RickTick Vs. Lyrisicc

[RickTick]

10-20 lines
NO TOPIC!!!
due in 45 minutes

[RickTick]

im telling you know im about to put you in a coffin quick
im the type to put your "face in your ass" so you can "talk your shit"
yo man you better "watch what you saying" like you got your "eyes in your mouth"
ill run up in your crib and bust and then you gonna die by the couch
forget all the bullshit im gonna make your ass crawl with the heat
and my 38. twist your stomach like an all you can eat
yo man so i suggest you get out my range like restraining orders
ill shoot you 9 times and leave your fucking brain reordered
yo man you dudes is just jealous cuz i got more "birds" then a "chicken coup"
and i got so many guns i still have some i ain't get to shoot
and i rip the booth i have your whole team saying yo ricktick your shit the truth
yo man everything i spit is sick like my throat's infected
im the hottest rapper in the world and i ain't sold a record
but yo man whenever i get to clappin at you boy
tha law will never find out what happened to you boy

[Final™]

*Deaded*
Pre Writer.

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…..\\\\\\Load.
Making call-outs in bitchslapped, but no replies
Then here stumbles in a newbee…. No surprise.
Lets make this battle.. just quick plain-n-simple
I shouldnt have even posted, now ima anal-rip-u
Next time ill just no-show, thatll even-the-odds
Your name holds no weight, its equal-to-thongs
Your just a lonely ass kid, deprived of attention
Literally, ur ill, the net just hides-your-infection
Scalp your ass and throw ya skull on a flagpost
Fly it at half-stance so my “veteran” class-shows
Just your alias sounds awful, your text is horrific
Just webstered that word^, it described a “ricktick”
Id love to harass u, but your too time-consuming
RB should develope an area to hide-you-newbies
…./////Bounce.

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Uppin... dropped this shit last night and still no votes... what the fuck...
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[RickTick]

uppin # 1

[burt0n]

forget all the bullshit im gonna make your ass crawl with the heat
and my 38. twist your stomach like an all you can eat

vs

the whole fucking verse!

that fucking ill as fuckkkkkkk queria... damn! loving that flow and them punches.. few good personals too

rick.. you got some dope punchlines but they aint directed at queria, they coulda been ryhmed at anyone.. you gotta do some research and get some dope personals.
good battlin, keep it up boys

vote: queria (if i could)

[':Tyrant:']

Just your alias sounds awful, your text is horrific
Just webstered that word^, it described a “ricktick”

vs

im telling you know im about to put you in a coffin quick
im the type to put your "face in your ass" so you can "talk your shit"
yo man you better "watch what you saying" like you got your "eyes in your mouth"

na.................Rick Tick.....Those are Elementary Punches.....U gotta get more complex wit ya punches....then u can rip

v/QueriaRapperQue

[RickTick]

upping # 2

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thx for the feedback tyrent and burd0n...
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uppin... sup with it.

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uppin

[-Soufpaw Outlaw-]

daaaaaaaamn lyrissics flow wuz sick as fuck rick ticks wuz ok but i think the experience lvl of lyrissics flo is what one this just because all of his shit wuz on point rick u had sum punches but u also had sum basic punches

v lyrisicc

[SonnyK9]

im telling you know im about to put you in a coffin quick
im the type to put your "face in your ass" so you can "talk your shit"
yo man you better "watch what you saying" like you got your "eyes in your mouth"
ill run up in your crib and bust and then you gonna die by the couch
forget all the bullshit im gonna make your ass crawl with the heat
and my 38. twist your stomach like an all you can eat
yo man so i suggest you get out my range like restraining orders
ill shoot you 9 times and leave your fucking brain reordered
yo man you dudes is just jealous cuz i got more "birds" then a "chicken coup"
and i got so many guns i still have some i ain't get to shoot
and i rip the booth i have your whole team saying yo ricktick your shit the truth
yo man everything i spit is sick like my throat's infected
im the hottest rapper in the world and i ain't sold a record
but yo man whenever i get to clappin at you boy
tha law will never find out what happened to you boy

rick tick-that verse needs more personals blood
ya flow was ok but need harder punches too
and dnt waffle shit too much coz then ya jus been whack
Making call-outs in bitchslapped, but no replies
Then here stumbles in a newbee…. No surprise.
Lets make this battle.. just quick plain-n-simple
I shouldnt have even posted, now ima anal-rip-u
Next time ill just no-show, thatll even-the-odds
Your name holds no weight, its equal-to-thongs
Your just a lonely ass kid, deprived of attention
Literally, ur ill, the net just hides-your-infection
Scalp your ass and throw ya skull on a flagpost
Fly it at half-stance so my “veteran” class-shows
Just your alias sounds awful, your text is horrific
Just webstered that word^, it described a “ricktick”
Id love to harass u, but your too time-consuming
RB should develope an area to hide-you-newbies

lyrisicc- u came wid sme good punches g
u had personals n hit them hard
ya flow was iight too

my vote//lyrisicc

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thx for the feedback... uppin