10 lines
due soon as possible.
'Thizz
Cry
10 lines
due soon as possible.
checkin' in ..good ridance.
this newb, popular? nah ..
you're far from public reach, everyone'll see when i hit ya chest kid
but yeah, this guys wanted ..on milk cartons while he's gettin' molested
waste your ass, with no time to relax. show ya what ya spine lacks
and if ya don't see the connection, its cuz i pulled the cord out his back
kids dont belong here, i fear to this site your themes a foreigner
this child can backtalk all he wants ..he just won't be leavin' the corner
my flows unstoppable, i'm untoppable, so watch as i topple fool ..
funny how your bodys made for water ..and how i dropped it there too
type this in seconds ..i beckon for a bigger challenge, i need a hint
a good analogy for this battle'd be:
challenging people are like jeans... and 'Thizz is just their lint
quick 10.
Cry/Nash huh? ill smash ya fast, ya freestyles and writtins are trash
and ull think i dropped ya in N Y, that way i make this bitch Crash
these FL cats wont catch shit & then vote for you, kid whats new
ur bitch made & ill help u hide ur true colors - by beatin u black n blue
ill take a knife to your ass, slash, cut, stab ur done cant ya see?
then i told the bitch to find talent - & all he said was he "allready beat me"
ill key this up quick and watch it smash ur fragile body like a commit
then he'll drop somthing to drop my jaws - before i begin to vommit
Crys punchs are weak, but whats sad is hes never w/ a girl or messin
so him finding or gettin Whit - is just completely out of the question
waste your ass, with no time to relax. show ya what ya spine lacks
and if ya don't see the connection, its cuz i pulled the cord out his back
vs
nothin
lmao...one sided nash took this all the way like most his battles...nash came with punches...but for once came weak with personals..and crys strutre was pretty sloppy...thizz you know what your doing but your just coming weak..u know how to throw a punch but there played...look up some personals and use them in a battle..but v/ cry....hit the sig.
Empire
wow...
thanks for the vote...
battle me...
up 1
upps #2.
waste your ass, with no time to relax. show ya what ya spine lacks
and if ya don't see the connection, its cuz i pulled the cord out his back
vs
nothin
pretty one sided even though i think nash didn t do that well himself but thizzz need to elevate and make connecting punches i really didnt even like the cord line from nash since its played but watever
v/ cry
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311310
v/ cry
Cry's shit was overall better than dudes, thizz tried to get all fancy with the wordplay but most of it didnt rhyme fully which made the effect of the actual diss worth nothin, cry had better punches and word choice, better wordplay...a few metas, personals on both sides would have made da battle more appealin, both lagged in that area but thizz's verse wasnt enough to counter cry's, cry took it with better punches & concepts that connected
rtf on my battle...itz up now
DNT SPEAK.
you're far from public reach, everyone'll see when i hit ya chest kid
but yeah, this guys wanted ..on milk cartons while he's gettin' molested
LMFAO!!!!
waste your ass, with no time to relax. show ya what ya spine lacks
and if ya don't see the connection, its cuz i pulled the cord out his back
^nice
vs.
ill key this up quick and watch it smash ur fragile body like a commit
then he'll drop somthing to drop my jaws - before i begin to vommit
^lol decent
Cry - Another dope verse from you. Good punches. Structure and flow were also good. You came with good consistancy in your verse also. Nice solid creative punchlines. Overall you had a dope verse.
Thizz - You had a decent verse for being a newb. Some decent punchlines my favorite being the line about drop your jaws...before you vomit. Some pretty good concepts. You should work a little on your wordplay and you should try wording your punchlines better. Also you should come with more consistancy in your verse.
V. Cry
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311422
^ Hit that up.
thanks for the votes
wow @ the votes coming that fast in a row.
upps #3.
#4..
i'm not voting..but...
waste your ass, with no time to relax. show ya what ya spine lacks
and if ya don't see the connection, its cuz i pulled
thats a really really played line...
so if you won on that..dont feel to proud..
:hosea2:
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