10-16 lines.
blind spit
.house rulez.
chekk now.
due in 1hr.
Hood Star
.Alphonse
10-16 lines.
blind spit
.house rulez.
chekk now.
due in 1hr.
J-RocK
checkin in.
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Chekk...
J-RocK
A Why U Trying To Be A Rapper When You Aint Even Half That
At Least You Elevated From Not Being Noticed To Being Laughed At
This Kid Couldn't Get In To A Win Even If He Had Some Season Passes
He Couldn't See A Win Coming At Him Even If He Had 3D Glasses
So.... Step Ya Game Up If U Dont Then Your Career Is Done
Why U Be Actin Like Such A Pussy? Is It Cuz U Aint Gettin None?
Alphonse Think He Hot But He Not... I Came 2 Take His Spot
As I Murk Him Ima Watch This Lil Faggot Fade Away Like An MJ Shot
When Im Up On The Mic... I React Sorta Like Wade In The Clutch
The Reason Why u Never Make It To A W Is Because U End-v Me So Much
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Just Cut it out.. you cant avoid the Loss,
........my punches got Heads Flippin with out a Coin to Toss
I'll clap-the-heat, you gettin a mak-to-eat i'll crack-the-beef, You attackin-me? Its a fact-to-me that i'll 'CLEAR YA FACE' like PROACTIVE-B
I spit kerosene, mixed wit a cannon-team I dunno how u chose to challenge me
wen ur “FALL OF YA BARS” like a “Nervous Gymnast On A Balance-Beam
You battle mean "pffft" the only time you straped is wen you wearingGirbaud jeans
I wrote my verse in hieroglyphics so you can 'picture the conclusion'
Only 'richer in delusion', so you ROBBING me of this win, could only be 'optical illusion'!
J-RocK
iight, the battkle is done. up #1 lets get them votes comin in please.
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al drop a opinion cos i cnt vote yet.....
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hit these n leave a link
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^^^ thanx for the feed. lets keep them real votes comin though.
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uppin 3
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A Why U Trying To Be A Rapper When You Aint Even Half That
At Least You Elevated From Not Being Noticed To Being Laughed At
This Kid Couldn't Get In To A Win Even If He Had Some Season Passes
He Couldn't See A Win Coming At Him Even If He Had 3D Glasses
\\//Hood Star for atleast attempting original punchlines. al u had alot of played shit that Girbaud n strapped thing is played as shit. u need to think of sum more original punchlines lines 2 use. and stop wid "" that those thingys if ur wordplay is good it will stick out
T H E D I E N A S T Y
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Hood- You seem to know how to set up a basic battle verse, but your concepts are lacking buzz to them. I'm not sure if it's the wording, but I do notice some of them are a bit played, try and avoid that. Make sure you add wit to your wording, it will add a lot of power to your punches and bite to your concepts. Keep battling, and you'll improve.
Alph - (Theres only room for one Alph on this site. Just playin.)
I think you may know how to set up a basic verse, but i'm still going to suggest
you read some of the higher up more elite battlers in the LLL. If you look at the way they word their stuff, you'll notice how to set up yours, and how come your concepts arn't hitting as hard as they should. Avoid being played, next time come with fresher concepts. You'll never win if you come played, trust me. Most of all, keep at it.. and over time you'll improve.
Vote - Hood Star
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=317508
Needs votes, hit it when you get a chance.
thanx, uppin 4
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last upp. come on. somebody vote.
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Al used too much self glorification, his structure was whack, and his lines we're strrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrretched. Hood had an aight battle verse, way too simple and played tho. vote - hood
can vote now so al explain vote more
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hood's opener took this but both verses were played n alphonse your structure was wack , u both gta try harder punches instead of tryna make ur self look gd with self glorification ...
v - hood
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