10lines
due by midnight
u spit first
THE D.C. KID
merky_merk
10lines
due by midnight
u spit first
wat good
check 123
aight how long it gonna take for u to spit u need a longer time or are u good
im good
yo spit before midnight my nig
leave you in the dirt with yo family dirty son dirty daughter
you aint merkin shit but i will leave you in merky water
you bout to get hurt wit these hot flames
im spitin at cha million dolla rap linesthat came from lames
i am the o mercy full god of these
killa lines my gun is barkin at cha so please
stop thinkin yo raps is better then mine cause i will
leave you merked with my hot rap lines so please jus chill
cause im tired and threw wit you
U can’t rap nigga u skate y cant u see
u aint nuttin but another lupa fiasco wanna be
yes thatz right im merk_merky and im ready to merk u
ur rhymes would not mathch mine even if mines where old and urs are new
after this battle ur goona beg for another one like ur feinging for crack
u don’t wanna mess me cause I got more soldiers on the streets than they do in iraq
by the time u get to this line I bet ur so scared its intense
I cant belive u think u’ll win ur rhymes dont even make sense
This gonna be ur first lose I know its kinda of weird
But next time u battle me don’t be wack be perpared
uppin
uppin
leave you in the dirt with yo family dirty son dirty daughter
you aint merkin shit but i will leave you in merky water
barely quotable
vs.
nothin much
this battle sucked. both read LLL battles. D.C. KID u only got this cuz of your opener which sucked less than the rest of ur verse. merky merk, ur wording cost you this battle. u could've turned around and made it dope but you just kept it plain. v//D.C. KID for coming harder(i guess)
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D.C.- You need a lot of word in your drop...you need more solid personals, more punches that hit hard, a cleaner structure etc...Read other battles and see how they drop and start elevating
Merk- nuthing really good in your verse, you had no personals and the punches did not hit at all...Your lines were stretched and it was just overall falling apart..very weak drop..You also need to read up on other battles and elevate
\/-D.C. for coming Slightly better
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