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LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
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cool, 20 lines
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actually, you mind going more? 30 or something? nothing to do with this being a heavyweight match, i just haven't gotten to write a lot lately
np make it 30
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Fucking bitch I'll slit your neck, prick got respect then he's ghost..Originally Posted by Meters
So to save you the bother, I've posted your predicted next post
Your fifth comeback endeva.. but we all know god loves a tryer
Its time to make up your mind have you fell off? or are we liars?
You've killed in the past, but then you leave when you're gassed bitch
My hearts going out to meters now all he need's the skills to match it
You're still an ugly ass fat prick, and I'ma hit the target this time
You could take this bitch at face value and they'd only charge you a dime
So take your favourite quote and bin it coz we ain't battled in a minute
Last time is water over the dam... and your body was floating in it
So bitch you better come with it..who you think you gon rumble with?
Coz the winner takes all.. meters throws at him and crushes it
And prick don't try and push me, you'll get rushed coz I'm legend son
You told me to mark your words... and I'm giving you a generous 1
M spends all day with the ladies but he's about to get rocked again
I thought this faggot was bitchmade but turns out dykes adopted him
And this shit ain't funny, its tragic but I just thought I'd slip it in
How this bitch came out of hiding..now thats what I'm giving him
N' you won't gain any acknowledgment with that hypothetical shit
Coz the only attention you'll be leaving with.... is medical, bitch
Don't try and get me riled. you fell off hard you're lines are plain
N' you can research all you want but you'll NEVER find your prime again
So I know wording isnt my strength, but watch me beat your intent
And thanks, coz for once, my lines will look a decent length
I'm known to beef but I missed you..I don't even rate you to speak to
And bitch just look at my sig... even my haters are saying I'll beat you
I'll treat you like you deserve, fucking nerd you can't push me
M's a man of means, his name means shit, his verse means rusty
So you'll be ripped by the boss, I don't wanna speak to this toff
coz me and Meters exchanged words.. and I'm still feeling ripped off
good luck Meters
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Bitch,
you’re the hack behind my chestplate, when ya lying bout climbing higher
too weak to even kill my headaches, cuz Coms just an aspirin writer
as for me, I’m more than a bomb threat, I explode, whore and conquest
‘n the last time I heard you rapping, you were at my door for concepts
claimin’ strong vet since diamond minds, creation, ‘n deja.. but all the while
I thought what the fuck, dudes been Second Coming since gauntlet finals
I abolish smiles so turn ya back to me, get choked up worried I’ma snap at you
It ain’t hoarseness, ya faculty of speech goes on a permanent sabbatical
So you’re a five-year amateur, inexpert, nobody..faggot, when you leaving?
yea I’m known for propounding, and got nothin’ to add when you’re speaking
fam consists of you, wifey, and a baby girl...must be a lotta knitting n quiet shit
just don’t be shocked when ya home gets broken in
.. with nothing but bitches inside of it
sorry, but I write my own shit, and with my truthful ways, you know it’s through
so Feeble went to college, but it’s apparent the student aid..all goes to you
I hold your life in my reigns, because ya soft and run from the fighting
Cuz I got ice in my veins, you only frost ‘till we numb from the biting
See, there ain’t no crumbs for dividing...play your part and quit the crying
Yeah bitch, you’re state of the art…everyone knows that hip hops dying
Last time we met it was heavyweight too, 'member I got the crown for free
when you prevented me from standin with greats by lyin’ down for me
so now no one recalls it..shits appalling..you changed Metres, I’ll tell you that
that’s why I changed the RE to ER, to commemorate where I left you at
‘n you no-showed me in RBL.but I don’t go diggin links, this hoax is finished
cuz Coms the talk of the town, ‘n I got them speaking broken English
how you gon’ set an example online? Then run for cover from what you discover
you always lollygag on this site, ‘course ya daughter was going to on another
lyrically, you don’t see me, cuz I’m too hip hop when I spit tough
and cuz I Levis rolling back, white-washed like ya brit-rock get-up
so I quit RB, so what. My life demanded it, so c'mon man..chill
son I took a style and ran with it, to leave you boasting bout a standstill
Last edited by Meters; September 15th, 2006 at 07:49 PM
holy fuck at both your verses!
the roof.. the roof..the roof is on fire!
as for me, I’m more than a bomb threat, I explode, whore and conquest
‘n the last time I heard you rapping, you were at my door for concepts
So you’re a five-year amateur, inexpert, nobody..faggot, when you leaving?
yea I’m known for propounding, and got nothin’ to add when you’re speaking
fam consists of you, wifey, and a baby girl...must be a lotta knitting n quiet shit
just don’t be shocked when ya home gets broken in
.. with nothing but bitches inside of it
sorry, but I write my own shit, and with my truthful ways, you know it’s through
so Feeble went to college, but it’s apparent the student aid..all goes to you
Last time we met it was heavyweight too, 'member I got the crown for free
when you prevented me from standin with greats by lyin’ down for me
‘n you no-showed me in RBL.but I don’t go diggin links, this hoax is finished
cuz Coms the talk of the town, ‘n I got them speaking broken English
lyrically, you don’t see me, cuz I’m too hip hop when I spit tough
and cuz I Levis rolling back, white-washed like ya brit-rock get-up
^those that stood out 2 me overall.
vs.
You've killed in the past, but then you leave when you're gassed bitch
My hearts going out to meters now all he need's the skills to match it
You're still an ugly ass fat prick, and I'ma hit the target this time
You could take this bitch at face value and they'd only charge you a dime
So bitch you better come with it..who you think you gon rumble with?
Coz the winner takes all.. meters throws at him and crushes it
And prick don't try and push me, you'll get rushed coz I'm legend son
You told me to mark your words... and I'm giving you a generous 1
And this shit ain't funny, its tragic but I just thought I'd slip it in
How this bitch came out of hiding..now thats what I'm giving him
N' you won't gain any acknowledgment with that hypothetical shit
Coz the only attention you'll be leaving with.... is medical, bitch
Don't try and get me riled. you fell off hard you're lines are plain
N' you can research all you want but you'll NEVER find your prime again
So I know wording isnt my strength, but watch me beat your intent
And thanks, coz for once, my lines will look a decent length
So you'll be ripped by the boss, I don't wanna speak to this toff
coz me and Meters exchanged words.. and I'm still feeling ripped off
^Rofl.
Overall/-well worth read by both..Bravo!..I got Com with more quotables.I didnt feel the Sabbatical line for the reason it was really Gza-ish..nice vocab..but just didnt appeal 2 me.aspirin writer was okay but just didnt connect well 2 me..I dunno,just didnt feel it.Com had a few lines that I didnt like the firts 4 lines..I dunno just seem'd like u were warming up or sumthan..but then you came consistantly with sum nice lines now the Bitch at face value line I swear I saw feeble us that concept before..an end'd with 'washing it'..but still I liked it..overall good read by both.
V.COM
You're still an ugly ass fat prick, and I'ma hit the target this time
You could take this bitch at face value and they'd only charge you a dime
So take your favourite quote and bin it coz we ain't battled in a minute
Last time is water over the dam... and your body was floating in it
So bitch you better come with it..who you think you gon rumble with?
Coz the winner takes all.. meters throws at him and crushes it
And prick don't try and push me, you'll get rushed coz I'm legend son
You told me to mark your words... and I'm giving you a generous 1
liked this one^
M spends all day with the ladies but he's about to get rocked again
I thought this faggot was bitchmade but turns out dykes adopted him
Don't try and get me riled. you fell off hard you're lines are plain
N' you can research all you want but you'll NEVER find your prime again
So I know wording isnt my strength, but watch me beat your intent
And thanks, coz for once, my lines will look a decent length
I'll treat you like you deserve, fucking nerd you can't push me
M's a man of means, his name means shit, his verse means rusty
sick
didn't really feel the 'hiding' punch I don't hear that term where I'm at so.. didn't like the reference to a sig you posted yourself prior to the match, seems like you planned it in advance, just doesn't appeal to me.. but you had some real fire in there n' some nice cliches.. overall nice drop
vs
as for me, I’m more than a bomb threat, I explode, whore and conquest
‘n the last time I heard you rapping, you were at my door for concepts
claimin’ strong vet since diamond minds, creation, ‘n deja.. but all the while
I thought what the fuck, dudes been Second Coming since gauntlet finals
dope 4 bars.
I hold your life in my reigns, because ya soft and run from the fighting
Cuz I got ice in my veins, you only frost ‘till we numb from the biting
See, there ain’t no crumbs for dividing...play your part and quit the crying
Yeah bitch, you’re state of the art…everyone knows that hip hops dying
so now no one recalls it..shits appalling..you changed Metres, I’ll tell you that
that’s why I changed the RE to ER, to commemorate where I left you at
‘n you no-showed me in RBL.but I don’t go diggin links, this hoax is finished
cuz Coms the talk of the town, ‘n I got them speaking broken English
sick.
lyrically, you don’t see me, cuz I’m too hip hop when I spit tough
and cuz I Levis rolling back, white-washed like ya brit-rock get-up
again, sick..
the opener could have been way harder, reworded like:
cuz Coms an aspirin writer.. that couldn't kill a mild headache
but I liked your verse alot.. the sabbatical punch hurt you, the 'stand next to the great's punch made it sound like you'e admitting he's one of the greats.. so nah.. the 'student aid' was a weak phrase to use.. but you had a shitload of hard wit, man I'm impressed, I don't think you're rusty at all. Meters is back.
that said, I think Com edged it out here.. I didn't count the quotables but I came away from the read feeling like COM did more damage.
v/COM
pz
You've killed in the past, but then you leave when you're gassed bitch
My hearts going out to meters now all he need's the skills to match it
So bitch you better come with it..who you think you gon rumble with?
Coz the winner takes all.. meters throws at him and crushes it
And prick don't try and push me, you'll get rushed coz I'm legend son
You told me to mark your words... and I'm giving you a generous 1
And this shit ain't funny, its tragic but I just thought I'd slip it in
How this bitch came out of hiding..now thats what I'm giving him
^^hehe
N' you won't gain any acknowledgment with that hypothetical shit
Coz the only attention you'll be leaving with.... is medical, bitch
So I know wording isnt my strength, but watch me beat your intent
And thanks, coz for once, my lines will look a decent length
^^lol
So you'll be ripped by the boss, I don't wanna speak to this toff
coz me and Meters exchanged words.. and I'm still feeling ripped off
^^haha
vs.
as for me, I’m more than a bomb threat, I explode, whore and conquest
‘n the last time I heard you rapping, you were at my door for concepts
^^lol
So you’re a five-year amateur, inexpert, nobody..faggot, when you leaving?
yea I’m known for propounding, and got nothin’ to add when you’re speaking
^^hehe
fam consists of you, wifey, and a baby girl...must be a lotta knitting n quiet shit
just don’t be shocked when ya home gets broken in
.. with nothing but bitches inside of it
See, there ain’t no crumbs for dividing...play your part and quit the crying
Yeah bitch, you’re state of the art…everyone knows that hip hops dying
‘n you no-showed me in RBL.but I don’t go diggin links, this hoax is finished
cuz Coms the talk of the town, ‘n I got them speaking broken English
aspirin one was forced as hell. Some of the others, like the frost bite one were creative, but the long-winded, jumbled wording, hurt you.
NICE battle, but
v/Com
thanks for the feed, it helps me get back on track. nice com, i have some ideas but you write a crisp punchline. now we're 2-2 i think. good verse, pz
cheers mate... and just to clear things up I have a son not a daughter.. I think you got me mixed up with $pit..
nice start to your comeback though,,
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Vote Com even thought its over already
Meters.. You suprised me. I was feeling your verse alot.. i just think the wording could have been a little better. Other than that you came with a solid verse. But against Com... solid isnt enough.
Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
ArtificialIntelligence
AI
You're still an ugly ass fat prick, and I'ma hit the target this time
You could take this bitch at face value and they'd only charge you a dime
So bitch you better come with it..who you think you gon rumble with?
Coz the winner takes all.. meters throws at him and crushes it
lol, cool.
And this shit ain't funny, its tragic but I just thought I'd slip it in
How this bitch came out of hiding..now thats what I'm giving him
nice.
N' you won't gain any acknowledgment with that hypothetical shit
Coz the only attention you'll be leaving with.... is medical, bitch
Don't try and get me riled. you fell off hard you're lines are plain
N' you can research all you want but you'll NEVER find your prime again
haha ..w00t
So I know wording isnt my strength, but watch me beat your intent
And thanks, coz for once, my lines will look a decent length
So you'll be ripped by the boss, I don't wanna speak to this toff
coz me and Meters exchanged words.. and I'm still feeling ripped off
LMFAO!
all this shit here was nice as fuck. the ripped off line and hide ones were dope.
vs.
claimin’ strong vet since diamond minds, creation, ‘n deja.. but all the while
I thought what the fuck, dudes been Second Coming since gauntlet finals
haha ..nice
I hold your life in my reigns, because ya soft and run from the fighting
Cuz I got ice in my veins, you only frost ‘till we numb from the biting
See, there ain’t no crumbs for dividing...play your part and quit the crying
Yeah bitch, you’re state of the art…everyone knows that hip hops dying
LMFAO
so now no one recalls it..shits appalling..you changed Metres, I’ll tell you that
that’s why I changed the RE to ER, to commemorate where I left you at
‘n you no-showed me in RBL.but I don’t go diggin links, this hoax is finished
cuz Coms the talk of the town, ‘n I got them speaking broken English
nice.
that RE - ER punch and the hiphop was dying one ..omfg, lol.
very good battle ..enjoyed both verses, shit was tiight. COM had a lot more impact with his lines for me though, way more consistant. some of meters lines were a bit forced and could've been better ..but the battle was still dope.
nice battle ..
v. COM
damn meters is back... he had alot of creative
ish in there. Decent wording, nice punches. WOOT WOOT
we finally got another battle going up in the top battles
of the season section. And in my view meters has opened himself
up as a new old powerhouse, lol
Com nice verse. You're finally back at your top I feel like. It's going
to take a champion just to dethrone you. I can tell. Beautiful battle
guys. Admittedly I can't vote. I read more for the enjoyment... I'll
break it down later. Oh yeah, Com - I purchased it all - postmarked
for Monday. It said 5-7 business days. So I'm thinking maybe by Friday.
Sorry I took so long..
v/ nice battle
Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
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