Very Well (0-1) vs SyaNidal (0-2)

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[Steven William]

go 12.

[Very Well]

dont tell me what to do!

12, agreed.

[Very Well]

You pre-judged me, I dont think you know who you want it wit
you jumped the gun, just to get shot down in front of it
But really you got the most tired rhymes in the league
everybody knows a Sy is a sign of fatigue
shit you aspire to be, a TEXT hall of famer?
this flamer, he's gave up on life at 16
an I aint gonna 'clap' you cuz ya girl did that
you get the same Ol' Dirty cut like ODB tracks
ya skills is yur handicap so dont even start to bitch
you couldnt get a fair shake if voters had parkinsons
its over when the fat bitch sings, Sy an her duet
so ima leave before this homo gets anymore erect

[Steven William]

I'm not gonna make it this week, sorry - nice drop Well

[Cody Nash]

You pre-judged me, I dont think you know who you want it wit
you jumped the gun, just to get shot down in front of it
meh, no.
But really you got the most tired rhymes in the league
everybody knows a Sy is a sign of fatigue
lol, ok.
shit you aspire to be, a TEXT hall of famer?
this flamer, he's gave up on life at 16
don't rhyme ..
an I aint gonna 'clap' you cuz ya girl did that
you get the same Ol' Dirty cut like ODB tracks
meh, plain.
ya skills is yur handicap so dont even start to bitch
you couldnt get a fair shake if voters had parkinsons
doesn't rhyme to me ..you must have a MAD accent lol.
its over when the fat bitch sings, Sy an her duet
so ima leave before this homo gets anymore erect
yuck ..no


weak verse, syn could've easily topped it ..but i guess you win.

[Tae]

V/vw.

[Very Well]

Sorry but this has to be said,

Cry yur a dumbass, lines 5 an 6 do rhyme, pay attention.
its a flip flopped flow, the 1st half of line 5 "to be" rhymes with the 2nd half of line 6 "16", just as the 2nd half of line 5 "famer", rhymes with the 1st half of line 6 "flamer".

also lines 10 an 11, Start-to-bitch. Park-in-sins
sound it out dipshit.


step ya game up and learn to diversify yur rhyme scheme.

[Meks.]

lol

[_Lyrics]

You pre-judged me, I dont think you know who you want it wit
you jumped the gun, just to get shot down in front of it
iight
But really you got the most tired rhymes in the league
everybody knows a Sy is a sign of fatigue
iight
shit you aspire to be, a TEXT hall of famer?
this flamer, he's gave up on life at 16
nah,
an I aint gonna 'clap' you cuz ya girl did that
you get the same Ol' Dirty cut like ODB tracks
ehh, nah
ya skills is yur handicap so dont even start to bitch
you couldnt get a fair shake if voters had parkinsons
lol, mehh
its over when the fat bitch sings, Sy an her duet
so ima leave before this homo gets anymore erect
nah
the flow was iight, the punches were ok, i think the middle you kinda fell off in, keep the same consistency as before. some multis, wordplay was ok.

[Nick James.]

Very Well wins via no show

Very Well (1-1)
SyaNidal (0-3)