Middleweight Championship: Aeral (1-0) Vs. Vlad Tempus (1-0)

[Mystery~Murdera]

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Must vote on 3 battles

[Aeral]

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[I Got Pwnd]

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[Aeral]

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[Aeral]

Dude, wtf's? up with this pimp shit.. it's quickly getting old,
the closest you gotten to a bitch touchin you.. is the receptionist puttin you on hold
don't even deny you're a faggot, there's no way that shits sane,
you used to be the butt of a joke... cos that was your ex-b/f's nickname
but don't be sad.. shit in about a second you'll laugh,
that makes you two-faced... right when this punch fucking splits it in half
your boyfriends don't even want you no more, but hey shit's still gravy,
they portray you as just another cliche, shit gets used daily!
you fucking suck vlad.. dude, how the fuck are your rhymes stable,
shit i'd tell you to divide and conquer... but you don't even know your time tables
you ain't fucking chicks nonetheless, and that there's no gimmick,
the last one you dated had such a DRYWALL they were fucking building rooms with it
^ going back to that, i want you to just check this guy's tracks,
To make a long STORY short... you've never seen a chick CLIMAX
Never catch this guy appear, you've never even fucking rocked clout,
everyone knows Vlad-a-mere, like the guy Lenox Lewis knocked out
i mean fuck races and shit, but i ain't feeling shit that ya spitten,
Vlad_Tempus? i'd take a second look but the only think you Russian's ya writtens
School's tough man, I'm getting ready to fucken transfer and switch
..well speaking of universities, that'll be the only way TEMPLE a bitch
I feel you though man, i mean shit it's hard to get knocked plenty,
but fuck you even named yourself PUSS, cos you've never got any!!!

[I Got Pwnd]

pff...you suck,slut!

I oughta shoot 4 ur face'n.But ur waste of concentration.
Ur no stock broker,But Ill give u fare share's...of humiliation.
.
.
.
I'll treat u like a scared slut.so prepare-as i flare up.
Cuz off shear talent alone...u couldnt give a decent hair cut.
callin me a fag?Ur a weak bitch..+ lack the toughness n class.
^But ur accostum'd to the lifestyle....ur lover got stuck n ur ass!
Gay jokes are for gay folks...see...I can create what ever.
Cuz every thought'll populate..well atleast its better late then never!
You'll never be the champ,chump!..just a victim leavin on a stretcher.
Ill be leavin buckle'n the belt-after u buckle under pressure.
So be aware I wont stall.To use ur head-n plaster the wall.
after ur dead,I couldnt care less..cuz I never cared at all.
U'll get burried today.after I execute u with various spray's.
So ILL carry out the order...just so u can get carried away.
I should police this site.get rid of aeral's problem path.
Ill make you assume the position...
...with the rest of those noobs in the bottom half.
Im amazed at the fact your here...In my sight to blaze at.
Cuz 'A' will only be above my head..stitched on alanta braves hat.
fuck 24 lines.Mine are devoted to see you get demoted n fall.

check.

..out this quote,cuz if it wasnt 4 that..u wouldnt of been quoted at all.
Ill take ur played shit.flush it down the toilet...an stomp ur guts crazy.
Ur whole drop seems passive..AND's...cuz its alotta butts an maybe's.

pz.

[Evolve]

Vote: Vlad

First guy had some decent concepts.. he just couldnt get the wording right. And i wasnt feeling all the capatalized words. I mean i understand one.. maybe 2.. but you had 5. Vlad.. you made me chuckle a few times. Just one thing i personally dont like about your verses is.. they are a little hard to read thru.. with all the abbrviation and extra punctuation. Other than that.. i felt you took this.

[Philly®]

you ain't fucking chicks nonetheless, and that there's no gimmick,
the last one you dated had such a DRYWALL they were fucking building rooms with it
Never catch this guy appear, you've never even fucking rocked clout,
everyone knows Vlad-a-mere, like the guy Lenox Lewis knocked out
i mean fuck races and shit, but i ain't feeling shit that ya spitten,
Vlad_Tempus? i'd take a second look but the only think you Russian's ya writtens
School's tough man, I'm getting ready to fucken transfer and switch
..well speaking of universities, that'll be the only way TEMPLE a bitch
^^lol @ TEMPLE PUNCH



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I'll treat u like a scared slut.so prepare-as i flare up.
Cuz off shear talent alone...u couldnt give a decent hair cut.
U'll get burried today.after I execute u with various spray's.
So ILL carry out the order...just so u can get carried away.
I should police this site.get rid of aeral's problem path.
Ill make you assume the position...
...with the rest of those noobs in the bottom half.
Im amazed at the fact your here...In my sight to blaze at.
Cuz 'A' will only be above my head..stitched on alanta braves hat.




IMO pretty even match quote wise... but really i think voth had so many punches that coulda been sooooo better... but to my lik'n i felt aeral caught my LOL factor

V/aeral


nice match

[Untold.]

you fucking suck vlad.. dude, how the fuck are your rhymes stable,
shit i'd tell you to divide and conquer... but you don't even know your time tables
you ain't fucking chicks nonetheless, and that there's no gimmick,
the last one you dated had such a DRYWALL they were fucking building rooms with it
^ going back to that, i want you to just check this guy's tracks,
To make a long STORY short... you've never seen a chick CLIMAX
Never catch this guy appear, you've never even fucking rocked clout,
everyone knows Vlad-a-mere, like the guy Lenox Lewis knocked out
I feel you though man, i mean shit it's hard to get knocked plenty,
but fuck you even named yourself PUSS, cos you've never got any!!!

vs.

I oughta shoot 4 ur face'n.But ur waste of concentration.
Ur no stock broker,But Ill give u fare share's...of humiliation.
I'll treat u like a scared slut.so prepare-as i flare up.
Cuz off shear talent alone...u couldnt give a decent hair cut.
Im amazed at the fact your here...In my sight to blaze at.
Cuz 'A' will only be above my head..stitched on alanta braves hat.
^see, this was a pretty cool concept, but u worded it bad. sayin u wear a hat with a's makes it seem as if ur reppin that nigga.. should'a made it harsh 'n said like the only a's cap u wear was the scalp u cut off him, lolz..
fuck 24 lines.Mine are devoted to see you get demoted n fall.

Originally Posted by Aeral
check.

..out this quote,cuz if it wasnt 4 that..u wouldnt of been quoted at all.

basically one sided here. aeral had the wayy more wittier and fresher lines. btw, there were worded GOOD. depsite what others may say, i enjoyed the reads as well. i think vlad had some aiight concepts, but WAYY too many play'd punches. i've even used some of 'em in the past.. well, my votes for a.. he got this easy.

v/ aeral

[Jay Walker]

two faced
divide and conq
drywall
temple

those were all solid dude. you had some other punches that were alright, but nothing that special. but whats with the capitalizing of your concepts in some lines? lol, we'll understand your lines without having to do that dude.


vs.


fare share
shear talent
buckle under pressure. those were all nice, just not enough. careless is played. you had some other decent concepts like carried away and the braves hat but you just didnt pull them off well. close battle but aeral edged this.

[Aeral]

it emphasizes it LOL.

3-1, upping.

[I Got Pwnd]

1-3.

Thanx 4 the votes...an Aeral good battle.lol@Un tho'.

[LamaGod]

I'll try to come back later and edit a vote in.

booked.

[Cody Nash]

you ain't fucking chicks nonetheless, and that there's no gimmick,
the last one you dated had such a DRYWALL they were fucking building rooms with it
i mean fuck races and shit, but i ain't feeling shit that ya spitten,
Vlad_Tempus? i'd take a second look but the only think you Russian's ya writtens
^ going back to that, i want you to just check this guy's tracks,
To make a long STORY short... you've never seen a chick CLIMAX
School's tough man, I'm getting ready to fucken transfer and switch
..well speaking of universities, that'll be the only way TEMPLE a bitch
^lmao.

decent verse, not bad ..couple iffy concepts in there that could've been executed a lot better, but decent overall ..drywall and temple punch were cool.

vs.

I oughta shoot 4 ur face'n.But ur waste of concentration.
Ur no stock broker,But Ill give u fare share's...of humiliation.
I'll treat u like a scared slut.so prepare-as i flare up.
Cuz off shear talent alone...u couldnt give a decent hair cut.
You'll never be the champ,chump!..just a victim leavin on a stretcher.
Ill be leavin buckle'n the belt-after u buckle under pressure.

^the only lines i really liked coming from this verse vlad ..the braves one had potential yes, but not worth quoting to me ..you've done better.

both came decent, but areal came out on top here ..

v. Areal.

[Vaskez]

Dude, wtf's? up with this pimp shit.. it's quickly getting old,
the closest you gotten to a bitch touchin you.. is the receptionist puttin you on hold
^^wording
don't even deny you're a faggot, there's no way that shits sane,
you used to be the butt of a joke... cos that was your ex-b/f's nickname
^^better wording, bad concept
but don't be sad.. shit in about a second you'll laugh,
that makes you two-faced... right when this punch fucking splits it in half
^^played
your boyfriends don't even want you no more, but hey shit's still gravy,
they portray you as just another cliche, shit gets used daily!
^^meh-aight
you fucking suck vlad.. dude, how the fuck are your rhymes stable,
shit i'd tell you to divide and conquer... but you don't even know your time tables
^^not bad
you ain't fucking chicks nonetheless, and that there's no gimmick,
the last one you dated had such a DRYWALL they were fucking building rooms with it
^^nice bit of wordplay, but not that harsh
^ going back to that, i want you to just check this guy's tracks,
To make a long STORY short... you've never seen a chick CLIMAX
^^eh
Never catch this guy appear, you've never even fucking rocked clout,
everyone knows Vlad-a-mere, like the guy Lenox Lewis knocked out
^^aight
i mean fuck races and shit, but i ain't feeling shit that ya spitten,
Vlad_Tempus? i'd take a second look but the only think you Russian's ya writtens
^^russian/rushing is MAD played
School's tough man, I'm getting ready to fucken transfer and switch
..well speaking of universities, that'll be the only way TEMPLE a bitch
^^hmm not really harsh
I feel you though man, i mean shit it's hard to get knocked plenty,
but fuck you even named yourself PUSS, cos you've never got any!!!
^^nope. Really coulda done something more with this.

vs.

I oughta shoot 4 ur face'n.But ur waste of concentration.
Ur no stock broker,But Ill give u fare share's...of humiliation.
^^not really that witty
.
.
.
I'll treat u like a scared slut.so prepare-as i flare up.
Cuz off shear talent alone...u couldnt give a decent hair cut.
^^heh kinda corny but funny
callin me a fag?Ur a weak bitch..+ lack the toughness n class.
^But ur accostum'd to the lifestyle....ur lover got stuck n ur ass!
^^NO
Gay jokes are for gay folks...see...I can create what ever.
Cuz every thought'll populate..well atleast its better late then never!
^^nice bit of wordplay, not too harsh
You'll never be the champ,chump!..just a victim leavin on a stretcher.
Ill be leavin buckle'n the belt-after u buckle under pressure.
^^weak. I mean, creative but you shoulda done SO Much more with this concept, like a misdirection then punch.
So be aware I wont stall.To use ur head-n plaster the wall.
after ur dead,I couldnt care less..cuz I never cared at all.
^^meh
U'll get burried today.after I execute u with various spray's.
So ILL carry out the order...just so u can get carried away.
^^not witty
I should police this site.get rid of aeral's problem path.
Ill make you assume the position...
...with the rest of those noobs in the bottom half.
^^needed better wording
Im amazed at the fact your here...In my sight to blaze at.
Cuz 'A' will only be above my head..stitched on alanta braves hat.
^^ok kinda bland
fuck 24 lines.Mine are devoted to see you get demoted n fall.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Aeral
check.

..out this quote,cuz if it wasnt 4 that..u wouldnt of been quoted at all.
^^not bad flip on old concept
Ill take ur played shit.flush it down the toilet...an stomp ur guts crazy.
Ur whole drop seems passive..AND's...cuz its alotta butts an maybe's.
^^meh

wasnt feelin too much in this battle, kinda hard to decide a winner. Maybe just aeral edged it

v/aeral