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yup i'm in
Heard about the guy who fell off a skyscraper?
On his way down past each floor,he kept saying to reassure himself
So far so good.....
So far so good.....
So far so good.....
But how you fall doesn't matter
Its how you land
Do I smell A biter.....
I'm the talk of the site, and you just a late side note,
Shit,you got exposed and made you the Great White Hope,
I'm due to boast as the host, you're a phony contestant
Try to gleam like crymzon blood in your only profession
Whats this bitch gonna do next?hmmm I guess it depends
Will he bite from RV or be stupid enough to bite from the Ledgends
You never had a chance in this fuckin rap game,just like abortion
Because fronting like your rhymes are sick is lying extortion,
You are a wreck your ryhmes are fake filled with misery
Try to defend yourself?ha just look at your fuckin history
Fall please cause you don't have the guts to stand with all these
Play what you're dealt;you're hand'll get smoked,call 'em 'palm trees
Heard about the guy who fell off a skyscraper?
On his way down past each floor,he kept saying to reassure himself
So far so good.....
So far so good.....
So far so good.....
But how you fall doesn't matter
Its how you land
Do I Smell A Dq.
Kid talks tons of shit but hes wack, he goin i body bags n hearses
Cuz if I wanted some shit outta u, i'd just squeez your verses
Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what i wish you'd do
this kid had high hopes of success but now its all done
fag thouht his career soared, until I cut em' with one
Kid you seem gay rb dont like you, So now we fight
And yea i'd drop & sun your life, but u cant drop bright
Kid I Know I Pwn you all the time but its startin to not be fun
Cuz yo punches creek cuz thats where they come from
I'm the talk of the site, and you just a late side note,
Shit,you got exposed and made you the Great White Hope,
^NO
I'm due to boast as the host, you're a phony contestant
Try to gleam like crymzon blood in your only profession
^no lol
Whats this bitch gonna do next?hmmm I guess it depends
Will he bite from RV or be stupid enough to bite from the Ledgends
^basic but aight
You never had a chance in this fuckin rap game,just like abortion
Because fronting like your rhymes are sick is lying extortion,
^nope
You are a wreck your ryhmes are fake filled with misery
Try to defend yourself?ha just look at your fuckin history
^nope
Fall please cause you don't have the guts to stand with all these
Play what you're dealt;you're hand'll get smoked,call 'em 'palm trees
^no
lmao i know you were jus mucking round but that sucked that verse was way tooooo basic you could put some complexity intoy our rhymes
VS.
Kid talks tons of shit but hes wack, he goin i body bags n hearses
Cuz if I wanted some shit outta u, i'd just squeez your verses
^played
Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what i wish you'd do
^gay
this kid had high hopes of success but now its all done
fag thouht his career soared, until I cut em' with one
^meh
Kid you seem gay rb dont like you, So now we fight
And yea i'd drop & sun your life, but u cant drop bright
^played ive used that conceot jus different wording...
Kid I Know I Pwn you all the time but its startin to not be fun
Cuz yo punches creek cuz thats where they come from
^doesent rhyme
wtf that was a weak verse you came super played/ weak elevate son
on the real evin that DLY wasnt tying he oviously too this for noy coming played like mal jeeze does all your bars have to be played both of you read tha LLL and work on Better concepts, mal you definitly neda some fresh your sooo unoriginal
V.DYL
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
no one had the nice punches in this battle... but dyl at least could flow decent, and had personals.. Skandalouz on the other hand.. had some bars that didnt even rhyme and didnt have as many personals
v - dyl
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Dyl
I'm the talk of the site, and you just a late side note,
Shit,you got exposed and made you the Great White Hope,
Meh.
I'm due to boast as the host, you're a phony contestant
Try to gleam like crymzon blood in your only profession
ummm meh
Whats this bitch gonna do next?hmmm I guess it depends
Will he bite from RV or be stupid enough to bite from the Ledgends
You never had a chance in this fuckin rap game,just like abortion
Because fronting like your rhymes are sick is lying extortion,
You are a wreck your ryhmes are fake filled with misery
Try to defend yourself?ha just look at your fuckin history
Fall please cause you don't have the guts to stand with all these
Play what you're dealt;you're hand'll get smoked,call 'em 'palm trees
Meh
Skandalouz
Kid talks tons of shit but hes wack, he goin i body bags n hearses
Cuz if I wanted some shit outta u, i'd just squeez your verses
iigght
Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what i wish you'd do
ahahh hell no!
this kid had high hopes of success but now its all done
fag thouht his career soared, until I cut em' with one
Kid you seem gay rb dont like you, So now we fight
And yea i'd drop & sun your life, but u cant drop bright
wow..no
Kid I Know I Pwn you all the time but its startin to not be fun
Cuz yo punches creek cuz thats where they come from
weak clser
ummm damn this battle sucked but Id have to go with....
Skandalouz at least his opener was IIGHT..
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KarosiveissosickKarosiveissosickKarosiveissosick
I Stay Higha Than Tha Birds.
Yea your a vet and all with your 123,000 posts but um really....
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I'm the talk of the site, and you just a late side note,
Shit,you got exposed and made you the Great White Hope,
meh, could've been doper but i see what you were doing.
vs.
this kid had high hopes of success but now its all done
fag thouht his career soared, until I cut em' with one
^this is played wordplay but the only thing worth quoting.
Dyl - your problem is good concepts, you've got a lot of played and shitty concepts then to top it off your wording just kills them. keep working.
Mal - your problem here was concepts as well. you been using a lot of played shit lately. and you use the concepts with only creativity and you have no stinging impact on the opponent. i suggest you keep working.
v. Dyl, just thought he came off a bit nicer.
Whats this bitch gonna do next?hmmm I guess it depends
Will he bite from RV or be stupid enough to bite from the Ledgends
vs.
this kid had high hopes of success but now its all done
fag thouht his career soared, until I cut em' with one
Blah, this battle was terrible, no real good punches from either side. =/. You could both due with coming with newer more fresh concepts and a bit of rewording. Not only that but your verses could use some more solidity to it's punches. No hate to either mc, I can tell you two can drop better, but this battle...blah.
v/Dyl for having the stronger punch of the battle...
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I'm the talk of the site, and you just a late side note,
Shit,you got exposed and made you the Great White Hope,
Nope
I'm due to boast as the host, you're a phony contestant
Try to gleam like crymzon blood in your only profession
Weak
Whats this bitch gonna do next?hmmm I guess it depends
Will he bite from RV or be stupid enough to bite from the Ledgends
Statement
You never had a chance in this fuckin rap game,just like abortion
Because fronting like your rhymes are sick is lying extortion,
Weak
You are a wreck your ryhmes are fake filled with misery
Try to defend yourself?ha just look at your fuckin history
Statement
Fall please cause you don't have the guts to stand with all these
Play what you're dealt;you're hand'll get smoked,call 'em 'palm trees
Weak
vs
Kid talks tons of shit but hes wack, he goin i body bags n hearses
Cuz if I wanted some shit outta u, i'd just squeez your verses
Ok
Your wack son, so put on yo shoes and run, your career is through
But Fuck That shoe, thats just what i wish you'd do
Nah
this kid had high hopes of success but now its all done
fag thouht his career soared, until I cut em' with one
Weak
Kid you seem gay rb dont like you, So now we fight
And yea i'd drop & sun your life, but u cant drop bright
Nah
Kid I Know I Pwn you all the time but its startin to not be fun
Cuz yo punches creek cuz thats where they come from
Weak
v-Skan
this battle was super weak IMO both of you had gay/played lines especially you malishous you had so many played lines you have been coming super played lately, you neda work on getting fresher i would advise you to read the LLL but you'll probably bite them and Dly haha your verse was also gay but atleast you didnt come as played work on better worded stronger disses, DLy wins for not coming as gay
V.DYL
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