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    Vinyl Fantasy

    VINYL FANTASY





    drums
    ignore my attempts to become one
    so i stand outside the sun
    and hide in black
    hide
    in
    black
    dance in the flames of
    black
    melting and seeping into vinyl cracks
    needle contacts
    spinning on wax
    wheels of steel
    locomotive on tracks
    traveling across my back to soothe
    laying in grooves of dusty crackles
    busting shackles in my brain
    the scales of my skin
    drawing sketches of spain
    still i'm
    kind of blue,
    cause spinning motions
    of locomotions and emotions
    got me trapped
    in the mind of you
    spinning motions
    of emotions
    and deep oceans, skies and seas
    all
    kind of blue
    just
    like me
    the drums surround and pound
    attempting to drown
    they forget i'm their brother
    they used to be my sisters
    sisters,
    in a past life we were lovers
    lovers became mothers
    mothers became generations
    generations became nations
    nations became planets
    planets became galaxies
    galaxies became infinity
    became infinity
    BECOME INFINITY
    all
    from
    within
    me
    i am the
    father of infinity
    spinning around
    needle tattooing my skin with sound
    the father of infinity
    name etched in eternity
    proud as a fool
    wept to witness
    the birth
    and rebirth of cool
    rebirth
    of
    reborn lover and mother of drums
    once again
    begun orbiting the sun
    as her son
    woven through black is spun
    becoming one
    becoming one
    becomes infinity
    infinity
    whose only song is
    one
    whose only song is
    one
    whose only song is
    done


    Last edited by LedgenZ; September 6th, 2006 at 10:47 AM

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    LINKS:


    My Life Cracked the Nutshell -By Jonathan
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=308037

    The Fault In Stacking Flat-lines - By Mindless
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=307938

    Heart String Noose - By Black Lizzard
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=306407

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    this was a nice fuckin drop..very creaitve i havent seen something like this..i dont think ever..the pic was a bit big lol..the huge ass writing wasnt very nice looking...the strutre was actually bad...but at the same time very creaitve which made it good..i didnt think i was gonna enjoy this but i did once i started to read it..flow was nice..it came together well...multies were meh..prolly your weakest aspect on this drop..i was feelin the emotion on this i must say...this was real good i think maybe even hof good..i might even nominate it..feed on a drop in my sig if u could..peace..
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    Hmm. I dont really know what to say about this. This has more of a poetic vibe to it. It was straight. I dont like some set-ups you had in this but other than that i dont have much to say. No hate dude.

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