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    eat'em up

    Chea no more mr nice guy, like jadakiss , kiss the game goodbye
    I've had it up to here, six feet, with a record full of lies
    so i'm typing on these keys, to give, you the truth guys
    I can throw it at you two ways, like a , guy who is bi
    But touching the mic is the only time, that I'll, grab a black pipe
    And the shoe section is the only time ,that I'll, touch a white mike
    Mongoose is the only time, that I'll, pull tricks in daylight
    And television is the only time, that i'll, watch a good fight
    Cops ain't a tv show to me ,cuz i, witness the real thing
    All souutherns don't buy grills, we just, make it another dream
    This isn't a song don't get it confused, i'm just, stating the obvious dang
    That's about as true of the stereotype, all blacks, smoke and gangbang
    It's a new generation for our era, and umm, new type of creature
    Nope it's the rebirth of the eightes, cuz uh, just stay featured
    No more room for improvement, just renaissances, oh yeah technology
    No computer skills then cancel your dream , of getting, your college degree
    I'm a real emcee cuz I devour the beat/ I'm like a pastor I just need a few hours to speak/I'm a shark mufucka and reality bites/My lyrics come to my mind so i barely write (Lil' Flip)

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    Errm i don't like this punchline orientatd type verse, a personal dislike unless it's done really well and has clever lines,

    so i'm typing on these keys, to give, you the truth guys
    I can throw it at you two ways, like a , guy who is bi
    ^
    No...seriously

    This verse didn nothing in terms of informing the reader of anything they haven't read before, didn't hold interest cos the topic was pretty crap
    Try and write to a topic rather than random punchlines that dont punch
    Keep at it
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