smile for better or worse
    Rebel the underground like Nas and 2Pac
    Be smart, go green when life tells you to stop
    You can do what you want but i'll never show you regrets
    Even if it's me that's next in that cemetery buried dead
    So forget all the rest and the unnecessary checks
    Cuz it's the mate that fuels my engine to strife for the best...

    (Chorus)

    The world's talkin it's shit
    Follow me adjust yur volume
    I'm tired of this
    Tired of dealing with these problems
    So it's time to reload
    Time to regain my focus
    So fuck all you haterz now you all now know this...
    (Repeat x1)

    (Outro)
    Fuck all you motha fuckers who doubt me...
    Last edited by Frostbite_208; November 28th, 2006 at 11:07 AM
    Fuck Yur Opinion

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    Re: "Tired of This"

    Anybody feelin me?
    Fuck Yur Opinion

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    Re: "Tired of This"

    it aiight but it could be better.. it's structured like a song.look at sacred scriptures battles to gain a better idea of structure.. p'ce

    keep at it and you'll get better,

    plz hit up a battle in my sig even if you can't vote.. leave your opinion.

    thx ...peice
    Last edited by Vacent.; November 28th, 2006 at 11:28 AM

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    Re: "Tired of This"

    [QUOTE=Vacent.]it aiight but it could be better.. it's structured like a song.look at sacred scriptures battles to gain a better idea of structure.. p'ce

    keep at it and you'll get better,

    plz hit up a battle in my sig even if you can't vote.. leave your opinion.

    thx ...peice[/QUOTe



    It is a song i guess i wrote it in the wrong place.
    Fuck Yur Opinion

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    Re: "Tired of This"

    you forgot your links
    I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.

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