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10 years strong
jus saw thus...cneck shall we make this a early battle? since we both seen it
coo?
ill drop mid week yo. so much assigments i have 2 type
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10 years strong
20...Originally Posted by Malignance
ya wack bastard i clap hazards flip ya backward when i spit
throw'n punches at me?...it's the only time he's fight'n fit
mag ya fuckin dim wit i rip shit...n i'll leave ya ready ta hurl
only time he get's second look$...is cause ppl think he's a girl
ya bitch made there's no question n im ready to impart
dude's life follow's his verse's so i'm waitin fo him to fall apart
yeah leave em malignant tone ya ass down junior
got nocents stop givin ur opinion like you got tumor
the w beakon's there's no question that i'll wreck em
dude is like my sex life....he's well known....
..for comin second
in this bitch im made ima operater there's no doubt
always crossin my line's......mag just crosses his out
fool psy's god yo....ur geriatric as all hell
retire to sunny weather dude so i'll link im' back to FL
word mag get's it clap'n he off the chain with his connections
but he's only scratchin the surface ...of his latest skin infection
mag ya played bitch pb's wack fool there all but merked
his punch's don't pose a threat...fuck it even his look$ don't hurt
smash ya crater face in n'i can see through ur window pain still
could give him tube's of the bitch and he still cudn't get clearaS'ill
word....
*edit for spelling mistakes*
Last edited by Willy B; November 23rd, 2006 at 06:32 AM
ill go ahead & plant a grenade in ur dome, as i watch ur skull cave in
cause the thought of you ever gettin a legit win.... is just mind blowin
3rd week into the league & i already noticed the chinks in this fags armour
psykosis just doesnt attract wins,but wen it comes 2 wackest hes a charmer
im puchin out of my division dis week,...
aint gotta work much, ill just do a light spar
cus even apex's noticed that psy hasnt been droppin at a high par
typing with anger? nah just call it smashing a hoe, seriously im sick of this
we all know u suck, but the million $ question is..how da fuck did u make the rankin list
'test hes kill?' neva dat,cus he stays around body bags, aint dat sum cliche
considering he aint neva bust guts,just hang around couple manhoods in display
u have no strength, watch me pop shots, c psyko's lackin protection within
your only in dis league of gentlemen.........to make an exception as a whorin
skill? in every angle or aspect u dnt equal mine, & ur face is wot im throbbin
see you'll never reach cry status.......but psykosis will damn well be sobbing
bar for bar line for line, ill topple this bitch faster then he can say please
cause whilst psy's gon' be checkin my bars.........ill be steppin up hes
its sum' like a deseas,ive neva seen a 04 head dat sucks this bad at text
they say retiering is an option...... dats always dished to u wen facing vets
i feel 4 u tho, cus wer all allowed wrong doings..
but der only a certain amount of bullshit we can take
see we learn from our past, but u just look at urs & learn from your mistakes
20.
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10 years strong
ya wack bastard i clap hazards flip ya backward when i spit
throw'n punches at me?...it's the only time he's fight'n fit
Eh nice multi's but no on the punch
mag ya fuckin dim wit i rip shit...n i'll leave ya ready ta hurl
only time he get's second look$...is cause ppl think he's a girl
Seen to many look$ punches
ya bitch made there's no question n im ready to impart
dude's life follow's his verse's so i'm waitin fo him to fall apart
Meh
yeah leave em malignant tone ya ass down junior
got nocents stop givin ur opinion like you got tumor
No
the w beakon's there's no question that i'll wreck em
dude is like my sex life....he's well known....
..for comin second
Self Glory
in this bitch im made ima operater there's no doubt
always crossin my line's......mag just crosses his out
no
fool psy's god yo....ur geriatric as all hell
retire to sunny weather dude so i'll link im' back to FL
umm did you mean think instead of link?
word mag get's it clap'n he off the chain with his connections
but he's only scratchin the surface ...of his latest skin infection
Better
mag ya played bitch pb's wack fool there all but merked
his punch's don't pose a threat...fuck it even his look$ don't hurt
Again with the looks nameplay... n nah PB the shit
smash ya crater face in n'i can see through ur window pain still
could give him tube's of the bitch and he still cudn't get clearaS'ill
Bad Wording.
Psy- Your verse had alota good multis but your punches didnt really connect... the ones that would have either was worded completly wrong or just didnt connect... you need to start combining your set ups with your punches.
ill go ahead & plant a grenade in ur dome, as i watch ur skull cave in
cause the thought of you ever gettin a legit win.... is just mind blowin
Eh
3rd week into the league & i already noticed the chinks in this fags armour
psykosis just doesnt attract wins,but wen it comes 2 wackest hes a charmer
LOL
im puchin out of my division dis week,...
aint gotta work much, ill just do a light spar
cus even apex's noticed that psy hasnt been droppin at a high par
Eh...
typing with anger? nah just call it smashing a hoe, seriously im sick of this
we all know u suck, but the million $ question is..how da fuck did u make the rankin list
not bad
'test hes kill?' neva dat,cus he stays around body bags, aint dat sum cliche
considering he aint neva bust guts,just hang around couple manhoods in display
lol
u have no strength, watch me pop shots, c psyko's lackin protection within
your only in dis league of gentlemen.........to make an exception as a whorin
eh
skill? in every angle or aspect u dnt equal mine, & ur face is wot im throbbin
see you'll never reach cry status.......but psykosis will damn well be sobbing
not bad
bar for bar line for line, ill topple this bitch faster then he can say please
cause whilst psy's gon' be checkin my bars.........ill be steppin up hes
Meh
its sum' like a deseas,ive neva seen a 04 head dat sucks this bad at text
they say retiering is an option...... dats always dished to u wen facing vets
Iight
i feel 4 u tho, cus wer all allowed wrong doings..
but der only a certain amount of bullshit we can take
see we learn from our past, but u just look at urs & learn from your mistakes
Coo
Look$ you have one of the weirdest stucture i have seen... generally when you do the three line set up you rhyme your punch with your first set up line not your second... but all in all you had the more consistant verse with better punches
v/ Look$
ya wack bastard i clap hazards flip ya backward when i spit
throw'n punches at me?...it's the only time he's fight'n fit
no
mag ya fuckin dim wit i rip shit...n i'll leave ya ready ta hurl
only time he get's second look$...is cause ppl think he's a girl
meh
ya bitch made there's no question n im ready to impart
dude's life follow's his verse's so i'm waitin fo him to fall apart
meh
yeah leave em malignant tone ya ass down junior
got nocents stop givin ur opinion like you got tumor
blah
the w beakon's there's no question that i'll wreck em
dude is like my sex life....he's well known....
..for comin second
in this bitch im made ima operater there's no doubt
blah again
always crossin my line's......mag just crosses his out
fool psy's god yo....ur geriatric as all hell
retire to sunny weather dude so i'll link im' back to FL
played, used by Cornea in week one, except his was WAY better
word mag get's it clap'n he off the chain with his connections
but he's only scratchin the surface ...of his latest skin infection
lol
mag ya played bitch pb's wack fool there all but merked
his punch's don't pose a threat...fuck it even his look$ don't hurt
WEAK nameplay dude.
smash ya crater face in n'i can see through ur window pain still
could give him tube's of the bitch and he still cudn't get clearaS'ill
nah
meh @ this verse. shit was either played, wack or both. you need to work alot on punches, and some of ur punches would've been dope if you would've explained em in the set-up. double meh @ this verse yo. you need to step up
vs.
ill go ahead & plant a grenade in ur dome, as i watch ur skull cave in
cause the thought of you ever gettin a legit win.... is just mind blowin
lol k
3rd week into the league & i already noticed the chinks in this fags armour
psykosis just doesnt attract wins,but wen it comes 2 wackest hes a charmer
meh
im puchin out of my division dis week,...
aint gotta work much, ill just do a light spar
cus even apex's noticed that psy hasnt been droppin at a high par
ok
typing with anger? nah just call it smashing a hoe, seriously im sick of this
we all know u suck, but the million $ question is..how da fuck did u make the rankin list
no
'test hes kill?' neva dat,cus he stays around body bags, aint dat sum cliche
considering he aint neva bust guts,just hang around couple manhoods in display
wording fucked this
u have no strength, watch me pop shots, c psyko's lackin protection within
your only in dis league of gentlemen.........to make an exception as a whorin
nah
skill? in every angle or aspect u dnt equal mine, & ur face is wot im throbbin
see you'll never reach cry status.......but psykosis will damn well be sobbing
ha, i like this one
bar for bar line for line, ill topple this bitch faster then he can say please
cause whilst psy's gon' be checkin my bars.........ill be steppin up hes
nah
its sum' like a deseas,ive neva seen a 04 head dat sucks this bad at text
they say retiering is an option...... dats always dished to u wen facing vets
ok
i feel 4 u tho, cus wer all allowed wrong doings..
but der only a certain amount of bullshit we can take
see we learn from our past, but u just look at urs & learn from your mistakes
lol
this verse was iight. it was the best verse you posted in LLL so far, but still not all that great. just work on wording punches and u'll be straight.
word mag get's it clap'n he off the chain with his connections
but he's only scratchin the surface ...of his latest skin infection
vs.
skill? in every angle or aspect u dnt equal mine, & ur face is wot im throbbin
see you'll never reach cry status.......but psykosis will damn well be sobbing
i feel 4 u tho, cus wer all allowed wrong doings..
but der only a certain amount of bullshit we can take
see we learn from our past, but u just look at urs & learn from your mistakes
v//lOOk$
Last edited by Inhuman; November 23rd, 2006 at 05:10 PM
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word mag get's it clap'n he off the chain with his connections
but he's only scratchin the surface ...of his latest skin infection
vs.
skill? in every angle or aspect u dnt equal mine, & ur face is wot im throbbin
see you'll never reach cry status.......but psykosis will damn well be sobbing
i feel 4 u tho, cus wer all allowed wrong doings..
but der only a certain amount of bullshit we can take
see we learn from our past, but u just look at urs & learn from your mistakes
This was a meh battle, both came pretty weak. But Look$ wins because he came with the harder punches. Both had some issues with wording that you both should work on. Over all this was an ok battle.
Vote - Look$
3-0 thanks for the votes
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10 years strong
ya wack bastard i clap hazards flip ya backward when i spit
throw'n punches at me?...it's the only time he's fight'n fit
OK FLIP
mag ya fuckin dim wit i rip shit...n i'll leave ya ready ta hurl
only time he get's second look$...is cause ppl think he's a girl
DECENT
ya bitch made there's no question n im ready to impart
dude's life follow's his verse's so i'm waitin fo him to fall apart
WEAK, HOLLA
yeah leave em malignant tone ya ass down junior
got nocents stop givin ur opinion like you got tumor
MEH
the w beakon's there's no question that i'll wreck em
dude is like my sex life....he's well known....
..for comin second
PLAYED
in this bitch im made ima operater there's no doubt
always crossin my line's......mag just crosses his out
LOL. NICE
fool psy's god yo....ur geriatric as all hell
retire to sunny weather dude so i'll link im' back to FL
PLAYED
word mag get's it clap'n he off the chain with his connections
but he's only scratchin the surface ...of his latest skin infection
LOL.DECENT
mag ya played bitch pb's wack fool there all but merked
his punch's don't pose a threat...fuck it even his look$ don't hurt
MEH.
smash ya crater face in n'i can see through ur window pain still
could give him tube's of the bitch and he still cudn't get clearaS'ill
MEH
VS
ll go ahead & plant a grenade in ur dome, as i watch ur skull cave in
cause the thought of you ever gettin a legit win.... is just mind blowin
NAH
3rd week into the league & i already noticed the chinks in this fags armour
psykosis just doesnt attract wins,but wen it comes 2 wackest hes a charmer
NOT FEELIN
im puchin out of my division dis week,...
aint gotta work much, ill just do a light spar
cus even apex's noticed that psy hasnt been droppin at a high par
NO, NOT HARSH LIKE THE LAST 2 PUNCHES
typing with anger? nah just call it smashing a hoe, seriously im sick of this
we all know u suck, but the million $ question is..how da fuck did u make the rankin list
LOL, AIGHT
'test hes kill?' neva dat,cus he stays around body bags, aint dat sum cliche
considering he aint neva bust guts,just hang around couple manhoods in display
DECENT
u have no strength, watch me pop shots, c psyko's lackin protection within
your only in dis league of gentlemen.........to make an exception as a whorin
AVERAGE
skill? in every angle or aspect u dnt equal mine, & ur face is wot im throbbin
see you'll never reach cry status.......but psykosis will damn well be sobbing
LOL, OK
bar for bar line for line, ill topple this bitch faster then he can say please
cause whilst psy's gon' be checkin my bars.........ill be steppin up hes
HES? THIS DOESNT MAKE SENSE NUKKA
its sum' like a deseas,ive neva seen a 04 head dat sucks this bad at text
they say retiering is an option...... dats always dished to u wen facing vets
NO
i feel 4 u tho, cus wer all allowed wrong doings..
but der only a certain amount of bullshit we can take
see we learn from our past, but u just look at urs & learn from your mistakes
WEAK
one sided ass battle, looks had nothing witty or harsh in his verse...it just seemed like a whole bunch of statements na sayin. psykosis came muchh more consistant and harsher
vote psykosis
word mag get's it clap'n he off the chain with his connections
but he's only scratchin the surface ...of his latest skin infection
vs...
Nothin
Psychosis was mediocre, I liked a couple of his bars, but the quoted was the only extremely good line. He was consistent nonetheless. Mag, ya need'ta step ya game up man, it seems like U got the write idea, its just the wording and concepts are a lil' too simple. Just keep at it, I see U gettin better.
Vote - Psychosis
lol versus nothing you know. 3-2 lets get votes
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10 years strong
ya wack bastard i clap hazards flip ya backward when i spit
throw'n punches at me?...it's the only time he's fight'n fit
Nah
mag ya fuckin dim wit i rip shit...n i'll leave ya ready ta hurl
only time he get's second look$...is cause ppl think he's a girl
Nah
ya bitch made there's no question n im ready to impart
dude's life follow's his verse's so i'm waitin fo him to fall apart
Meh
yeah leave em malignant tone ya ass down junior
got nocents stop givin ur opinion like you got tumor
Nah
the w beakon's there's no question that i'll wreck em
dude is like my sex life....he's well known....
..for comin second
Wack self glory
in this bitch im made ima operater there's no doubt
always crossin my line's......mag just crosses his out
Nah
fool psy's god yo....ur geriatric as all hell
retire to sunny weather dude so i'll link im' back to FL
Stupid
word mag get's it clap'n he off the chain with his connections
but he's only scratchin the surface ...of his latest skin infection
Decent-ish
mag ya played bitch pb's wack fool there all but merked
his punch's don't pose a threat...fuck it even his look$ don't hurt
So he's good looking?
smash ya crater face in n'i can see through ur window pain still
could give him tube's of the bitch and he still cudn't get clearaS'ill
Nah
vs.
ill go ahead & plant a grenade in ur dome, as i watch ur skull cave in
cause the thought of you ever gettin a legit win.... is just mind blowin
Meh
3rd week into the league & i already noticed the chinks in this fags armour
psykosis just doesnt attract wins,but wen it comes 2 wackest hes a charmer
LOL
im puchin out of my division dis week,...
aint gotta work much, ill just do a light spar
cus even apex's noticed that psy hasnt been droppin at a high par
Nah
typing with anger? nah just call it smashing a hoe, seriously im sick of this
we all know u suck, but the million $ question is..how da fuck did u make the rankin list
Aiight
'test hes kill?' neva dat,cus he stays around body bags, aint dat sum cliche
considering he aint neva bust guts,just hang around couple manhoods in display
LOL
u have no strength, watch me pop shots, c psyko's lackin protection within
your only in dis league of gentlemen.........to make an exception as a whorin
Nah
skill? in every angle or aspect u dnt equal mine, & ur face is wot im throbbin
see you'll never reach cry status.......but psykosis will damn well be sobbing
Decent
bar for bar line for line, ill topple this bitch faster then he can say please
cause whilst psy's gon' be checkin my bars.........ill be steppin up hes
Nah
its sum' like a deseas,ive neva seen a 04 head dat sucks this bad at text
they say retiering is an option...... dats always dished to u wen facing vets
Decent
i feel 4 u tho, cus wer all allowed wrong doings..
but der only a certain amount of bullshit we can take
see we learn from our past, but u just look at urs & learn from your mistakes
Decent
v/ Look$ for consistancy and punches
4-2 lol more votes wud be nice ppl
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