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Thread: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

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    This match is the light weight title <...I automatically think of you
    Cause to win this battle, you do not actually have to be one dude
    Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
    You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
    See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
    Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used
    Inhuman, your in this game for nothing, you better know your dead
    Dude, you're God awful with your girl, s'why she never Bowser head
    Enough of this though, I stay sharp and to the point...I am a winner
    We know ya make money for sure ^ and that paper loses to scissors
    So I've got to end it here, sorry but I ain't gonna get weak N wussy
    Cause everybody wants Inhuman...because they all are needin pussy
    Last edited by Chris White; November 24th, 2006 at 07:14 PM

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    Re: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

    at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
    but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
    ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
    cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
    Cornea doesn't have glasses, cuz he feels he needs style
    so in a fight he has contacts, 'in that's why he's got his mom on speed dial
    you're not wanted here bitch, do us a favor and leave this Earth
    dude, i STILL think you're a girl, tho you fellow to the fucking dirt
    Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
    'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe
    this guy's so unpopular, a life in Hell would be better
    but Cornea loves getting L's, cuz normally he don't even RECIEVE letters


    -Inhuman

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    Re: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

    ok done...good luck...

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    Re: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

    This match is the light weight title <...I automatically think of you
    Cause to win this battle, you do not actually have to be one dude
    ^Ummm. Okay.
    Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
    You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
    ^Lol. k.
    See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
    Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used
    ^Lol. Coo.
    Inhuman, your in this game for nothing, you better know your dead
    Dude, you're God awful with your girl, s'why she never Bowser head
    ^Meh...not feelin.
    Enough of this though, I stay sharp and to the point...I am a winner
    We know ya make money for sure ^ and that paper loses to scissors
    ^Nah yo. Not feelin.
    So I've got to end it here, sorry but I ain't gonna get weak N wussy
    Cause everybody wants Inhuman...because they all are needin pussy
    ^Okay.

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    at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
    but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
    ^Been done. Okay flip but nah.
    ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
    cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
    ^Why so stretched? Good punch though.
    Cornea doesn't have glasses, cuz he feels he needs style
    so in a fight he has contacts, 'in that's why he's got his mom on speed dial
    ^Meh.
    you're not wanted here bitch, do us a favor and leave this Earth
    dude, i STILL think you're a girl, tho you fellow to the fucking dirt
    ^This was coo. Think it could've been worded better though.
    Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
    'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe
    ^Coo.
    this guy's so unpopular, a life in Hell would be better
    but Cornea loves getting L's, cuz normally he don't even RECIEVE letters
    ^Nah.

    Basically,

    Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
    You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
    See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
    Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used

    vs.

    ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
    cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
    Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
    'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe

    Close battle indeed. Outside of the quoteables though, Cornea came more consistant. Inhuman, you showed a bit more wit but your wording killed you on that one line which could've won it for you. No hate to you guys.

    \\//Cornea

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    Re: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

    at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
    but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
    Lolz..This was nice.

    Inhuman you had a decent verse but you could have came alot harsher. You had only 1 bar that stood out to me. Which is the one I picked. You could have re-worded some line's & they would have stood out more. But you also have to come with mre wittier lines.

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    I honestly didn't see nothing to interesting worth quoting in your verse. At most they were decent. You have to come out alot harsher/funnier with your verse, which you didn't seem to do. Also your verse seemed forced. Take your time next time.

    V - In.

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    Re: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

    Ok it's whatever dude.... 1-1

    vote up guys

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    Re: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

    This match is the light weight title <...I automatically think of you
    Cause to win this battle, you do not actually have to be one dude
    He's not a lightweight
    Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
    You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
    Aight, coulda been worded better
    See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
    Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used
    Na...
    Inhuman, your in this game for nothing, you better know your dead
    Dude, you're God awful with your girl, s'why she never Bowser head
    Aight.
    Enough of this though, I stay sharp and to the point...I am a winner
    We know ya make money for sure ^ and that paper loses to scissors
    Seen this concept this week...
    So I've got to end it here, sorry but I ain't gonna get weak N wussy
    Cause everybody wants Inhuman...because they all are needin pussy
    Pretty good...

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    at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
    but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
    Played.
    ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
    cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
    Nice.
    Cornea doesn't have glasses, cuz he feels he needs style
    so in a fight he has contacts, 'in that's why he's got his mom on speed dial
    Na...
    you're not wanted here bitch, do us a favor and leave this Earth
    dude, i STILL think you're a girl, tho you fellow to the fucking dirt
    Aight, not worded correctly tho.
    Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
    'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe
    Na...
    this guy's so unpopular, a life in Hell would be better
    but Cornea loves getting L's, cuz normally he don't even RECIEVE letters
    Badly worded.

    vote - Cornea

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    Re: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

    lol 1-2 let's keep em comin

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    Re: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

    yeah good luc kthe rest of the way and Nick didn't get my opener I guess LOLZ

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    Re: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

    This match is the light weight title <...I automatically think of you
    Cause to win this battle, you do not actually have to be one dude
    mehhh
    Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
    You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
    ehh, iight
    See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
    Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used
    mehhh
    Inhuman, your in this game for nothing, you better know your dead
    Dude, you're God awful with your girl, s'why she never Bowser head
    mehh, inaffective wordplay
    Enough of this though, I stay sharp and to the point...I am a winner
    We know ya make money for sure ^ and that paper loses to scissors
    nahh
    So I've got to end it here, sorry but I ain't gonna get weak N wussy
    Cause everybody wants Inhuman...because they all are needin pussy
    ehhh, iight
    a decent verse, i think alot more could have been attempted, especially concepts and set-ups. you need to have cleverness, some of this material was bland. the flow was straight, multis. good structure.. just work on throwing harder more clever punches

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    at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
    but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
    nice wording
    ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
    cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
    ok wordplay, again good wording
    Cornea doesn't have glasses, cuz he feels he needs style
    so in a fight he has contacts, 'in that's why he's got his mom on speed dial
    iight
    you're not wanted here bitch, do us a favor and leave this Earth
    dude, i STILL think you're a girl, tho you fellow to the fucking dirt
    meh
    Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
    'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe
    nah
    this guy's so unpopular, a life in Hell would be better
    but Cornea loves getting L's, cuz normally he don't even RECIEVE letters
    iight
    flow was iight, some multis and a straight structure
    the punches came iight, pretty good wordplay in the begining
    the wording was done well.


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    Re: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

    This match is the light weight title <...I automatically think of you
    Cause to win this battle, you do not actually have to be one dude
    meh, poorly worded.
    Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
    You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
    meh, no. way played...
    See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
    Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used
    meh, gay jokes aren't good unless they're SOOOO funny and original that it's amazing, and this was far from that level.
    Inhuman, your in this game for nothing, you better know your dead
    Dude, you're God awful with your girl, s'why she never Bowser head
    using the word bowser as wordplay here made no sense.
    Enough of this though, I stay sharp and to the point...I am a winner
    We know ya make money for sure ^ and that paper loses to scissors
    did you take this concept? i dropped this same concept yesterday morning in my LLL match.. cept it was with rock and scissors ..
    So I've got to end it here, sorry but I ain't gonna get weak N wussy
    Cause everybody wants Inhuman...because they all are needin pussy
    played, i've used it as well as many others after me ..(the wordplay that is)

    vs

    at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
    but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
    meh, played nameplay on him but this is the best worded one i've seen.
    ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
    cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
    rofl, i think i've seen this ONCE before as wordplay but i like yours better.
    Cornea doesn't have glasses, cuz he feels he needs style
    so in a fight he has contacts, 'in that's why he's got his mom on speed dial
    meh, could'a been better.
    you're not wanted here bitch, do us a favor and leave this Earth
    dude, i STILL think you're a girl, tho you fellow to the fucking dirt
    naw. weak ..
    Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
    'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe
    again, weak.
    this guy's so unpopular, a life in Hell would be better
    but Cornea loves getting L's, cuz normally he don't even RECIEVE letters
    ok

    cornea came kind'a wack imo, and inhuman just toppled it here ..

    v/ inhuman

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    Re: Light Weight Title Match: Cornea (2-0) vs Inhuman (2-0)

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