nicely done!..
mad props man..you came original 100%..yea people have thought of this and have done it but yo came with a diffrent approacha nd very unqiue and determined you never fell of once..your vocab stood nicely and assorted ya know, nothing cramped and yet nothing basic...you came very well rounded with its feel in emotion and content..your diction was no limited which made the piece very wonderous yet direct and on point so we can understand..this was a nice concept and your grasped it firmly and never let go..you drove this piece to its extent no way can another do this topic unless it tops you..in which my case i feel like it cant or else the other dude will be called a biter...lmfao. nice job man i liked your metaphors that helped the story out nicely and the vocab and wording very well put..nice job!.