Well then let me school you here. You can not just put words together. They have to make sense. If you use the same words over again, your shits lame. Class fuckin sucks... use it to your advantage, like a lyrical enhancement. Shit aint gotta be a dead rhyme, just close. Improvise.Originally Posted by ENYSoldier
i understood you da first time nigga
i'm just saying i hate when people say "pay attention in class"
vote here
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
True story about cassidy:
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
uppin again drop an honest vote people
close this up
vote here
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
True story about cassidy:
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
this battle was pretty whack but i'll give it to enysoldier
enysoldier: increase your vocab and stop saying fuck so much
raw: stop stretching out your lines so much
both elevate more
the only reason eny soldier got it is cause i liked those multis
You a motherfuckin chicken because you raw.
I play the rap game to outsmart em all.
This is the motherfuckin art of war.
i'll get your ass bounced like my fuckin basketball.
you my trash and your mom's treasure.
your mom was feelin sad i came to give her pleasure.
put away your rulers i'm too big to measure.
the girl im battling is wack man forget her.
one bar to go what do i say?
how about, your a faggot nigga have a nice day.
u did not have one punch, war does not rhyme with basketball, stop talking about yourself and you closed by wishing him a nice day...
I was made to merk you – You’re ENYSoldier, flip my name, and I’m War
I told him ‘I’m the illest in the game’ …….
……and he came back saying “Bullshit! I’m Skelator!”
Honestly you claim to be hood? But you play all day, on your Playstation
So I’ll probably guess, that San Andreas, is as close as you get to Gang Relation
Who am I? The name says it all, you're ENY Soldier, but I’m plain raw.
Told him to come hot…
…so he rolled in smiling with his new gear, saying “Barbeques Galore”
I told him I’d merk him on AIM, but he said “Man, I Admin!!”
I took him seriously, then hopped on his account…
…and noticed this fag, would only “Add Men”
Okay, so you got a lame ass name, and nobody cares where you're from
But dude, your reaching the heights of your career…
…but it's a pity you’re a ticking time bomb…
ok-clever concept with war but the skelotoar shit was wack
gang relation...meh
barbeques galore... doesnt rhyme well and not set up to connect
Admin/Add Men- very played concept
closer- rhyming dubious again and not really an insult- u called him a bomb
still raw takes this easy and the war concept was pretty clever-otherwise it could use some revision
IJL
that is one whack vote from elite u can prob get it dqed, not to mention him having the same IP ADRESS as soldier!- if its not the same person its still bull
IJL
eny is my friend
notice how we both reppin East new york
but if you wanna dq my vote because he my friend then go ahead
just dont ban me
btw, why you aint come to school today eny?
Posting Rules
