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Last edited by Chris White; November 24th, 2006 at 07:45 PM
Last edited by Inhuman; November 24th, 2006 at 04:29 PM
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This match is the light weight title <...I automatically think of you
Cause to win this battle, you do not actually have to be one dude
Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used
Inhuman, your in this game for nothing, you better know your dead
Dude, you're God awful with your girl, s'why she never Bowser head
Enough of this though, I stay sharp and to the point...I am a winner
We know ya make money for sure ^ and that paper loses to scissors
So I've got to end it here, sorry but I ain't gonna get weak N wussy
Cause everybody wants Inhuman...because they all are needin pussy
Last edited by Chris White; November 24th, 2006 at 07:14 PM
at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
Cornea doesn't have glasses, cuz he feels he needs style
so in a fight he has contacts, 'in that's why he's got his mom on speed dial
you're not wanted here bitch, do us a favor and leave this Earth
dude, i STILL think you're a girl, tho you fellow to the fucking dirt
Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe
this guy's so unpopular, a life in Hell would be better
but Cornea loves getting L's, cuz normally he don't even RECIEVE letters
-Inhuman
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ok done...good luck...
This match is the light weight title <...I automatically think of you
Cause to win this battle, you do not actually have to be one dude
^Ummm. Okay.
Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
^Lol. k.
See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used
^Lol. Coo.
Inhuman, your in this game for nothing, you better know your dead
Dude, you're God awful with your girl, s'why she never Bowser head
^Meh...not feelin.
Enough of this though, I stay sharp and to the point...I am a winner
We know ya make money for sure ^ and that paper loses to scissors
^Nah yo. Not feelin.
So I've got to end it here, sorry but I ain't gonna get weak N wussy
Cause everybody wants Inhuman...because they all are needin pussy
^Okay.
vs.
at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
^Been done. Okay flip but nah.
ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
^Why so stretched? Good punch though.
Cornea doesn't have glasses, cuz he feels he needs style
so in a fight he has contacts, 'in that's why he's got his mom on speed dial
^Meh.
you're not wanted here bitch, do us a favor and leave this Earth
dude, i STILL think you're a girl, tho you fellow to the fucking dirt
^This was coo. Think it could've been worded better though.
Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe
^Coo.
this guy's so unpopular, a life in Hell would be better
but Cornea loves getting L's, cuz normally he don't even RECIEVE letters
^Nah.
Basically,
Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used
vs.
ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe
Close battle indeed. Outside of the quoteables though, Cornea came more consistant. Inhuman, you showed a bit more wit but your wording killed you on that one line which could've won it for you. No hate to you guys.
\\//Cornea
at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
Lolz..This was nice.
Inhuman you had a decent verse but you could have came alot harsher. You had only 1 bar that stood out to me. Which is the one I picked. You could have re-worded some line's & they would have stood out more. But you also have to come with mre wittier lines.
Vs
I honestly didn't see nothing to interesting worth quoting in your verse. At most they were decent. You have to come out alot harsher/funnier with your verse, which you didn't seem to do. Also your verse seemed forced. Take your time next time.
V - In.
Ok it's whatever dude.... 1-1
vote up guys
This match is the light weight title <...I automatically think of you
Cause to win this battle, you do not actually have to be one dude
He's not a lightweight
Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
Aight, coulda been worded better
See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used
Na...
Inhuman, your in this game for nothing, you better know your dead
Dude, you're God awful with your girl, s'why she never Bowser head
Aight.
Enough of this though, I stay sharp and to the point...I am a winner
We know ya make money for sure ^ and that paper loses to scissors
Seen this concept this week...
So I've got to end it here, sorry but I ain't gonna get weak N wussy
Cause everybody wants Inhuman...because they all are needin pussy
Pretty good...
vs...
at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
Played.
ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
Nice.
Cornea doesn't have glasses, cuz he feels he needs style
so in a fight he has contacts, 'in that's why he's got his mom on speed dial
Na...
you're not wanted here bitch, do us a favor and leave this Earth
dude, i STILL think you're a girl, tho you fellow to the fucking dirt
Aight, not worded correctly tho.
Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe
Na...
this guy's so unpopular, a life in Hell would be better
but Cornea loves getting L's, cuz normally he don't even RECIEVE letters
Badly worded.
vote - Cornea
lol 1-2 let's keep em comin
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yeah good luc kthe rest of the way and Nick didn't get my opener I guess LOLZ
This match is the light weight title <...I automatically think of you
Cause to win this battle, you do not actually have to be one dude
mehhh
Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
ehh, iight
See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used
mehhh
Inhuman, your in this game for nothing, you better know your dead
Dude, you're God awful with your girl, s'why she never Bowser head
mehh, inaffective wordplay
Enough of this though, I stay sharp and to the point...I am a winner
We know ya make money for sure ^ and that paper loses to scissors
nahh
So I've got to end it here, sorry but I ain't gonna get weak N wussy
Cause everybody wants Inhuman...because they all are needin pussy
ehhh, iight
a decent verse, i think alot more could have been attempted, especially concepts and set-ups. you need to have cleverness, some of this material was bland. the flow was straight, multis. good structure.. just work on throwing harder more clever punches
vs
at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
nice wording
ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
ok wordplay, again good wording
Cornea doesn't have glasses, cuz he feels he needs style
so in a fight he has contacts, 'in that's why he's got his mom on speed dial
iight
you're not wanted here bitch, do us a favor and leave this Earth
dude, i STILL think you're a girl, tho you fellow to the fucking dirt
meh
Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe
nah
this guy's so unpopular, a life in Hell would be better
but Cornea loves getting L's, cuz normally he don't even RECIEVE letters
iight
flow was iight, some multis and a straight structure
the punches came iight, pretty good wordplay in the begining
the wording was done well.
v/Inhuman
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This match is the light weight title <...I automatically think of you
Cause to win this battle, you do not actually have to be one dude
meh, poorly worded.
Dude take a hike, s'necessary since we don't want you around kid
You need the ^ elevation....but you ALWAYS fall off the mountain
meh, no. way played...
See I know Inhuman's orientation, it's weak and all, but fuck dudes
Using those last 3 words to describe exactly how his time was used
meh, gay jokes aren't good unless they're SOOOO funny and original that it's amazing, and this was far from that level.
Inhuman, your in this game for nothing, you better know your dead
Dude, you're God awful with your girl, s'why she never Bowser head
using the word bowser as wordplay here made no sense.
Enough of this though, I stay sharp and to the point...I am a winner
We know ya make money for sure ^ and that paper loses to scissors
did you take this concept? i dropped this same concept yesterday morning in my LLL match.. cept it was with rock and scissors ..
So I've got to end it here, sorry but I ain't gonna get weak N wussy
Cause everybody wants Inhuman...because they all are needin pussy
played, i've used it as well as many others after me ..(the wordplay that is)
vs
at first i thought u were cool, like a friend who can be handy
but ur name and verse made me realize how Cornea person's verse can be
meh, played nameplay on him but this is the best worded one i've seen.
ur not known to play fair, u can't win a battle without doin some whore shit
cuz if u win, it don't take the universe’s rotation to know that you either cheated orbit
rofl, i think i've seen this ONCE before as wordplay but i like yours better.
Cornea doesn't have glasses, cuz he feels he needs style
so in a fight he has contacts, 'in that's why he's got his mom on speed dial
meh, could'a been better.
you're not wanted here bitch, do us a favor and leave this Earth
dude, i STILL think you're a girl, tho you fellow to the fucking dirt
naw. weak ..
Corn's prolly the most suckiest person in LLL. so no ones gonna be ducking you
'n i ain't sayin he will do shit, when he meets the he'll of my fucking shoe
again, weak.
this guy's so unpopular, a life in Hell would be better
but Cornea loves getting L's, cuz normally he don't even RECIEVE letters
ok
cornea came kind'a wack imo, and inhuman just toppled it here ..
v/ inhuman
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