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    Samantha C. Hensley

    Samantha C. Hensley




    “He who knows his way will find me,
    For I am not too far, I am your neighbor”



    She tapped on the rain-splashed window..

    TAP..
    ……..TAP…
    ……………..TAP....


    In a maze of lost pleasure and joy.
    Her eyes quarreled over what to feel.
    She steers into dilated conversations..
    Heart dipped from pots, to containers, to ponds.
    Dripping slow off her heart casing; is her determination..
    To live on with her dreams as they stand,
    She quenches and curls while her stomach
    Quells from obscure gestures of cruelty.
    Past relishes convolute anti premises,
    Loading; nothing more than an unkind base
    Her body flailed in weakness,
    With each gasp for breathe was one moment taken away




    Her eyes decieve, in return she is hated
    ...Of shabby carousels playing in her mind
    Lullabies of crucial sentiments,
    Contradict in her thought of well-being
    Her nails screech the wooden oak,
    Of tare rooted aphrodisiac memoirs
    “Her beauty kept her restrained,
    For lust was out to grasp her and shine.
    She out classed the rest with such grace
    With no intention of doing so, she was put in her place”

    A well state mind corrupts the pupils
    Of so called family that combust.
    Rapists are created from dad, uncles and cousins.
    Very few knew the story of benevolence
    About Samantha C. Hensley.
    Those who knew envied from the depth of her beauty



    Her tears grab hold for dear life,
    Stretching wondrously to find a stable grip.
    She caresses the sides of the window
    Vail quilt is wrapped, In healing of her wounds
    The rope eloped around her neck,
    Tickling her emotions and derailing her motivation
    Heart pounds sweat of melodic scarcity
    "da dum...dadum.... da dum...dadum...."
    Now as she hangs over her dreams..
    the tears dance on down in sweet happiness.
    The day she is free has passed over,
    Free at last she strides away...
    slowly her eyes began to close,
    sayin good-bye, hanging on a serious note.
    Last edited by Spoken; October 23rd, 2006 at 09:20 PM
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    wow..

    PS sucks man....bump.
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    Damn U nice. Now this piece contained extenxive vocab. which brought more creativity. It was informal. The emotion was deep and the topic and itz contents were thought out and well put together. The structure was amazing . Like how you fitted the pictures in to provide extra imagery. although what lied amongst the text was more than enough for the imagination. Overall this was a very good and interesting read. Nice Shit....


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    thank you.

    appreciate the feed.

    bump!.
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    Pretty good piece.

    Nothing much to say about it. It was pretty solid, and stood stable. Good three parter. Flashy effects didn't help much. It kind of made it cluterry and too decorated. You could've added to the piece more by just putting black print and one picture at the end, so you didn't have to add to the piece by doing all that. Good vocabulary, a good and solid read. Good job.

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    I know you didn't think it was that easy.

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...2&page=2&pp=15

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    thanks.
    i thought i was gonan get hate from you..but thanks.
    i appreciate your time.

    the red lines are like sayings...like a narrator sayin something.
    i dont know i had a vision in my head i guess....

    and ill RTF on that link thank you!
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    Link?!..DONE!
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    Yup a solid piece here, i liked the images but they wouldn''t have been missed as i believe this was creativly and solidly tackled. The language was very good and so was the structuring...the tap part is quite similar to the drip drip drip thing i did lol...but yeah..the way you used metaphors to describe certain parts was clever and this piece looked much more organised and less generic. Furthermore, it did have emotion and overall i liked it as it displayed a melancholic feel in parts. So yeah good, solid piece, stay up^.

    If you haven't checked this yet, check it when you can thanks...if you have then thanks.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=313566

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    will do man thanks for teh feed.
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    you ol' poetic writing ass individual you lol, very impressed as always this one of your more better pieces very solid from imagry to emotion, vocabulary was decent not too much complex but enough for the average and above average to comprehend nicely your style is very appreciative because it allows readings to follow your words smoothly enough to understand the story within the words and thas what i like about your drops, a very talented display on writing props homie props

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    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
    Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
    Stress oceans try to drown me
    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

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    ^^
    no worrie sosn it was 1 minute ago you mean not 4 hrs ago...lmfao

    thanks.
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    All i have to say is poor girl.......good read

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    lmfao.
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    the best feed i hove gotten in my entire RB life
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    Quote Originally Posted by lyricalweaponry
    All i have to say is poor girl.......good read
    lmao
    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
    Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
    Stress oceans try to drown me
    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

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