Skandalouz Vs. Gho$t

[Freeney]

you bite rhymes its true, when we found that out, this bitch really tossed,
n' son i dont have to jam your head in a scanner... to make you Skandalozz.
your a boob kid, a straight loser, im whoring your pride in massive ammounts,
malishous loves! masterbating rappers so much, hes taken to jacking accounts.

vs

nothing honestly

This battle wasnt very good but ghost writer had the fresher concepts and ideas while skandoloz came very played and more or less made statements about his oppenent than throwing a punch or personal....the wording was off in both of your verses and both had a decent flow to them. Ghost you will elevate and work on your wording as you continue through the LLL and skandoloz you can improve your work by reading LLL battles and top FL battles.

vote=ghostwriter

[De~Press]

Breakdown....

Ghost your verse was aiight it flowed well your lines were a lil strecthed or syllables fucked it up in some places...your punches were there some hit but not all they were basic most of them....overall ok verse 6/10
Skand your verse aiight to it flowed well and wasnt strecthed which made it easier to read....i could see all your punches almost everyone hit, yours definately hit harder than his....overall better verse....8/10

Vote//Skan.

[Kontroverzy™]

ewww lmfao ok

Skandolous

Your verse was better due to better structure and Better wording. Your shit was ok. the punches werent that good. but they were ok. Your flow was decent. Your personals. noit really any but

your best line:
Kids always been wack, throw dope punches is somethin he'l never do
so i can always chill knowing, that if i fall off i can land on you


Ghost:

that structure is booty. and your wording is wack...the shit just didnt connect yo. its all good ull improve. but yeah your flow was OK. your punches were Blah, this was below average verse and none of ur shit rhymed

best line:
your a boob kid, a straight loser, im whoring your pride in massive ammounts,
malishous loves! masterbating rappers so much, hes taken to jacking accounts.







rtf
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=305189

[Kontroverzy™]

v/ Skandolouz by the way................

[Lawd]

you bite rhymes its true, when we found that out, this bitch really tossed,
n' son i dont have to jam your head in a scanner... to make you Skandalozz.
no
your a boob kid, a straight loser, im whoring your pride in massive ammounts,
malishous loves! masterbating rappers so much, hes taken to jacking accounts.
o.k
you ghost for $pit? shit no.... your RB's Clown, Fool,
fuck it watchin' the matrix's, the s'only time you oracle.
meh wordplay
mal's a poser, fuck you know 'bout hip hop son, you'll never be a cool G,
shit evin i'ld go out with you to paint the town red... with your dead body.
no
your the kind of faggot thay see dudes with dudes an' gets jelious,
son im known to commit some bad sins... but nobody cares who malice.
kind of a stretch for wordplay



Kid we all know you suck ass, your careers gone hopeless
And yea your a ghost, s'why your shits never noticed
o.k personal
Here on da net we judge niggaz by they skill, money, and bitches
But if Verses equal money then your shits gon centsless
o.k
kid your wack we all know it just take this L wit no greevin
But People like your is wat i buy, cuz im glad when your leavin
liked it
Kids always been wack, throw dope punches is somethin he'l never do
so i can always chill knowing, that if i fall off i can land on you
o.k
Niggaz in jail are eager for pussy, but u cant drop a decent bar
I mean c'mon we put ghost behind bars and he still aint cum hard
meh

v/Skandalouz for more consistency

[Mistral]

Ghost Wins. Skandalouz is banned