clisk vs. -wordplay-

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sorry i did your name wrong on the other thread...

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HALF ASS!


A pussywillow or a venus "fly" trap is what this orchid be
'cause he rose to the occasion..
..................N' planted tulips "round my dickweed".
Expect nothing' but flames when I'm lacin' a verse
I'll put your face in the dirt. now you know your right place in the earth
Put the word like against it. Yup, I see that, and now I'm nauseous
'cause you made it obvious you're down for whatever
......................also to perform salad tosses.
I'll drown word in his affection, apply aggression
you cant fit outta the hole so you crawl..
................. and make you a c-section
I demolish weakeness in an instant, i stay fly and balanced
ya head's so big how do ya shoulders carry it..
........too bad..... we cant say the same about your talent!

[Katch-22]

i see you uppin on your skills, this lil slut has been improvin
you set 2 threads to get 1 win, but guess what? you still losin
if he thinks he nicer then me, then this man is just insane
i've had colds n coughs longer then his championship riegn
he aint shit, man i flip out and drop this rookie anyday
i know he's a bitch, cuz clisk, sounds like part of a pussy anyways
i'll get pinched, but they'll aquit, when you get str8 drawn n quartered
bitch, you look like a lil kid that got raped on law n order
they'll prob'ly wanna put me away for life when i kill em
he retarded, he probably considered a really special victim

everythin underlined is a link

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ok we got both drop sin now vote on up!. nice drop word.....G'Luck

[Bilayer]

I'll drown word in his affection, apply aggression
you cant fit outta the hole so you crawl..
................. and make you a c-section
I demolish weakeness in an instant, i stay fly and balanced
ya head's so big how do ya shoulders carry it..
........too bad..... we cant say the same about your talent!

Vrs

if he thinks he nicer then me, then this man is just insane
i've had colds n coughs longer then his championship riegn
he aint shit, man i flip out and drop this rookie anyday
i know he's a bitch, cuz clisk, sounds like part of a pussy anyways


This battle was pretty close but james pulled it out wit a couple more consistent punches me to wodplay you had some nice wordplay bra i like how u put all ur lins toghter but one some they didn't have the same effect as they did in other parts and watch ur structure also bra but this was a nice battle

Vote James

hit up my battle in my sig

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Vote - James

Well, this was kinda hard to vote on also. Pretty coll battle overall. I seen some ok punches from kid sick, but i seen harder punches from James. Both had some bad wording, so ya'll was basically even on everything. So i based it on consistency and that goes to Clisk. No hate though.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=313577

Honest vote^^

peace....

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^^whose kid sick?!....anyway's thanks an X forgot to poll his vote lmfao its koo.

[Angel of Dopenes]

A pussywillow or a venus "fly" trap is what this orchid be
'cause he rose to the occasion..
..................N' planted tulips "round my dickweed".
i've used this rose concept before. mine was better :/. so ok
Expect nothing' but flames when I'm lacin' a verse
I'll put your face in the dirt. now you know your right place in the earth
[b]lol ok-ish
Put the word like against it. Yup, I see that, and now I'm nauseous
'cause you made it obvious you're down for whatever
......................also to perform salad tosses.
meh
I'll drown word in his affection, apply aggression
you cant fit outta the hole so you crawl..
................. and make you a c-section
should've made a set-up relating to the punch. so ok i guess
I demolish weakeness in an instant, i stay fly and balanced
ya head's so big how do ya shoulders carry it..
........too bad..... we cant say the same about your talent!
lol it was iight


ok verse. could've been better with bettter wording(i'm working on that shit too yo).





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see you uppin on your skills, this lil slut has been improvin
you set 2 threads to get 1 win, but guess what? you still losin
ok. couldv'e been dope, but ok
if he thinks he nicer then me, then this man is just insane
i've had colds n coughs longer then his championship riegn
ok-ish. once again wording could've made this dope
he aint shit, man i flip out and drop this rookie anyday
i know he's a bitch, cuz clisk, sounds like part of a pussy anyways
nah
i'll get pinched, but they'll aquit, when you get str8 drawn n quartered
bitch, you look like a lil kid that got raped on law n order
no
they'll prob'ly wanna put me away for life when i kill em
he retarded, he probably considered a really special victim
i get it but no


you were doin well at first. then you fell off and it looked like you really didn't give a fuck.

v//Clisk

[B.Nesse]

A pussywillow or a venus "fly" trap is what this orchid be
'cause he rose to the occasion..
..................N' planted tulips "round my dickweed".
lmfao
Expect nothing' but flames when I'm lacin' a verse
I'll put your face in the dirt. now you know your right place in the earth
nice
Put the word like against it. Yup, I see that, and now I'm nauseous
'cause you made it obvious you're down for whatever
......................also to perform salad tosses.
lol ok diss
I'll drown word in his affection, apply aggression
you cant fit outta the hole so you crawl..
................. and make you a c-section
nice, word it better tho
I demolish weakeness in an instant, i stay fly and balanced
ya head's so big how do ya shoulders carry it..
........too bad..... we cant say the same about your talent!
decent closer


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i see you uppin on your skills, this lil slut has been improvin
you set 2 threads to get 1 win, but guess what? you still losin
blah, not a hard hit
if he thinks he nicer then me, then this man is just insane
i've had colds n coughs longer then his championship riegn
ok punch
he aint shit, man i flip out and drop this rookie anyday
i know he's a bitch, cuz clisk, sounds like part of a pussy anyways
lol nice nameplay
i'll get pinched, but they'll aquit, when you get str8 drawn n quartered
bitch, you look like a lil kid that got raped on law n order
lol i watch dat so good 1
they'll prob'ly wanna put me away for life when i kill em
he retarded, he probably considered a really special victim
blah closer

v/ clisk or james or w/e

better verse overall, more decent punches and alot more humor, wordplay jus went laid back on his punches...didnt put too much into em but decent personals, aight nameplay other than that nothin stood out much, therefore clisk capitalized on with his humerous punches

rtf @ both link in sig

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^^
will do ma thanks for the vote...

upping.

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I'll drown word in his affection, apply aggression
you cant fit outta the hole so you crawl..
................. and make you a c-section
I demolish weakeness in an instant, i stay fly and balanced
ya head's so big how do ya shoulders carry it..
........too bad..... we cant say the same about your talent!

Vrs

if he thinks he nicer then me, then this man is just insane
i've had colds n coughs longer then his championship riegn
he aint shit, man i flip out and drop this rookie anyday
i know he's a bitch, cuz clisk, sounds like part of a pussy anyways

James-i liked the wordplay throughout your verse, nice punches, flow and structure was so-so, but overall this was a fairly nice verse

-wordplay--you also had some good wordplay, slightly worse than James', some nice punches, flow and structure was on point, fairly nice verse also

vote-James, i felt he had more consistancy, good battle, both keep up

hit this up, i'll be back to poll in a few
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=313577

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^^
dude get on your coherent acocunt and poll your vote slut!....then ill RTF...CHEESE!