Drowning In Reflection - End Plague

['Redic']

Drowning In Reflection

Every street in this world has a story to tell
tales of lonely walking hearts could be heard
with the art of keeping mutiple personality skill
some just pretend to beat while being dead

hoping for being in love after one night stand
speaking from tears to make someone understand
trusting strangers more than ones you call your own
and then feeling sorry for love which is far too gone

breathing in a society where relations are so strange
existence of love goes for a toss in the name of blame
every single soul has a fear of something in mind
every inch of that mind is pretending to be so blind

taking chances after falling in love at the first sight
then cursing fate for taking away love overnight
every painfully ended tale has an excuse to restart
then drowning in reflection when the mirror is torn apart

and life just carries on without ever looking at back
hands of time keeps on crawling without giving a care
hearts keep breaking as love keeps drifting away
but the hope still stand tall along with our own fear

['Redic']

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[Soule]

Great peice,

The wordplay was increible and the flow went well and flowed through the whole peice. The creativty like many peices I read now days was wonderful and the imagenary was great. I liekd the emotions that was just pouring out of this peice. It was incredible. 10-10. Check this out in the HoF Nominations.

['Redic']

thanks man, honestly, thanks alot...uppin

[Black®]

This was a pretty good piece, it had a lot of description and detail into it, very good vocabulary and it flowed well. The topic was good and it had a good storyline, everything was put together well and it was just real good altogether. Keep it up, your doin good man.

[Soule]

No problem. if possible leave feedback on I Am.

['Redic']

word, thanks ppl..

['Redic']

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