ups.
ups.
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
yo this piece is maddddd dope seriously...easily the best i done read on here today...my favorite line:
goddamn the internals and multies in this piece was just fucking crazy...yo we need to collab or something in the future cause i like your writing style..."Coulds forshadow the reighn, steam rises, only peace is a gun
All the sense spent on revolution time weaved isn't spun"
no prob just hit me with a topic
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
nice nice....i'd have to say this is actually a really quality piece i liked the use of multies and multiple multies within (some cases one line) one bar not to over the top worked well with the piece. the vocab was good as well at bits it slumped but it was only a line if that the imagery was dope to made me feel like i was back in high school on some shakespear class shit...& it flowed really well i read it like twice (once in my head an once out loud) and the bars came out really smooth nice work really nice work...... i'll be looking out for future shit
props
this was a definite nice drop here man...way above average and should me marked to everyones eyes as you still got that writing shit on yo hands man...you writer ol you!....lmfao....anyway's man nice multies i liked it alot man also the metaphorical execution was superb it really detail the emotino that you were tryna dish on out with a nice tone of vocab man nothing overdone just nicely assorte dinto a good set up man...liked how you capialize don that seeing it capable you took the chance and grasped the concept firmly and you never let go of it and just dominated the topic.....nice!. keep em coming man!
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thanx for feed ups for more if possible
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
ups.
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
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