Guitar/bass Beat - Heavy. Verse/chorus Structure

[Paze]

Check it out.
Took about 6-7 hours to make in total.
The bass is a sample but I tried to make the rest from scratch. The guitar is heavy.

Let me know what you think
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[Phate]

funky bass line. drumline is aight. feels a bit empty until the guitar comes in. guitar sounds a bit weird until the additional guitar comes in and the drums change. I wouldn't have the cymbal crash on every hit but it does sound cool just cause it's different. It would be nice if you had an instrument line, like maybe some simple piano chords, that followed the bass line. Just to allow for more variation in the sequencing.

Keep at it.

[CUTTA]

That bassline is killa homie

[Paze]

The bassline was made from a sample. I cut it though because the original never sounded right. So I sequenced the actual pass notes myself.

Thanks for comments